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发表于 2007-7-28 12:29:19 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
In this argument,the arguer concludes that dentists should target the male consumer according to statistics collected from dentists proving men are more likely to be distressed about having dental work done than women are.Actually,there is some flaws in logical.
Firstly,the arguer doesn't prove the preciseness of the statistics form the dentists.How large is the statistcs?Does it contain all the patients?Does it collect all over the dentists? Neither these question is mentioned in this argument,so the statistcs is inconvincing.
Moreover,even three times more men than women faint while visiting the dentist,it still can not prove that men are more likely to be distressed about having dental work done than women are.It is possible that women are distressed about having dental work ,but they put out the bad feeling though shouting and crying.In some degree,it may release the nervous of the patients,so the women patient will not faint so easily.
Finally,when a patient have dental work,the most techniques they paid attention will be the techniques in curing,not only the anesthetic techniques as the passage states.And although the dentists are sensitivity nervous or suffering patients,that is not enough.More patience and carefulness are needed for a dentist.
Therefore, the argument should bring more envidence to support the claim that men are more likely to be distressed about having dental work done than women are.Thorough proofs may be showed to what the urge need of the patient.



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1、老年人数量增多不代表老年听众的数量增多了。
2、老年人也不一定更爱新闻节目。
3、录制音乐的销量下降不意味着人们不想从收音机里听摇滚
4、他人的成功不代表我的。
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1、观察和采访都有限制的。采访的话他们说的话可靠吗?他们具有代表性吗?
2、20年前的事和现在可比吗?
3、仅凭谈话时间一点不能判断谁抚养的。还有很多其他特点。
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1、宵禁时间内犯罪率下降,其他时间增高了呢?
2、青少年犯罪率下降,成人呢?
3、W市政广场没被上报不意味着没有,也不意味着别的地方没。
4、两边情况不一样。
5、保护不是从宵禁一个方面,还有教育等方面。
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1、奶牛农庄增加了25%,但人口可能增加超过了这个数。
2、价格上涨,可能是物价上涨很厉害。
3、限价不一定很充足的牛奶供应,农场主可能因为太低价而不愿意卖。

[ 本帖最后由 strontium023 于 2007-7-29 06:26 编辑 ]
这个暑假别样凉爽.......给自己一个全新的自己......
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