ToHeart互改小组（暂停招人）

dinddind2003UID: 196353

本人2.13 南京战役
第二次考G
我们的宗旨：通过互改，提高大家的AW的成绩！
我们的目标：AW>=5
我们的任务：
1。初期每人每天至少完成一篇Issue，题目由本队长来定（就相当于作业了:lol），发布时间为晚上8：00。自己的其他习作也可以发上来互改。根据个人情况，限时或不限时，但是要注明。Argu的法定开始时间待定。
2。大家必须在第二天晚上8：00之前将前一天的作文传上（之所以给这么长时间是希望只要发上来就是自己认真改过一次的，不然是浪费大家的时间，对自己效率也不高）。作文传到主页，本帖后面只跟链接，将整篇作文跟到本帖后面者则可以不予修改。:@

3。每人每天发几篇至少就要改几篇（除自己的外），至于每次谁批改谁的文章，由大家自行选择修改的对象，但是在决定修改对象后首先要在对象后跟贴“占座”，表示你会修改此文章。最后可以一个人的文章被多人改。如果出现没有改的文章时由我指定谁来改。
4。小组要是有成员不能到，必须向小组说一声！:L
5。三天之内不发文章者，KICK出本小组（过年三天例外，想写就写，我不出题）
PS：自己的文章帖上来前，请先自己修改，避免语法错误过多……:L

有意见请大家提出:handshake:handshake。

荣誉组员：dinddind2003
                     leongfish
本组成员：队长 zhangheng1020  
              
               组员：zhangheng1020    QQ暂缺                 15楼
                       leongfish               QQ534245987                 19楼
                       forever远              QQ305780093                49楼
                     cavana                    QQ87705224          100楼
                    ChunyanLi2005        QQ316046875          101楼
                     girl晶晶                    QQ117499082          105楼
                    cute                           QQ173111378          109楼



                       


                                      :)公告栏（不定时更新）:)
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         :)祝各位组员新年快乐
   我们的付出一定会有回报的:)

今天开始布置argu题目，大家想写就写啊，不过要是发了习作就要帮别人改，而且argu和issue要分别对待，毕竟改这两种作文还是很不一样的:handshake

今天 的作业以及相关事宜见8楼

请大家把自己交作业的楼层的标题统一改成“******的 作业”，以方便查找

因为现在若干组员长时间不来报到，现在暂时不计入我们组，等他们和我联系后再说。

zhangheng1020 的总结有句型和例子，个人认为不错呢

我总结了部分机经，大家看有没有补充，短消息联系，我们的作业主要从这里布置：机经总结

[ 本帖最后由 dinddind2003 于 2006-2-10 22:17 编辑 ]

11yaoyaoUID: 177037

GOOD JOB

UP

4k-moonUID: 2167300

4K-mooo  IS APPLYING  FOR THE ADMISSION~~~~~
3月17号大连战斗。寒假把作文单词NO题带了回来，计划是每天一篇ARU 一篇ISSUE。 外加把单词过一遍。之前花了一个学期的时间对G 有了一个比较理性的认识，外加把单词扫了一遍（估计已经忘了80%）：P。。。组长给通过验证吗？

4k-moonUID: 2167300

忘了说QQ 号码了，289593380

bohemian00UID: 2176063

bohemian00 交作业
1月19日 issue147
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=395953&extra=page%3D1
1月21日 issue 153
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=396858&extra=page%3D1
1月24日issue 177
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=398172&extra=page%3D1
1月25日issue 208
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=398174&extra=page%3D1

[ 本帖最后由 bohemian00 于 2006-1-25 07:28 编辑 ]

absenttonyUID: 2157570

3.10 香港（去交流，笔试在上海考）
QQ:48806719
希望和大家多多交流啊

fathippohuhuUID: 2171795

2.23 北京作文


第一次作业 issue196   1.18
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1


第二次作业 issue 153   2.22
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1


第三次作业 issue 147   2.22
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

[ 本帖最后由 fathippohuhu 于 2006-1-22 19:12 编辑 ]

dinddind2003UID: 196353

作业（时间说明，1.18是指1.18晚8点前要交的，而题目是1.17定的，以此类推）：
1.18 Issue 196 Technology creates more problems than it solves, and may threaten or damage the quality of life.
1.19 Issue 147 Tradition and modernization are incompatible. One must choose between them.
1.20 Issue 153 Students should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study. They should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively.
1.21 暂停:L  大家尽快补交作业
1.22 今天我回家，以为中午能到的，谁知等车加坐车现在才到家，今天我没时间写了:L，但是大家要坚持啊，加之大家欠了不少进度，所以今天布置的作业是大家自己取题自己写。交了以后还是遵循交几篇改几篇的原则。
1.23 Issue 177 The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes
1.24 Issue 208 the way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people
1.30 Issue 36 The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries.
1.31 Issue 207 Rituals and ceremonies help define a culture. Without them, societies or groups of people have a diminished sense of who they are.
2.1 Issue 161 In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any woman or man as a hero. The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
2.2 Issue 167 It is impossible for an effective political leader to tell the truth all the time. Complete honesty is not a useful virtue for a politician
2.3 Issue 144 It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value
2.4 Issue 226 People are mistaken when they assume that the problems they confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. This illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience
2.5 Issue 11 All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems
2.6 Issue 51 "Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student
2.7 Issue 138 "Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress
2.8 Issue 47 "Society does not place enough emphasis on the intellect-that is, on reasoning and other cognitive skills
2.9 Issue 4 No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study
       Argument 140

