红皮delta上的作文~ 请大家帮忙看看~谢谢！

jellyjarUID: 2678885

上次经各位修改注意减少了长句的数目，我是定时写的，还是觉得结尾段来不及写


题目：It's the government's responsibility to provide health care for everyone in the nation. Do you agree or disagree?

提纲：同意 1. 对老百姓：节省经济负担，应为医药费很贵
                   2. 对医院：更好履行职责，因为医生职业有保障了，医院的不良行为也会得到遏制
                   3. 对政府：得到拥护，老百姓积极参与社会建设

At the beginning of this year, the local government promoted the medical insurance to each citizen, and even those living in the remote mountainous areas expressed their satisfactory about the new policy. Recently, some netizens have put forward their suggestion one after another that the government afford the health care for each citizen. As far as I am concerned, it is the responsibility of the government to offer medical care since it will benefit the citizens, the hospitals as well as the government.

First of all, this policy can relieve the financial pressure of the citizens. The price of medical service along with medicine is soaring nowadays beyond the ability of many families from middle-class. The doctors must get highly repaid on the patients for their considerable education investment, preventing a lot of people from medical care. For instance, my grandma even fails to afford the medical care with the limited pension and refuses to go to hospitals even if it is serious sometimes. However, if the government takes on the medical care for us, our financial stressed will be reduced and people with lower income are able to get treated in time.

Secondly, this policy can promote the hospitals to function better to benefit the public. On the one hand, the doctors need not worry about losing jobs any longer because they are supported by the government. Thus, they will focus on improving their skills of curing diseases rather than getting part-time jobs in small clinics as they do today. On the other hand, the government’s interference with the health care industry will also eliminated many existing problems with it. For example, the government can regulate the behavior of the hospitals to avoid their getting bribed from the medicine producers.

Last but not least, the government can gain more support from their citizens by carrying out the policy. The patients from all walks of life get cured for free and the medical staff gets more stable occupations. Of course they will attribute the welfare to the government and undoubtedly devote themselves more to their jobs. What’s more, the enforcement of the policy according to public voice can lead to more people to discuss public issues, reflect their wills and offer wise advice, since they realize their proposals are paid attention to by the authorities. As a result, the society becomes more united and in return brings vigor and creativity to the construction of the nation in every aspect.

jellyjarUID: 2678885

来个人批我把！谢谢啦！随便说啥都行