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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.（185生活习惯类）

In recent years, there is an increasingly notable controversy concerning whether people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy.  Arguing for people should always do things follow their willing are those people who consider the interest is the primary consideration and the crucial condition when people decide what thing they should do.  As far as I am concerned, however, people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.

To begin with, it is undeniable that a small proportion of people always do things according to their interests and desires, in a sense this philosophy of life can bring benefits for them.  For example, Bill Gates, the former CEO of Microsoft Company, it is a well known fact that he dropped out of Harvard University and started his own company.  General speaking, during his whole career life, Bill did things that he enjoyed doing, achieved most of his goals and gained a huge success.

Nevertheless, for most of people, they cannot always do things that they do enjoy doing.  One compelling reason supporting my point is that sometimes the things that people enjoyed are not widely accepted by the society or do not get well paid.  For instance, nowadays many college students choose engineering and science rather than liberal arts as their majors, not because all of them are really enjoy natural sciences, but rather for the reason that they have to consider the job opportunities and the level of salaries when they choose majors.  

An additional reason is that sometimes people do things cannot only for their sake, they need to consider the practical situations and feelings of others.  For example, almost every college student who live outside the campus and can afford vehicles wants to drive his or her own car to go to school.  However the parking places in the campus are limited, therefore in most cases students have to submit their application and wait for the available parking place.  To sum up, people sometimes have to consider the practical situations that in front of them.

In conclusion, although the considerable benefits that doing things that people enjoy doing can provide, they cannot compete with the restraining of people’s desires, when both the acceptance of the society and the practical situations are taken into account.  From my point of view, I agree that people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.

[ 本帖最后由 candyam 于 2008-9-29 13:38 编辑 ]

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In recent years, there is an increasingly notable controversy concerning whether people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy.  Arguing for people should always do things follow their willing are those people who consider the interest is the primary consideration and the crucial condition when people decide what thing they should do.  As far as I am concerned, however, people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USAS"\ j:q ~
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To begin with, it is undeniable that a small proportion of people always do things according to their interests and desires, in a sense this philosophy of life can bring benefits for them.  For example, Bill Gates, the former CEO of Microsoft Company, it is a well known fact that he dropped out of Harvard University and started his own company.  General speaking, during his whole career life, Bill did things that he enjoyed doing, achieved most of his goals and gained a huge success.留Nevertheless, for most of people, they cannot always do things that they do enjoy doing.  One compelling reason supporting my point is that sometimes the things that people enjoyed are not widely accepted by the society or do not get well paid.  For instance, nowadays many college students choose engineering and science rather than liberal arts as their majors, not because all of them are really enjoy natural sciences, but rather for the reason that they have to consider the job opportunities and the level of salaries when they choose majors.  

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In conclusion, although the considerable benefits that doing things that people enjoy doing can provide, they cannot compete with the restraining of people’s desires, when both the acceptance of the society and the practical situations are taken into account.  From my point of view, I agree that people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.语法上没有什么毛病值得学习,LZ的字数很多啊 是30分写的吗可以问问不?

candyamUID: 2325105

40minutes in fact

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楼主好厉害，不管是什么文章，Bill Gates 都能出现^ ^厉害，又学了不少表达方法，继续关注中......

candiceheUID: 2543359

你的文章现在已经迷惑的别人改不出来了，希望你也能迷惑得了ETS的人。
很多人看到你的框架，就觉得不错了，顺势认为你的内容组织也没有问题。尝试跳出框架如果有时间的话