COMEON作文小组9.8号作业－yangkeli22

yangkeli22UID: 2360405

今天状态不好，而且题目本身觉得也不好写，没有思路，写得挺乱的，也没有什么逻辑性可言，感觉挺糟糕的……
From Dalwin's evolutionary theory, everyone in the universe get to know that human beings originate from animals. In other words, there are animal nature exists inside the man, therefore, study of animals help us to learn human nature.
Living in the world, the most important thing, for animals, is stay alive. For the quest of living, animals need to find food to survive. Like carnivore will prey harnivore for living while harnivore need to escape to live. Even in the same species, animals are strive for live and that is the orignate of competition. While, human also strive for live. For thousands of years, people struggle to have enough food to survive. But there still are some inhibitants who sustain hunger because of poverty, poor land and some other reason. In the history, there even have some cruel things happened that people eat other people who were dead or was dying, only to get living in the world. That reflects of animal's survive conscious in human beings.
Further more, when the animal become mature they will find mates for reproduction, to have new members of this species. Shortly speaking, human beings also have this kind of animal nature. When children grown into teenagers, their reproduction system become mature, they will try to find ways to attract the other genre's attention.Like in the nature, birds always use their beautiful feather or beautiful songs to attract the female. In the same way, mature adult will use their advantages to draw girls/boys attention for the building of the family in the future.You can say it is horman's function but you can not conceal the fact that it is animal's nature.
From the reasons given above, we can reasonalbe draw a conclusion that human's nature is the reflection of animal's characteristic, naturally, study animals help us to learn human nature much better.

qawsedUID: 2359935

From Dalwin's evolutionary theory, everyone in the universe get to know that human beings are originated from animals. In other words, there are animal nature exists inside the man, therefore, study of animals help us to learn human nature.
Living in the world, the most important thing, for animals, is to stay alive. For the quest of living, animals need to find food to survive. Like carnivore will prey harnivore for living while harnivore need to escape to live. 这句不错啊！Even in the same species, animals are strive for livie and that is the orignate of competition. While, human also strive for重复使用了，换一个吧，struggle to live. For thousands of years, people struggle to完了，和前面刚改的又重复了哦~我想不出来了。。。 have enough food to survive. But there still are some inhibitants who sustain hunger because of poverty, poor land and some other reason. In the history, there even have some cruel things happened that people eat other people who were dead or was dying, only to get living in the world. That reflects of animal's survive conscious in human beings这句什么意思？楼主解释下

Further more, when the animal become mature they will find mates for reproduction, to have new members of this species. Shortly speaking, human beings also have this kind of animal nature. When children grown into teenagers, their reproduction system become mature, they will try to find ways to attract the other genre's attention.Like in the nature, birds always use their beautiful feather or beautiful songs to attract the female. In the same way, mature adult will use their advantages to draw girls/boys attention for the building of the family in the future.You can say it is horman's function but you can not conceal the fact that it is animal's nature.
From the reasons given above, we can reasonalbe draw a conclusion that human's nature is the reflection of animal's characteristic, naturally, study animals help us to learn human nature much better.

楼主的观点和我的很像啊，我比较喜欢你在第三段的论述 值得我的学习和改进。总之写的不错的，如果时间充裕可以在中间段再多论证几句。

yangkeli22UID: 2360405

谢谢组长的鼓励和建议！在思路和例证方面我还得加强加强！
第二段最后一句是想说动物的求生本能得以在人类身上体现。说的不好，请指点指点:handshake

devilkinelevenUID: 2442869

严密的逻辑，因为动物范畴>人范畴，所以人的定义内涵包括所有的动物的定义内涵，所以动物的特征人必然也有，所以研究动物特征有用。

偶终于绕过来了:cool: