【12月-1月IBT综合备考活动】之【TWE写作】 1月5日作业

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Present generation, it is more emphasize the significant of education. While educations have a lot of ways, we definitely should choose the best way and best course of our young. Additionally, as the human culture rapidly developed, subjects combination(可以这样表达吗), and tremendous amount of subjects emerged. In this case, students have to cramming for more subjects’ tests which they need to learn. Normally, traditional study method is limited for our students, because rotting material is a limitation of creativity and critical thinking. It needs to give more challenge courses in order to simulate students’ zeal for knowledge? I am fairly in agreement on this meaningful proposal.

Primarily, students in elementary and middle schools, most time is cramming material for tests, we can’t demur that child and teenager age is the best time for increasing memory ability. However, because for dozen years, most study is in this rotting way, they cannot gain any interesting from study any more.(这句算不算破碎，但换了顺序好像句子不顺。有没有更好的表达？) Large amount of students will be tired for learning. Call into memory, when I was in high school，struggled for the university enter test, at a period of time I wasn’t capable to rotting anything more. After a period of accomplished the tests, I definitely didn’t want to read books any more. I am fever for other things like music performances and sports, this cause a long time for me to adapt to colleague study.

When I enter university, I was expecting courses would be different in colleague. However, there is not much different from high schools. I was depressed and cannot be stimulated to cramming for high scores any more.

Subsequently, in sophomore, I engaged in mathematical competition of modeling. In order to prepare for the competition, teachers arranged lots of challenge courses in two weeks. The method is hard but interesting, I really zeal for them, because I was proud of myself in defeating that kind of hard work.

Finally, I definitely agreed that challenge courses will stimulate students’ zeal for knowledge. If students are educated the same way as in high school, which is storage way, they will be extraordinary tired and enthusiasm consumed. However, if more challenge courses are given, it will definitely spur creativity and critical thinking of students in study. They will be training real practical mode of thinking which is significant for the future life and career.

In conclusion, challenge courses are elite and necessary for colleague and university. Without that, there will be no different from middle school; without that, students would be tired for learning and studying; without that, the most significant mode of thinking such as creativity and critical thinking will be buried(“bury” 这样用合适吗?老外能理解吗?会不会觉得很怪). What’s more, after students defeating the challenge work at school, they will have more preparation for the hard work in the future career.

[ 本帖最后由 xlwxxy 于 2009-1-5 23:53 编辑 ]

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Present generation这个表达个人觉得很c-english, it is more emphasize on the significant of education. While educations have a lot of ways, we definitely should choose the best way and best course of our young. Additionally, as the human culture rapidly developed, subjects combination(可以这样表达吗),交叉学科？这么说不太对吧 and tremendous amount of subjects emerged. In this case, students have to cramming for more subjects’ tests which they need to learn. Normally, traditional study method is limited for our students, because rotting material is a limitation of creativity and critical thinking. It needs to give more challenge courses in order to simulate students’ zeal for knowledge? I am fairly in agreement on this meaningful proposal. 开头还行，给出了自己关于 challenging course的理解

Primarily, students in elementary and middle schools, most time is cramming material for tests, we can’t demur that child and teenager age is the best time for increasing memory ability. However, because for dozen years, most study is in this rotting way, they cannot gain any interesting from study any more.(这句算不算破碎，但换了顺序好像句子不顺。有没有更好的表达？我觉得这句还行啊。。) Large amount of students will be tired for learning. Call into memory, when I was in high school，struggled for the university enter test, at a period of time I wasn’t capable to rotting anything more啥意思？. After a period of accomplished the tests, I definitely didn’t want to read books any more. I am fever for other things like music performances and sports, this cause a long time for me to adapt to colleague study.
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When I enter university, I was expecting courses would be different （in colleague删去）. However, there is not much different from high schools. I was depressed and cannot be stimulated to cramming for high scores any more. Subsequently, in sophomore, I engaged in mathematical competition of modeling. In order to prepare for the competition, teachers arranged lots of challenge courses in two weeks. The method is hard but interesting, I really zeal for them, because I was proud of myself in defeating that kind of hard work.

Finally, I definitely agreed that challenge courses will stimulate students’ zeal for knowledge due to my own experience. If students are educated the same way as in high school, which is storage way, they will be extraordinary tired and enthusiasm词性不对 consumed. However, if more challenge courses are given, it will definitely spur creativity and critical thinking of students in study. They will be training real practical mode of thinking which is significant for the future life and career.
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In conclusion, challenge courses are elite and necessary for colleague and university你这总结句是不是out of theme了. Without that, there will be no different from middle school; without that, students would be tired for learning and studying; without that, the most significant mode of thinking such as creativity and critical thinking will be buried(“bury” 这样用合适吗?老外能理解吗?会不会觉得很怪).bury这么用还行 What’s more, after students defeating the challenge work at school, they will have more preparation for the hard work in the future career.
看的出来你有一些想法，但是最后的总结实在有点跑题，题目的challenging courses没有特指大学的吧~
以后拼写和语法要自己检查，还有cramming for 重复的有点多了:)