Issue147 第一次痛苦限时……惨不忍睹

kiki1988UID：2329056

TOPIC: ISSUE147 - "Tradition and modernization are incompatible. One must choose between them."
WORDS: 421          TIME: 01:25:50          DATE: 2007-8-10 0:50:30

提纲：TOPIC: ISSUE147 - "Tradition and modernization are incompatible. One must choose between them."
WORDS: 421          TIME: 01:25:50          DATE: 2007-8-10 0:50:30

提纲：
B1 传统与现代在很多领域是相辅相成，不可或缺的
B2 当然，在某些方面，现代也要与传统观念分清
B3 我认为，以建筑学为例，没有必要一定要在二者择其一

Is it necessery indeed to choose between tradition and modernization, as the speaker claims? As I see it, we don't need to draw such a clear division between them. In this era of rapid changing social and variety kinds of factors leading to increasing life complexity and psychological displacement, both traditional and modern things and thoughts in modern society call for a balance in which there are both two aspects exist.

As a matter of fact, modernization is developed on the foundation of tradition in many aspects. With the fast progress of whole society and civilization of human-being, traditional concepts are being inherited,  developed and changed. Thus, we form and hold our modern concepts now, which spring from tradition and are surely indespensable to tradition. For instance, colourful national cultures, decended from ancestors and passed down by  numberous generations, are precious wealth of nation. Even now, these valuable cultural heritage have reflect on modernists deeply and melt into their daily notions. Moreover, take a look at the history of languages. In spite of many words are created in modern world, english languages are ultimately inherit from ancient Greek and Latin languages. Thus, no one can asserts tradition and moderniation are totally incompatible.

However, I concede that, in some field, the features between these two different abstract concepts lead to a crystallized distinction, especially in some variation sides. Take popular pop music for example. As one of the most fashional parts in artistic world, getting rid of stale and bringing forth the fresh is its living standard. At this time, we can not put even a little connection to traditional music. That's out of date, and deathful to pop music.

Admittly, I hold  the faith that, in certain instances, tradition must entirely break away from modern life. It is true when it comes to sepecal field such as architecture. When an old builded bridge's value only restricted to just for view and admire, but the place it stand we can used for building a more useful structure, we may ignore its traditional value to satisfy the basic need of modern life. However, in other cases,  historical buildings can prove lots of valuable information about old concepts of architerctonics. Thus, even in architecture, tradition and modernization are not necessarily exclusive options.

In sum, it is no need to distinguish from tradition and modernization for the chief reason that, in many aspects, these two fields are indispensable to each other, though tradition may yeild entirely to the need of life nowadays in other fields.

B1 传统与现代在很多领域是相辅相成，不可或缺的
B2 当然，在某些方面，现代也要与传统观念分清
B3 我认为，以建筑学为例，没有必要一定要在二者择其一

Is it necessery indeed to choose between tradition and modernization, as the speaker claims? As I see it, we don't need to draw such a clear division between them. In this era of rapid changing social and variety kinds of factors leading to increasing life complexity and psychological displacement, both traditional and modern things and thoughts in modern society call for a balance in which there are both two aspects exist.

As a matter of fact, modernization is developed on the foundation of tradition in many aspects. With the fast progress of whole society and civilization of human-being, traditional concepts are being inherited,  developed and changed. Thus, we form and hold our modern concepts now, which spring from tradition and are surely indespensable to tradition. For instance, colourful national cultures, decended from ancestors and passed down by  numberous generations, are precious wealth of nation. Even now, these valuable cultural heritage have reflect on modernists deeply and melt into their daily notions. Moreover, take a look at the history of languages. In spite of many words are created in modern world, english languages are ultimately inherit from ancient Greek and Latin languages. Thus, no one can asserts tradition and moderniation are totally incompatible.

However, I concede that, in some field, the features between these two different abstract concepts lead to a crystallized distinction, especially in some variation sides. Take popular pop music for example. As one of the most fashional parts in artistic world, getting rid of stale and bringing forth the fresh is its living standard. At this time, we can not put even a little connection to traditional music. That's out of date, and deathful to pop music.

Admittly, I hold  the faith that, in certain instances, tradition must entirely break away from modern life. It is true when it comes to sepecal field such as architecture. When an old builded bridge's value only restricted to just for view and admire, but the place it stand we can used for building a more useful structure, we may ignore its traditional value to satisfy the basic need of modern life. However, in other cases,  historical buildings can prove lots of valuable information about old concepts of architerctonics. Thus, even in architecture, tradition and modernization are not necessarily exclusive options.

In sum, it is no need to distinguish from tradition and modernization for the chief reason that, in many aspects, these two fields are indispensable to each other, though tradition may yeild entirely to the need of life nowadays in other fields.


