[天下无G]第一次作业

kitty_yyUID: 2292666

第一次写提纲，还请大家多多指教。谢谢~~~
(1.是开头，最后一条是总结句)

182
1.         Intelligence is an indispensable element to success, however, a individual who trusts only on it will be lead to danger in many cases.
2.         One can not work well or behave successful without intelligence, especilally in the scientific or artific sphere.
3.       In some cases, the intelligence is not enough. There should be patience and interest and others to assist.
4.         Without virtue of other forces such as justice, the power of intelligence may be dangerous. For example the war.
5.         An person who is intelligence as well as justice andhumanty will do good to the society. Such as Einstein.
6.         Summarily, to be a person who is advantageous to the society should take enough attention to other virtue instead of the intelligence only.

192
1.        A careful and cautious planning other than chances, which depends on many uncertain elements, will give birth to success.
2.        Planning carefully and take consider covering most of the possibilities before doing is nearly approach half of success.
3.        Chances do not come to the people who admire them but without preparation.
4.        Taking risks may be a way to success sometimes, but it always bases on a cautious plan.
5.        Be brave to take risk is necessary if an individual wants to success, however, the comprehensive planning is basic.  

206
1.       Thinking and taking actions are two steps of doing things, but they are not balance. Making an overall thinking is more important.
2.       Doing a thing without a blueprint in the brain is dangarous which is just like a man walking alone whose eyesight within only one meter.
3.       Think the possible consequence and look things in the right perspective will prevent an individual from rushing. The more one think, the less faults he will make.
4.       Think too much will delay the actions, even may miss the chances.
5.       To success, one had better think as many aspects as he can, and then, take actions and do not hesitate.

211
1.       Making decisions should consider both present conditions as well as future conditions. For further developing, furture condition is more important.
2.       Development is a long-playing game. Preparing for the future will develop for a lone time. Such as the building of the cities, or education of the children.
3.       Only careing for the present will lead to a limited decision, especially when it relates to the further development.
4.       But in some cases, present is the focus, which is so urgentthat can not be delayed.
5.       So overall consider is important, but when it is difficult to care for all the aspects, focus on the significant point is better.

212
1.       The worthy goal first should be a unharmful one to others and the country or the world, if not, any means is unjustifiable.
2.       If the means is not fair to others or harm the interest of the country even human, no matter how noble and worthy, it should be forbidden.
3.       Nowadays, some individuals or organizations use noble goals in order to chase interest for themselves.

225
1.       There are similarities between many things, but most of the time, it is better to think in one sphere alone.
2.       In many cases, things are so different that they can not be compared, such as the immobile computer program with the flexible art. Some things have their own system which has been modifed and altered many times.
3.       Comparing two things too much which are far from each other sometimes is harmful. For example, when writing a paper about science reserch, one keeps on thinking about the scenario of drama.
4.       In the case of the two things is similar, compare may become advantaged way to solve the problem.
5.       Summarily, before looking for the similarities between two things, comparing them first and give up on condition that they have too much different.

231
1.       Though keep on moderation is a good way to do a lot of things in order to preserve one’s power, great enthusiasm and fervor is indispensable when doing some kinds of work.
2.       In some spheres such as art and science, the endless spirit and strong enthusiasm is one of the essential elements the masters have.
3.       Without strong love of the work and spendless energy, it is difficult to success since lots of time is wasted and much spirit is squandered which is not focus on the point.
4.       Much too enthusiam may be harmful in respect that it will drive the person into weared out, even having no other things to reflesh.
5.       In some cases, it is unnecessary to spend the whole spirit on one thing.
6.       Whether it is good or necessary to intensely focus on one thing depends on the work and the conditions.

99
1.       Nowadays, the practical view is advisable other than idealistic one.
2.       Today the law, economy and other important systems of the world have been established for a long time, which is stable and difficult to change instead of altering. So the idealistic view is always difficult to come true.
3.       To be practical will slove the problem step by step, which is a realistic way.
4.       Although the ideal is still needed now, it should be analyzed into practical parts to impliment.

148
1.       Idealism is sometimes devorce from the reality, but without idealism, it is difficult for people to improve the world and go after a better society.
2.       Who admires idealism is the one can envisage the real and take actions to alter . They have ideal in their mind and have the confidence to change the reality. Maybe they would encounter many trouble which is the necessity on the way to the ideal.
3.       Without idealism, people will submit to the reality and have no confidence to do anything. They always think the world is like what it should be. They don’t know what to do and even don’t want to do.
4.       When the idealism is too far from the reality, the actions may become useless to make changes.
5.       So idealism will make the world better related to the reality.

