ISSUE17[Aero小组]第14次作业

liruixinsnakeUID: 2373729

题目：ISSUE17 - "There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws."
改后字数：554          用时：00:45:00          日期：2008-2-17 13:56:57


In this issue, the speaker provided two conclusions, which, are the every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, sounds more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws. From my personal angle, I will raise my hands up when facing the author's first assertion. However, for about resisting the unjust laws, I insist that the individuals must have a rational method to deal with them.

To begin with, admittedly, the just law prescribes the individuals' behaviors without which the society cannot properly organize. Taking the Traffic Law into account which prescribes that the divers must not drive the car after drinking wine. It will be a horrible screen if the drivers do not obey the law. And what is more, in many other fields it is the law that gives the society the properties such as the Corporation Law, Labor Law in companies, and the Marriage Law's important role in families. Thus, the individuals should follow the descriptions in the just law and to protect the society from any negative influence.

Not only does the just law significant to the society of a country, but also it plays a vital role in the globalization. There are also many International Laws which limit the every nation's activities. For instance, the Environmental Law made by the international organizations limits the country's amount of pollution every year in order to protect the whole world's environment. Therefore, not only should the individuals obey the laws, the every nation, as a member in the world, should also obey it.

On the other hand, what should we do if we encounter any unjust laws? Should we fight against them? My answer is yes, however, in a proper way. There will be a conflict when facing the unjust laws, our duty is not to motivate the conflict but to solve it in a peace way. As we all know, laws are set by the majority of people and represent the majority's rights. Thus, there must be some of the unfair things to the minority and if they do not fight against the unjust law, it will lean to the opposite even more severely. For example, there was a period of time when it was legal for the white farm owners to have Blacks as their private slaves in America, which not only maintained the privilege of the whites but also severely offended the Blacks’ rights. Later the famous leader of the Civil Rights Movement, Martin Luther King, in his welcoming speech "I have a dream", he said that "I have a dream that one day my four children will live in a nation where they will not be judged by their color of skin but by the content of their character."If he did not disobey the unfair law to the Afro-Americans, maybe today they must seat at the back of the bus and be look down upon as before.

To sum up, it is important for the society, even the whole world, to obey the just laws in order to limit our behaviors. What is more, when facing the unjust law, we should point it out and let the government know what exactly the fair is, but not to fight against it directly in that it will lead to no goods to both the society and us.

[ 本帖最后由 liruixinsnake 于 2008-2-17 15:10 编辑 ]

beetle1986UID: 2431214

In this issue, the speaker provided two conclusions, which, are the every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, sounds more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws. From my personal angle, I will raise my hands up when facing the author's first assertion. However, for about resisting（resisting删去会不会比较好） the unjust laws, I insist that the individuals must have a rational method to deal with them.

To begin with, admittedly, the just law prescribes the individuals' behaviors without which the society cannot properly organize. Taking the Traffic Law into account which prescribes that the divers (drivers) must not drive the car after drinking wine. It will be a horrible screen if the drivers do not obey the law. And what is more, in many other fields it is the law that gives the society the properties such as the Corporation Law, Labor Law in companies, and the Marriage Law's important role in families. Thus, the individuals should follow the descriptions in the just law and to protect the society from any negative influence.
Not only does the just law significant to the society of a country, but also it plays a vital role in the globalization. There are also many International Laws which limit the every nation's activities. For instance, the Environmental Law made by the international organizations limits the country's amount of pollution every year in order to protect the whole world's environment. Therefore, not only should the individuals obey the laws, the every nation, as a member in the world, should also obey it.
On the other hand, what should we do if we encounter any unjust laws? Should we fight against them? My answer is yes, however, in a proper way. There will be a conflict when facing the unjust laws, our duty is not to motivate the conflict but to solve it in a peace way. As we all know, laws are set by the majority of people and represent the majority's rights. Thus, there must be some of the unfair things to the minority and if they do not fight against the unjust law, it will lean to the opposite even more severely. For example, there was a period of time when it was legal for the white farm owners to have Blacks as their private slaves in America, which not only maintained the privilege of the whites but also severely offended the Blacks’ rights. Later the famous leader of the Civil Rights Movement, Martin Luther King, in his welcoming speech "I have a dream", he said that "I have a dream that one day my four children will live in a nation where they will not be judged by their color of skin but by the content of their character."If he did not disobey the unfair law to the Afro-Americans, maybe today they must seat at the back of the bus and be look down upon as before.
应该反面论证一下。如果人人都不遵守他认为不公正的法律，社会就乱套了。
To sum up, it is important for the society, even the whole world, to obey the just laws in order to limit our behaviors. What is more, when facing the unjust law, we should point it out and let the government know what exactly the fair is, but not to fight against it directly in that it will lead to no goods to both the society and us.
最好再加一段

[ 本帖最后由 beetle1986 于 2008-2-19 20:16 编辑 ]

barretshaoUID: 2449682

题目：ISSUE17 - "There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws."
改后字数：554      用时：00:45:00      日期：2008-2-17 13:56:57


In this issue, the speaker provided two conclusions, which, are the every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, sounds more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws. From my personal angle, I will raise my hands up when facing the author's first assertion. However, for about resisting the unjust laws, I insist that the individuals must have a rational method to deal with them.

