5.6月份 cracking ibt essay! 小组写作组 melody的 第6次作业

melody106UID：2559573

With the continuesly development of technology, computer and many other electronic products have become important parts of people's daily life. It is hard to imagine that how can we carry on our study and work withou the favor of technical support. Therefore, some people guess that the printed books will be abandoned in the next two decades. However, other people, me included, hold that it is not the  inevitable result. Because the printed book have its own valueable merits which could not be ignored by us.

Although everyone loves to take the advantage of the high-tech machine, the truth is not every family could afford the computer, MP3 and internet. All of these which seem normal in developed areas are still  luxuries in the eyes of the poor districts or some families, especially for students, the special social group which has no revenu resources. Considering the expense of the advanced technology, we could not predict that the traditional books will disappear right away, at least will not in the next twenty years.

In addition, our traditional books have many excellent characters outweigh that of the new comers. It is undeniable that even if the technology goes faster than ever before, the print of computers or other electronic products still do harm to people's viewsight, or even the whole body health. Many investigations have show that people who keep using computers up to 3 hours have more likelihood to be vulnerable to much deseases, cancers included. On the contrary, the printed books could be used without these problems, only if there is enough light and with a proper distance between the book and eyes.

Furthermore, the printed books have less limitations than the computers do. Students could read printed books in ourdoor without worring about the electricity, such as gardens, top of buildings while the advanced tools must be used under certain demanding conditions.

In conclusion, apon all the merits the printed books have, we could safely to say that,

写的还是太慢了，没写完。55555.里面拼错的词肯定不少。

lingyao1UID：2467525

1# melody106

With the continuesly(continuously)development of technology, computer and many other electronic products havebecome important parts of people's daily life. It is hard to imagine that howcan we carry on our study and work without(without)the favor of technical support. Therefore, some people guess that the printedbooks will be abandoned in the next two decades. However, other people, meincluded, hold that it is not the inevitable result(能否替换成推断结论conclusion). Because the printed book have(has) its(去掉) own valueable(valuable) merits which could not be ignored by us.

Although everyone loves to take the advantage of the high-tech machine,the truth(这个词在这个语境中有些不合适，比较不是所有的家庭都承担不起，我个人觉得用in fact做过度) is not every family couldafford the (cost of) computer, MP3 and internet.All of these which seem normal in developed areas are still luxuries inthe eyes of the poor districts or some families, especially for students, thespecial social group(special group/special group ofsociety) which has no revenu(revenue)resources(revenue常指国家税收、大型财政的巨额收入，如果学生这样的小收入群体income、earning应该不错). Considering the expenseof the advanced technology, we could not predict that the traditional bookswill disappear right away, at least will not in the next twenty years.

In addition, our traditional books have many excellent charactersoutweigh that of the new comers(+such as…). Itis undeniable that even if the technology goes faster than ever before, theprint of computers(电脑打印机:computer printer) or other electronic(digital) products still do harm to people's view sight,or even the whole body health. Many investigations have show that people whokeep using computers up to 3 hours have more likelihood to be vulnerable tomuch deseases(diseases), cancers included. Onthe contrary, the printed books could be used without these problems, only ifthere is enough light and with a proper distance between the book and eyes.


Furthermore, the printed books have less limitations than the computersdo. Students could read printed books in ourdoor(outdoor)without worring(worrying) about the electricity, such as gardens, top ofbuildings while(oppositely,) the advanced toolsmust be used under certain demanding conditions.


In conclusion, apon(upon) all the meritsthe printed books have, we could safely to say that，


本人能力有限只是在一些单词和简单语句上少有推荐。
我大多时候也写不完，但写完后可以稍作修改再贴上来。
第四段是可以不写节省你的时间来完成结尾和补充二、三段的疏漏。
致敬，鞠躬～
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