186
1.       Nowadays, practicality is very important in that it is the direct impulse of the development, but less practical at present does not mean less value.
2.       The technique is one of the most practical things. A practical technique will make enormous contribution to the society.
3.       Something seems not practical just like philosophy and art is also valuable to improve people’s spirit and mind.
4.       Some scientific items are in the sphere which is not pratical now but have potential value to the human beings.
5.       Summarily, practicality is not the only criterion to value things, the benefit to the people or the society as well as the potential is important.

210
1.       Most people choose career which has a reference to good development in the future or a good life it will bring along.
2.       It is unavoidable as the quality of life is directly related to one’s career which is easy to gain money or not. And a comfortable or high quality life means a high social status and good education for children which are people’s mostly desire.
3.       Someone having the ability in philosophy or art maybe go to study economy becouse that to be a philosopher or an artist means running a risk of living poorly.
4.       Comparing with the old time when a philosopher or an artist is among the highest social status, it is clearly that nowadays sociaty drives people to chase money instead their interest.
5.       It is better for our society to do benefit to some kind of jobs which is good to the culture and the human, in order that more people could choose career based on their nature or interest.

236
1.       It is benifical to let the young people have enough confidence to conquer the difficult they are facing, but encourage them to believe that hard working will accomplish everything is undoubtedly harmful.
2.       To accomplish things, especially great things, demands not only hard working but also intelligence and chances.
3.       Sometimes giving up properly is better than keeping on working which is waste of time and spirit.
4.       But encourage young people working hard in moderation will inspire potentialities.
5.       The better way to lead the young people is to make them confident as well as sensible to know when to stop.

118
1.       The goal is always the destination of the endeavor, but during the progress, the harvest may be more.
2.       In many cases the goal is not achieved, but people receive a lot during the endeavor, just like
3.       Although the destination is arrived at last, neglect the progress will lose a lot of priceless experience. For example education and the diploma.
4.       An individual who only focuses on the progress and ignores the goal will squander lots of time and gain nothing for the discoveries during the way are to do benefit to the next goal.
5.       During the way to the destination, one may encounter a lot. It is advisable neither to ignore nor to stop.

216
1.  Some important creations or discoveries are accidentally encountered, but others had been searched for a long time before.
2.  The accidental discoveries such as Penicillin is not a general instance. Though it looks like discoved by chance, the scientist also make full endeavour.
3.  Some important creations such as the filament in the bulb are searched and tried for many times.
4.  So maybe we will meet some superise discoverise on the way to the destination, the real goal is mostly where we arrive.


105
1.       A country will always encounter the difficulties with foreign countries, but only whether it can solve domestic problems well demonstrates it’s real strength.
2.       To the government, stability in the counter means more spirit to face the challenges from overseas.
3.       To foreign counters, the counter’s strength is always showed by it’s economy and army, which can not be strong unless the domestic condition is stable.
4.       Toleration with many of the challenge from citizens will give the citizens a good impression that the government’s interest is mostly same with them and the governor will do good to them, as a result, they will appease their dissatisfactions.
5.      In order to strong the country, the government had better have more patience with the citizens and pay more attention to the development and other challenges.

[ 本帖最后由 kitty_yy 于 2007-1-20 16:31 编辑 ]

aileen0124UID: 2257395

你思考问题很全面，论证比较有说服力，但是提纲的思路不是太清晰（有很多点都是可以合并的），而且例子比较少，希望以后写提纲的时候多考虑一下可以举出的例子，还有下次作业希望把题目附上，在开头把你的观点写清楚，agree or disagree.....
182 agree
1.         Intelligence is an indispensable element to success, however, a individual who trusts only on it will be lead to danger in many cases.
2.         One can not work well or behave successful without intelligence, especilally in the scientific or artific sphere.
3.       In some cases,(the) intelligence is not enough. There should be patience and interest and others to assist.(hard work is also important)
4.         Without virtue of other forces such as justice, the power of intelligence may be dangerous. For example the war.(这个观点很好，赞）
5.         An person who is intelligence as well as justice andhumanty will do good to the society. Such as Einstein（.可以跟4合并，这样正面反面的例子都有了）
6.         Summarily, to be a person who is advantageous to the society should take enough attention to other virtue instead of the intelligence only.
总结一下，agree的观点，trust only intelligence is dangerous. 1 intelligence的重要性，不可或缺；2 other neccessary factors for success, patience, interest,hard work;3 justice&intelligence opsitiive example:Einstein, negative:war.4 summary