To begin with, admittedly, the just law prescribes the individuals' behaviors without which the society cannot properly organize. Taking the Traffic Law into account which prescribes that the divers must not drive the car after drinking wine. It will be a horrible screen if the drivers do not obey the law. And what is more, in many other fields it is the law that gives the society the properties such as the Corporation Law, Labor Law in companies, and the Marriage Law's important role in families. Thus, the individuals should follow the descriptions in the just law and to protect the society from any negative influence.

Not only does the just law significant to the society of a country, but also it plays a vital role in the globalization. There are also many International Laws which limit the every nation's activities. For instance, the Environmental Law made by the international organizations limits the country's amount of pollution every year in order to protect the whole world's environment. Therefore, not only should the individuals obey the laws, the every nation, as a member in the world, should also obey it.(这一点我觉得到是可以用一些国家不遵守京都协议来表达我们都应该遵守公正的法律)

On the other hand, what should we do if we encounter any unjust laws? Should we fight against them? My answer is yes, however, in a proper way. There will be a conflict when facing the unjust laws, our duty is not to motivate the conflict but to solve it in a peace（peaceful） way. As we all know, laws are set by the majority of people and represent the majority's rights.(在feudal society或是更早有很多法律不是大多数人制定的，而是minority的dominator制定的) Thus, there must be some of the unfair things to the minority and if they do not fight against the unjust law, it will lean to the opposite even more severely. For example, there was a period of time when it was legal for the white farm owners to have Blacks as their private slaves in America, which not only maintained the privilege of the whites but also severely offended the Blacks’ rights. Later the famous leader of the Civil Rights Movement, Martin Luther King, in his welcoming speech "I have a dream", he said that "I have a dream that one day my four children will live in a nation where they will not be judged by their color of skin but by the content of their character."If he did not disobey the unfair law to the Afro-Americans, maybe today they must seat at the back of the bus and be look down upon as before. （最后结束的太潦草了。应该总结下）

我觉得应该加上一段（然而真正判断是否公正是很难的，，来对主题进行一个深入的讨论。就是我们到底应该怎么做）。（个人观点）

To sum up, it is important for the society, even the whole world, to obey the just laws in order to limit our behaviors. What is more, when facing the unjust law, we should point it out and let the government know what exactly the fair is, but not to fight against it directly in that it will lead to no goods to both the society and us.

dahuadebaobaoUID: 2441571

题目：ISSUE17 - "There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws."
改后字数：554          用时：00:45:00          日期：2008-2-17 13:56:57

In this issue, the speaker provided two conclusions, which,(这个逗号没有必要吧？没有插入语啊） are the every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, sounds more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws. From my personal angle, I will raise my hands up when facing the author's first assertion. However, for about resisting the unjust laws, I insist that the individuals must have a rational method to deal with them.
To begin with, admittedly, the just law prescribes the individuals' behaviors without which the society cannot properly organize（organize不恰当，换成run 或者operate可能好一些）. Taking the Traffic Law into account which prescribes that the divers must not drive the car after drinking wine. It will be a horrible screen if the drivers do not obey the law. And what is more, in many other fields it is the law that gives the society the properties such as the Corporation Law, Labor Law in companies, and the Marriage Law's important role in families. Thus, the individuals should follow the descriptions in the just law and to protect the society from any negative influence.
Not only does the just law significant to the society of a country, （一个国家的社会？罗索了些）but also it plays a vital role in the globalization. There are also many International Laws which limit the every nation's activities. For instance, the Environmental Law made by the international organizations limits the country's amount of pollution every year in order to protect the whole world's environment. Therefore, not only should the individuals obey the laws, the every nation, as a member in the world, should also obey it.
(这里想说一下文章结构，文中题目给的是遵守善法重要而违反恶法更重要，显然题目重点在后者上，所以在安排结构时将遵守善法重要作为文章主题并给予大段篇幅就值得商榷了。而且这会 严重影响后面对违反恶法的讨论时间。从后面的讨论中也可以看出论述并不充分，作者提到违法恶法重要，并提出有更好的解决方法，我们不仅要问：违反恶法可行么？更好的方法是什么呢？）
On the other hand, what should we do if we encounter any unjust laws? Should we fight against them? My answer is yes, however, in a proper way. （这一句表达很好）There will be a conflict when facing the unjust laws, our duty is not to motivate the conflict but to solve it in a peace way. As we all know, laws are set by the majority of people and represent the majority's rights. Thus, there must be some of the unfair things to the minority and if they do not fight against the unjust law, it will lean to the opposite even more severely. For example, there was a period of time when it was legal for the white farm owners to have Blacks as their private slaves in America, which not only maintained the privilege of the whites but also severely offended the Blacks’ rights. Later the famous leader of the Civil Rights Movement, Martin Luther King, in his welcoming speech "I have a dream", he said that "I have a dream that one day my four children will live in a nation where they will not be judged by their color of skin but by the content of their character."If he did not disobey the unfair law to the Afro-Americans, maybe today they must seat at the back of the bus and be look（looked) down upon as before.
To sum up, it is important for the society, even the whole world, to obey the just laws in order to limit our behaviors. What is more, when facing the unjust law, we should point it out and let the government know what exactly the fair is, but not to fight against it directly in that it will lead to no goods to both the society and us.

希望lz看看偶的啊：） https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=802242&extra=page%3D1
也给俺提题意见，多谢哦

[ 本帖最后由 dahuadebaobao 于 2008-2-20 14:10 编辑 ]