[ 本帖最后由 kiki1988 于 2007-8-10 00:57 编辑 ]

mablaUID：2312557

Issue147 第一次痛苦限时……惨不忍睹

TOPIC: ISSUE147 - "Tradition and modernization are incompatible. One must choose between them."WORDS: 421          TIME: 01:25:50          DATE: 2007-8-10 0:50:30提纲：TOPIC: ISSUE147 - "Tradition and modernization are incompatible. One must choose between them."WORDS: 421          TIME: 01:25:50          DATE: 2007-8-10 0:50:30
提纲：B1 传统与现代在很多领域是相辅相成，不可或缺的
B2 当然，在某些方面，现代也要与传统观念分清
B3 我认为，以建筑学为例，没有必要一定要在二者择其一
Is it necessery indeed to choose between tradition and modernization, as the speaker claims? As I see it, we don't need to draw such a clear division between them. In this era of rapid changing social and variety kinds of factors leading to increasing life complexity and psychological displacement, both traditional and modern things and thoughts in modern society call for a balance in which there are both two aspects exist. （开头简明，套了北美的原句，不过是不是可以更进一步，光光balance似乎没有说清楚两者之间的关系）
    As a matter of fact, modernization is developed on the foundation of tradition in many aspects. With the fast progress of whole society and civilization of human-being, traditional concepts are being inherited,  developed and changed. Thus, we form and hold our modern concepts now, which spring from tradition and are surely indispensable to tradition（没太读懂啥意思，modern concept are indispensable to tradition？一般人会比较费解，最好解释以下咯）. For instance, colourful national cultures, decended from ancestors and passed down by  numberous generations, are precious wealth of nation. Even now, these valuable cultural heritage have reflect on modernists deeply and melt into their daily notions. （例子倒是还行，考虑一下，是不是具体的例子—即使是编的--比泛泛的例子更好呢？）Moreover, take a look at the history of languages. In spite of many words are created in modern world, english languages are ultimately inherit from ancient Greek and Latin languages. Thus, no one can asserts tradition and moderniation are totally incompatible.

However, I concede that, in some field, the features between these two different abstract concepts lead to a crystallized distinction, especially in some variation sides. Take popular pop music for example. As one of the most fashional parts in artistic world, getting rid of stale and bringing forth the fresh is its living standard. At this time, we can not put even a little connection to traditional music. That's out of date, and deathful to pop music.

Admittly, I hold the faith that, in certain instances, tradition must entirely break away from modern life. It is true when it comes to sepecal field such as architecture. When an old builded bridge's value only restricted to just for view and admire, but the place it stand we can used for building a more useful structure, we may ignore its traditional value to satisfy the basic need of modern life. However, in other cases,  historical buildings can prove lots of valuable information about old concepts of architerctonics. Thus, even in architecture, tradition and modernization are not necessarily exclusive options.（这一段呢，有点问题个人觉得。这段以建筑这个主题例子组织行文，导致整个段落中心有不集中的嫌疑。前一部分讲incompatible，后一部分讲compactible，二者分别与前两段对应，那么这一段里，内容和思想方面，有没有well-developed呢，或者说思想发展的是不是还不够充分）

In sum, it is no need to distinguish from tradition and modernization for the chief reason that, in many aspects, these two fields are indispensable to each other, though tradition may yeild entirely to the need of life nowadays in other fields.
限时是比较痛苦，但是考试本身就是限时的，所以，加油吧：）




[ 本帖最后由 mabla 于 2007-8-10 02:26 编辑 ]

chinaswwUID：209694

除了一些小错，和不smooth，语言上的问题不是很大。请参考

Is it necessary indeed to choose between tradition and modernization, as the speaker claims? As I see it, we don't need to draw such a clear division between them. In this era of rapid changing social and kinds of factors leading to increasing life complexity and psychological displacement, both traditional and modern substances and thoughts in modern society call for a balance in which there are both two aspects exist.

As a matter of fact, modernization is developed on the foundation of tradition in many aspects. With the fast progress of the whole society and civilization of human-beings, traditional concepts are being inherited, developed and changed. Thus, we form and hold our modern concepts now, which spring from tradition and are surely indispensable to tradition otherwise. For instance, colorful national cultures, descended from ancestors and passed down by numerous generations, are precious wealth of nation. Even now, these invaluable cultural heritages have affected modernists deeply and melt into their daily notions. Moreover, take a look at the history of languages. In spite of many words are created in modern world, English are ultimately inherited from ancient Greek and Latin languages. Thus, no one can assert tradition and modernization are totally incompatible.

However, I concede that, in some field, the features between these two different abstract concepts lead to a crystallized distinction, especially in some variation cases. Take pop music for example. As one of the most fashionable parts in artistic world, getting rid of staleness and bringing forth the fresh is its living standard. At this time, we can not put even a little connection to traditional music. That's out of date, and deathful to pop music.

Admittedly, I hold the faith that, in certain instances, tradition must entirely break away from modern life. It is true when it comes to special field such as architecture. When an old built bridge's value only has been restricted to view and admire, and yet the place where it is standing we can used for a more useful structure, we may ignore its traditional value to satisfy the basic need of modern life. However, in other cases, historical buildings can prove lots of valuable information about old concepts of architectonics. Thus, even in architecture, tradition and modernization are not necessarily exclusive options.

In sum, it is no need to distinguish between tradition and modernization for the chief reason that, in many aspects, these two fields are indispensable to each other, though tradition may yield entirely to the need of life nowadays in other fields.