192
1.        A careful and cautious planning other than chances,（ which depends on many uncertain elements用来形容chances吗，感觉有点多余）, will give birth to success.
2.        Planning carefully and take consider covering most of the possibilities before doing is nearly approach half of success. (这句话不通顺.)
3.        Chances do not come to the people who admire them but  without preparation.
4.        Taking risks may be a way to success sometimes, but it always bases on a cautious plan.
5.        Be brave to take risk is necessary if an individual wants to success, （这个句子结构不好，改为It is necessary to .......)however, (the去掉） comprehensive planning is basic.  
总结一下，disagree的观点，前三点可以合并，都是讲cautious and planning 的重要性；再写5chances 不可或缺；最后4，两者的关系。
206
1.       Thinking and taking actions are two steps of doing things, but they are not balance（equal 好一点吧）. Making an overall thinking is more important.
2.       Doing a thing without a blueprint in the brain is dangarous which is just like a man walking alone whose eyesight within only one meter. （比喻不错！）
3.       Think the possible consequence and look things in the right perspective will prevent an individual from rushing. The more one think, the less faults he will make.
4.       Think too much will delay the actions, even may miss the chances.
5.       To success, one had better think as many aspects as he can, and then, take actions and do not hesitate.
总结一下，partially agree的观点，1，3thinking 的重要性及好处，2 not thingking的害处 4 特殊情况，take actions  to avoid delaying. 5总结
211
1.       Making decisions should consider both present conditions as well as future conditions. For further developing, furture condition is more important.
2.       Development is a long-playing game. Preparing for the future will develop for a lone time. Such as the building of the cities, or education of the children.
3.       Only careing for the present will lead to a limited decision, especially when it relates to the further development.
4.       But in some cases, present is the focus, which is so urgentthat can not be delayed.（这个句式不好，可以用when....)
5.       So overall consider is important, but when it is difficult to care for all the aspects, focus on the significant point is better.
本片结构不错哦，呵呵，partially agree 1,2 the importance of considering future conditions3 disadvantage of only focusing on present 4 sometimes present is also important
212
1.       The worthy goal first should be a（an）  unharmful one to others and the country or the world, if not, any means is unjustifiable.
2.       If the means is not fair to others or harm the interest of the country even human, no matter how noble and worthy, it should be forbidden.
3.       Nowadays, some individuals or organizations use noble goals in order to chase interest for themselves.（ 不太明白，根本题的关系）
总结一下，首先你的观点不是太明确，1论证worthly goal的标准，2 论证means的要求 3？我觉得这个题论证不太充分，例子也不太好展开，可以尝试从反面论证，反例比较多，是disagree的观点。
225
1.       There are similarities between many things, but most of the time, it is better to think in one sphere alone.
2.       In many cases, things are so different that they can not be compared, such as the immobile computer program with the flexible art. Some things have their own system which has been modifed and altered many times.
3.       Comparing two things too much which are far from each other sometimes is harmful. For example, when writing a paper about science reserch, one keeps on thinking about the scenario of drama.
4.       In the case of the two things is similar, compare may become advantaged way to solve the problem.
5.       Summarily, before looking for the similarities between two things, comparing them first and give up on condition that they have too much different.
总结，感觉不是太全面，只说了比较不同事物的害处和比较相似事物的好处，可以加上比较相似事物的害处就更全面了。
231
1.       Though keep on moderation is a good way to do a lot of things in order to preserve one’s power, great enthusiasm and fervor is indispensable when doing some kinds of work.
2.       In some spheres such as art and science, the endless spirit and strong enthusiasm is one of the essential elements the masters have.
3.       Without strong love of the work and spendless energy, it is difficult to success since lots of time is wasted and much spirit is squandered which is not focus on the point.
4.       Much too enthusiam may be harmful in respect that it will drive the person into weared out, even having no other things to reflesh.
5.       In some cases, it is unnecessary to spend the whole spirit on one thing.
6.       Whether it is good or necessary to intensely focus on one thing depends on the work and the conditions.
不错，但是这个题的重点成了写enthusiasm了，要改变一下说法，注意moderation是破题点。
99
1.       Nowadays, the practical view is advisable other than idealistic one.
2.       Today the law, economy and other important systems of the world have been established for a long time, which is stable and difficult to change instead of altering. So the idealistic view is always difficult to come true.
3.       To be practical will slove the problem step by step, which is a realistic way.
4.       Although the ideal is still needed now, it should be analyzed into practical parts to impliment.
呵呵，全面否定了idealistic，我觉得可以在后面展开写写idealistic的重要性，就比较全面了，例子也比较好举，增加人们的想象力，有时成为未来科研的方向(登月）。。。。
148
1.       Idealism is sometimes devorce from the reality, but without idealism, it is difficult for people to improve the world and go after a better society.