[ 本帖最后由 dinddind2003 于 2006-2-9 20:53 编辑 ]

gongbo84321UID: 197894

3.1北京
05.10g 考过
作文很菜
QQ:410262595

xwsohappyUID: 195648

2.24 大连 第二次
作文一般
qq22933619

awonderUID: 200778

我加一个！
3.8号AW
QQ：3079585

作业链接：
1.18  第一次作业  issue196： https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
1.19  第二次作业  issue147： https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D2

[ 本帖最后由 awonder 于 2006-1-22 14:20 编辑 ]

sudongpoUID: 2125302

2月24日，南京考
个人情况：考过11t 作文5.5，本来是05 10G的，准备过一小段时间的作文。
寒假准备准备好作文，再背点单词，重点准备作文。
希望可以加入！
联系方式：
QQ 14425333
mail:gre84@126.com:victory:

sudongpo 第一次作业 issue196 1月18日
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... page%3D1#pid2252955

[ 本帖最后由 sudongpo 于 2006-1-18 12:12 编辑 ]

dinddind2003UID: 196353

1.18 Issue 196 ：https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

1.19 Issue 147 ：https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

1.20 Issue 153： https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

1.23 Issue 177：https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

1.24 Issue 208: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

1.30 Issue 36: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

1.31 Issue207: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

2.1 Issue161: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

2.3 Issue144: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

2.4 Issue226: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

2.5 Issue11: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

2.6 Issue51: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

2.7 Issue138: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

2.8 Issue47: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

[ 本帖最后由 dinddind2003 于 2006-2-9 13:16 编辑 ]

FedexUID: 2112090

本科大三，电子工程专业，考过10G，败在AW上，这次有了充分的准备。
机考时间是2月16号，QQ号：241808162。

zhangheng1020UID: 2130513

最近的机经：
by dinddind2003 具体见1楼介绍
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
红色的是已经写过的具体见8楼
教育:153，154，51，130，50  94，80，5
学习类:177，138，28   183
行为:208，87，186，210，64，138，177，15，61，235，99，157，127，184 121 141 212  
社会:36,185,47,41,142,203,120,93,161,152,17   46
文化:207,4,247,10.147
科技: 7,150,159,30 ,196,
传媒: 38,108,161
历史:226,48,103,54,221
艺术:144,218
政治: 167,43,8,83,195,160
国际:11 ,197
issue 196 ：1.19 Issue 147 ：1.20 Issue 153： 1.23 Issue 177：1.24 Issue 208: 1.30 Issue 36: 1.31 Issue207: 2.1 Issue161:2.3 Issue144: 2.4 Issue226: 2.5 Issue11: 2.6 Issue51: 2.7 Issue138 2.8 Issue 47 2.9 Issue 4
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task
2-13 issue87 argue A238
2-14 issue15  argue 153


10 号 的任务是同主题写作的1 2
1
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... 1%26filter%3Ddigest0606G同主题写作第一期--- Issue178:
It is possible to pass laws that control or place limits on people’s behavior, but legislation cannot reform human nature. laws cannot change what is in people’s hearts and minds.
通过法律可以控制或者限制人们的行为，但是立法是无法改变人类本性的。法律无法改变人们的感情和思想。

2
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... 1%26filter%3Ddigest
0606G同主题写作第二期---argument59
[题目] 59The following appeared in an article in the health section of a newspaper.
"According to the available medical records, the six worst worldwide flu epidemics during the past 300 years occurred in 1729, 1830, 1918, 1957, 1968, and 1977. These were all years with heavy sunspot activity—that is, years when the Earth received significantly more solar energy than in normal years. People at particular risk for the flu should therefore avoid prolonged exposure to the Sun."


11 号 的任务是同主题写作的3 4
3
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... 1%26filter%3Ddigest
0606G同主题写作第三期——Issue175
Issue175:
"It is always an individual who is the impetus for innovation; the details may be worked out by a team, but true innovation results from the enterprise and unique perception of an individual."

4
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... 1%26filter%3Ddigest
0606G同主题写作第四期——argument73
[题目]
The following appeared in a memo from a manager of a car dealership.
"Ten years ago, long-term car leasing became available in our country of Mohilia as an alternative to outright car ownership, and leasing has steadily risen in popularity. For each of the last five years, the number of people leasing new cars has surpassed the number buying new cars. The average age of cars driven in Mohilia is six years; hence, if new car leases again outnumber purchases this year, it is likely that the majority of drivers will be driving leased, not individually owned, cars. Therefore, we should change the focus of our business from selling cars to leasing them."



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第一次作业 Issue 196
"Technology creates more problems than it solves, and may threaten or damage the quality of life."
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1 [/quote]

第2次作业 Issue 147
Tradition and modernization are incompatible. One must choose between them.
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768000748

3rd time  Issue153
Students should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study. They should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively.
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

4th time Issue 177
"The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes."
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1768012041

5th time Issue 208
"the way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1[/quote]

6th 1.30
Issue 36 The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D2

8th undone
Issue 207 Rituals and ceremonies help define a culture. Without them, societies or groups of people have a diminished sense of who they are
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... ge=1&highlight=

Issue 161
In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any woman or man as a hero. The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... ge=1&highlight=

11 Issue144:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D3

7th issue 226
People are mistaken when they assume that the problems they confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. This illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

9th Issue 11
All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... ge=1&highlight=

10th Issue 51
"Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... ge=1&highlight=

12th  issue 138
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

13th issue 47
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

14th issue 4
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

这个是考完托福整理的，给大家做见面礼好了。
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... page%3D1#pid2249737

[ 本帖最后由 zhangheng1020 于 2006-2-13 16:37 编辑 ]