ISSUE88 [勇往直前小组]第三次作业 by strontium023

strontium023UID：2316968

88"Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics."



In this issue the writer claims that technologies influence social customs and ethics,even determine them.I agree with the front half.We won't deny that technologies influece social customs and ethics,but it not the only factorm,so we can not consider that technologies can determine them.

There is no doubt that technologies have deeply effet on social customs and ethics.As technologies continue improving,our lifestyle has being changed.Once we accept a new way to live,we will not do everyting as before.Therefore it changed our life day by day,meanwhile turn a traditional customs into a new one.For example,write letter is a traditional customs for communication,but people use it less and less when the telephone is more and more popularization.While the mobile phone is extending,make telephone was taken place.And now as the internet,a cheaper and faster communication way,has spread all over the world,more and more people has been changing their way.
However,technologies is not the only factor to affect scocial customs and ethlics,so whatever it changed,it can't determine them.Take tranditional culture for example,it also can affect the social customs and ethics.Sometimes considering the tranditional culture as our background,it always determine a standard of our actions.There are many country,such as Scotland India and Korea,reserve their own national apparel,especially wearing it when they meet some special day like marrige holiday or ceremony.Although technologies bring them better clothes,the apparel reserved is the symbol of a nation,it always means someting,therefore it won't be instead of.

Another small customs can prove that even if the technology developing highly,some ethics will never changed. Majority people would agree that come home and enjoy our family time is one of the best things in our life.Regardless of the attractive things outside which create by the new technologies day by day.

All in all,technologies serves people's life,but not determine social customs and ethics,there are some other fators influece them .Some of the customs and ethics would not be changed.After all,whether the customs and ethics change are determined by people.





203、"The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its heroines."
1、英雄代表着一个社会崇尚的一种标准。
2、一个社会最基本的是由普通人组成的。所以要考察一个社会最好的方法是考察代表不同普通人的特点。

183、"As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious."
1、越学习将获得越来越多的知识。
2、但越学习会遇到越来越多的问题。
3、所以学无止境，越学越多，越学问题越多，问题越多学问就越多。

112、"Some educational systems emphasize the development of students' capacity for reasoning and logical thinking, but students would benefit more from an education that also taught them to explore their own emotions."
1、教育是修正人们理念的过程。
2、然而教育是辨证的，在受教育的过程中，通过人们的思考，人们会反过来修正教育。

30、"The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time."
1、技术进步的目标之一是获得高的效率。确实通过一、二、三次科技革命，解放了生产力。
2、但人们却不一定获得了更多的闲暇时间。时代对人们的要求越来越高了，所以人们又有了新的目标和新的生活。

[ 本帖最后由 strontium023 于 2007-7-23 02:13 编辑 ]

neycUID：2366606

88"Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics."



In this issue the writer claims that technologies influence social customs and ethics,even determine them.I agree with the front half.We won't deny that technologies influece social customs and ethics,but it not the only factorm,so we can not consider that technologies can determine them.（再精简下语言哦）

There is no doubt that technologies have deeply effet on social customs and ethics.As technologies continue improving,our lifestyle has being changed.Once we accept a new way to live,we will not do everyting as before.Therefore it changed our life day by day,meanwhile turn a traditional customs into a new one.For example,writeing letter is a traditional customs for communication,but people use it less and less when the telephone is more and more popularization（popular?).While the mobile phone is extending,make telephone was taken place(这个句子好像有点问题）.And now as the internet,a cheaper and faster communication way,has spread all over the world,more and more people has been changing their way.（因为只有这一段是说肯定观点的，所以最好不要仅限于communication,再扩展一点点更好一些）
However,technologies is not the only factor to affect scocial customs and ethlics,so whatever it changed,it can't determine them.Take tranditional culture for example,it also can affect the social customs and ethics.Sometimes considering the tranditional culture as our background,it always determine a standard of our actions.There are many country（countries）,such as Scotland India and Korea,reserve their own national apparel,especially wearing it when they meet some special day like marrige holiday or ceremony.Although technologies bring them better clothes,the apparel reserved is the symbol of a nation,it always means someting,therefore it won't be instead of.（论点很好，论据也贴切）

Another small customs can prove that even if the technology developing highly,some ethics will never changed（这话前后好像有点不搭，呵呵）. Majority people would agree that comeing home and enjoying our family time is one of the best things in our life.Regardless of the attractive things outside which create by the new technologies day by day.(很好的论据，但是分论点还是要再点出：就是科技的进步有时候确实不会影响某些社会习俗和道德标准）

All in all,technologies serves people's life,but not determine social customs and ethics,there are some other fators influece them .Some of the customs and ethics would not be changed.After all,whether the customs and ethics change are determined by people.


字数有点少，所以可能就导致论证不是那么深刻，还要继续加油向上码字数哦，大家一起加油~

linshaoUID：2338229

In this issue the writer claims that technologies influence social customs and ethics, even determine them. I agree with the front half. We won't deny that technologies influence social customs and ethics, but it is not the only factor, so we can not consider that technologies can determine them.(好像有点牵强啊,难道只有only factor才能决定吗？有点逻辑错误)

There is no doubt that technologies have deeply effect on social customs and ethics. As technologies continue improving, our lifestyle has being changed. Once we accept a new way to live, we will not do everything as before. （这句话感觉意思不好，not do everything as before那customs and ethics算不算before啊）Therefore it changed our life day by day, meanwhile turn a traditional  customs into a new one. For example, write letter is a traditional customs for communication, but people use it less and less when the telephone is more and more popularization. While the mobile phone is extending, make telephone was taken place（好像没什么道理啊，现在不是家家都有固定电话码？）. And now as the internet, a cheaper and faster communication way, has spread all over the world, more and more people has been changing their way.

However, technologies is not the only factor to affect social customs and ethics, so whatever it changed, it can't determine them. Take traditional culture for example, it also can affect the social customs and ethics. Sometimes considering the traditional culture as our background, it always determine a standard of our actions. There are many country, such as Scotland India and Korea, reserve their own national apparel, especially wearing it when they meet some special day like marriage holiday or ceremony.（这个例子挺好的，有新意）Although technologies bring them better clothes, the apparel reserved is the symbol of a nation, it always means something, therefore it won't be instead of.

Another small customs can prove that even if the technology developing highly, some ethics will never changed. Majority people would agree that come home and enjoy our family time is one of the best things in our life. Regardless of the attractive things outside which create by the new technologies day by day.（感觉这个例子和technology关系不大）
All in all, technologies serves people's life, but not determine social customs and ethics, there are some other factors influence them .Some of the customs and ethics would not be changed. After all, whether the customs and ethics change are determined by people.

注意拼写！
总的来说语言还需要锤炼。

[ 本帖最后由 linshao 于 2007-7-23 19:20 编辑 ]