2.       Who admires idealism is the one can envisage the real and take actions to alter . They have ideal in their mind and have the confidence to change the reality. Maybe they would encounter many trouble which is the necessity on the way to the ideal.
3.       Without idealism, people will submit to the reality and have no confidence to do anything. They always think the world is like what it should be. They don’t know what to do and even don’t want to do.
4.       When the idealism is too far from the reality, the actions may become useless to make changes.
5.       So idealism will make the world better related to the reality.
好像有点跑题了。。。。前面写成了idealism的重要性，人家要求的是些可行性呢，：）
186
1.       Nowadays, practicality is very important in that it is the direct impulse of the development, but less practical at present does not mean less value.
2.       The technique is one of the most practical things. A practical technique will make enormous contribution to the society.
3.       Something seems not practical just like philosophy and art is also valuable to improve people’s spirit and mind.（这个例子不错！）
4.       Some scientific items are in the sphere which is not pratical now but have potential value to the human beings.
5.       Summarily, practicality is not the only criterion to value things, the benefit to the people or the society as well as the potential is important.
这篇结构不错，我喜欢~~~
210
1.       Most people choose career which has a reference to good development in the future or a good life it will bring along.
2.       It is unavoidable as the quality of life is directly related to one’s career which is easy to gain money or not. And a comfortable or high quality life means a high social status and good education for children which are people’s mostly desire.（good）
3.       Someone having the ability in philosophy or art maybe go to study economy becouse that to be a philosopher or an artist means running a risk of living poorly.
4.       Comparing with the old time when a philosopher or an artist is among the highest social status, it is clearly that nowadays sociaty drives people to chase money instead their interest.
5.       It is better for our society to do benefit to some kind of jobs which is good to the culture and the human, in order that more people could choose career based on their nature or interest.
感觉这篇思路比较乱，帮你整理一下吧，1、2承认现状，不可避免，3可作例子；4 现状的弊端，这个可以展开写，埋没人的才能；5 提出建议，我觉得可以加入一部分，这个社会中也有一部分人是根据自己的兴趣选择工作的
236
1.       It is benifical to let the young people have enough confidence to conquer the difficult they are facing, but encourage them to believe that hard working will accomplish everything is undoubtedly harmful.
2.       To accomplish things, especially great things, demands not only hard working but also intelligence and chances. （demands用的不好，require好一点吧，不过可以改成。。。。。。。are all impretant factors for your success)
3.       Sometimes giving up properly is better than keeping on working (加上something，充当后面定语从句的被修饰部分)which is waste of time and spirit.
4.       But encourage young people working hard in moderation will inspire potentialities.
5.       The better way to lead the young people is to make them confident as well as sensible to know when to stop.
good!正面反面都有提到，1观点；2，3反面；4正面；5总结
118
1.       The goal is always the destination of the endeavor, but during the progress, the harvest may be more.
2.       In many cases the goal is not achieved, but people receive a lot during the endeavor, just like
3.       Although the destination is arrived at last, neglect the progress will lose a lot of priceless experience. For example education and the diploma.（好例子）
4.       An individual who only focuses on the progress and ignores the goal will squander lots of time and gain nothing for the discoveries during the way are to do benefit to the next goal.
5.       During the way to the destination, one may encounter a lot. It is advisable neither to ignore nor to stop.
不错，很全面。
216
1.  Some important creations or discoveries are accidentally encountered, but others had been searched for a long time before.
2.  The accidental discoveries such as Penicillin is not a general instance. Though it looks like discoved by chance, the scientist also make full endeavour.
3.  Some important creations such as the filament in the bulb are searched and tried for many times.
4.  So maybe we will meet some superise discoverise on the way to the destination, the real goal is mostly where we arrive.
思路清晰！结构不错，越写越好了哦：)
105
1.       A country will always encounter the difficulties with foreign countries, but (only去掉） whether it can solve domestic problems well demonstrates it’s real strength.
2.       To the government, stability in the counter(??) means (加上they have)more spirit to face ( the去掉） challenges from overseas.
3.       To foreign counters, the counter’s strength is always showed by it’s economy and army, which can not be strong unless the domestic condition is stable.（2，3 可以合并，都是讲domestic stability的重要性）
4.       Toleration with many of the challenge from citizens will give the citizens a good impression that the government’s interest is mostly same with them and the governor will do good to them, as a result, they will appease their dissatisfactions.
5.      In order to strong the country, the government had better have more patience with the citizens and pay more attention to the development and other challenges.
通过了~~~

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