生如夏花小组--第4次作业(exploring outer space)之小马过河

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Topic: Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example, traveling to the Moon and to other planets). Other people disagree and think governments should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth. Which of these two opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

When I was a child, I was always fascinated by everything that described in science fictions, especially something that outer space related. Till now, I still remember the first time when I saw the fantastic movie, “Star War I” and the excited mood I had when enjoying it. As matured, I got to know something of outer space is not as true as that described in movie or fiction. However, I still hope our governments would spend as much money as possible exploring outer space for 3 reasons, as I will discuss as follows.

Primarily, there is no denying the fact that exploring outer space will enlarge our knowledge about cosmos. Therefore, if some new technology or skill were discovered based on experiments, spending money on research will finally feedback profits for us. In fact, new outer space technology such as space vegetables, space medicine and space therapy which have been already used and applied into our life, makes us feel more convenient and comfortable.

Again, because of the population boom in last 2 decades, we are now facing the problem that our resource happened to be in a shortage. Thus, it is reasonable for us find out an alternative or need to discover certain new resource to appease the situation. Fortunately, Scientists have found there are a great amount metal resource and a big quantity rare gas on planets such as on Mar, Moon, Jupiter and so on. By this mean, human being 's investing on exploring outer space seems to be not a bad idea.

At last, people all like to make friends, what could be cooler than make a friend with a creature that come from outer site? When we start to exploring the cosmos, it can possible be true. Meanwhile, if these outer space creatures were as friendly as to invite us visiting their home or planet, human-being could have the chance to travel out of the earth,which sounds really exciting.

In summary, I will support our government to spend money on exploring outer space, as much as possible. While we might not see its ‘great result in a short time, but in long-term, we will gain much more than we now spend on it. Well, I’m still waiting to see the scene that “ Star War” displayed in future~~~


口语：

Well, I would like to agree this statement. Firstly, I think, compared with an adult, a child needn’t to pay a lot of responsibilities. You can see that in childhood we can fight with each other whatever we like just because of unhappiness. On the second place, being a child sometimes means have a lot of funs, such as obtaining a big number of toys, much more new closes, and eating whatever we like, this only need us to require for our parents. In the end, I think that a child friend is the purest friend in your life. For this especially friendship, we say everything from heart without any ornament. So I cherish my childhood as the happiest time in my life.

[ 本帖最后由 ernest81888 于 2007-7-11 12:45 编辑 ]

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Topic: Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example, traveling to the Moon and to other planets). Other people disagree and think governments should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth. Which of these two opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

When I was a child, I was always fascinated by everything that described in science fictions, especially something that outer space related. Till now, I still remember the first time when I saw the fantastic movie, “Star War I” and the excited mood I had when enjoying it. As matured, I got to know something of outer space is not as true as that described in movie or fiction. However, I still hope our governments would spend as much money as possible exploring outer space for 3 reasons, as I will discuss as follows. 很好的开头，与观点一致且切入主题自然

Primarily, there is no denying the fact that exploring outer space will enlarge our knowledge about cosmos. Therefore, if some new technology or skill were discovered based on experiments, spending money on research will finally feedback profits for us. In fact, new outer space technology such as space vegetables, space medicine and space therapy which have been already used and applied into our life, makes us feel more convenient and comfortable.

Again, because of the population boom in last 2 decades, we are now facing the problem that our resource happened to be in a shortage. Thus, it is reasonable for us to find out an alternative or need to discover certain new resource to appease the situation. Fortunately, Scientists have found there are a great amount metal resource and a big quantity rare gas on planets such as on Mar, Moon, Jupiter and so on. By this mean, human being 's investing on exploring outer space seems to be not a bad idea.

At last, people all like to make friends, what could be cooler than make a friend with a creature that come from outer site? When we start to exploring the cosmos, it can possible be true. Meanwhile, if these outer space creatures were as friendly as to invite us visiting their home or planet, human-being could have the chance to travel out of the earth,which sounds really exciting.

In summary, I will support our government to spend money on exploring outer space, as much as possible. While we might not see its ‘great result in a short time, but in long-term, we will gain much more than we now spend on it. Well, I’m still waiting to see the scene that “ Star War” displayed in future~~~

总的说我觉得你作文很好，逻辑没的说，理由充分，结构也很好，语言也不错，几乎没什么要改的，就是问一下我标记的两个词组是不是地道的说法？我们可以短消息讨论

口语：

Well, I would like to agree this statement. Firstly, I think, compared with an adult, a child needn’t to pay a lot of responsibilities. You can see that in childhood we can fight with each other whatever we like just because of unhappiness. On the second place, being a child sometimes means have a lot of funs, such as obtaining a big number of toys, much more new closes, and eating whatever we like, this only need us to require for our parents. In the end, I think that a child friend is the purest friend in your life. For this especially friendship, we say everything from heart without any ornament. So I cherish my childhood as the happiest time in my life.

第一个理由的那句话有点读不明白