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Issue 177
The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes.
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1、by studying the discipline, we attain the ability to understand the principle of nature
2、 education in history and literature help us apprehend the flaws of humans clearly.
3、 through the pursuit of the knowledge of discipline, we are able to see our own culture with different eyes

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As the development of human’s study of an academic discipline, we are altering the way we perceive the world everyday. Therefore, when the speaker asserts that after studying the discipline, we see the same world with different eyes, I think, no truer word has been maintained. Indeed, once educated, we have the chance to study the discipline systematically so that we can comprehend the essence of the world gradually, in the process of which, we gain the capacity to observe the world with more perspectives and to realize the culture in more dimensions.

First of all, by studying the discipline, we attain the ability to understand the principle of nature. Admittedly, we all have the experience of studying the knowledge of science, in the process of which, we notice that scientist have summed up the invariable rules from various phenomenon and that principles will help us to understand more phenomenon and go deeper into the discipline. A good example illustrating the point comes from the evolutionism. From the learning of evolutionism, we realize that only the species which can well adopt the change of environment have the capacity to live on the earth continuously. As a result, by the help of evolutionism, we can easily explain the reason of the extinction of ancient animals. Obviously, after educated in science, we gain more cognitions of the essence of nature and it is beneficial for us to explore nature rationally and efficiently.

Moreover, education in history and literature help us apprehend the flaws of humans clearly. More and more people have realized that it is important to study history so that we are aware of the foibles of our ancestors and can avoid their mistakes today. For example, the war is one of the most important parts in human’s history stage. From the education of history, we have a deep impression of the disasters resulting from wars, which have brought about death, hunger, poverty and so on. Consequently, in this era of rapid social and technological development, every one of us has the duty to vindicate the peace of our world. Undoubtedly, it is the history that reveals us the demerits of human-beings, educated by which, we can diminish the possibility of the making the same mistakes.

Finally, through the pursuit of the knowledge of discipline, we are able to see our own culture with different eyes. No doubt that we all accept our own culture from childhood, so it is impossible for us to think about it at that moment. However, having experienced the study in cultures, we have a broader awareness about the characters of our culture. For instance, from the style of Chinese architecture, a Chinese student can deeper understand the essence of Chinese culture, which represents a kind of elegant and implicit character. Meanwhile In the same way, by studying the European architecture, an Italian student will realize more about their nation’s character. So with the help of the knowledge, we can detect many more traits of their own cultures rather than accept it instinctively.

In conclusion, due to the study of academic discipline, not only can we attain the capacity to understand natural principle, but we also establish the notion of apprehending the human’s flaw from history and scanning our culture with different perspectives.

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As the development of human’s study of an academic discipline, we are altering the way we perceive the world everyday. Therefore, when the speaker asserts that after studying the discipline, we see the same world with different eyes, I think, no truer word has been maintained. Indeed, once educated, we have the chance to study the discipline systematically so that we can comprehend the essence of the world gradually, in the process of which, we gain the capacity to observe the world with more perspectives and to realize the culture in more dimensions.

First of all, by studying the discipline, we attain the ability to understand the principle of nature (自然规律？感觉就是风雨雷电等等). Admittedly, we all have the experience of studying the knowledge of science (science不等于principle of nature), in the process of which, we notice that scientist have summed up the invariable rules from various phenomenon and that principles will help us to understand more phenomenon and go deeper into the discipline. A good example illustrating the point comes from the evolutionism. From the learning of evolutionism, we realize that only the species which can well adopt the change of environment have the capacity to live on the earth continuously. As a result, by the help of evolutionism, we can easily explain the reason of the extinction of ancient animals. Obviously, after educated in science, we gain more cognitions of the essence of nature and it is beneficial for us to explore nature rationally and efficiently. (你的意思我是明白的，但是就是觉得不好用principle of nature或science来概括，你还是说说你这是在讲哪方面吧)

Moreover, education in history and literature help us apprehend the flaws of humans clearly. More and more people have realized that it is important to study history so that we are aware of the foibles of our ancestors and can avoid their mistakes today. For example, the war is one of the most important parts in human’s history stage. From the education of history, we have a deep impression of the disasters resulting from wars, which have brought about death, hunger, poverty and so on. Consequently, in this era of rapid social and technological development, every one of us has the duty to vindicate the peace of our world. Undoubtedly, it is the history that reveals us the demerits of human-beings, educated by which, we can diminish the possibility of the making the same mistakes. (历史讲了不少，文学呢？)

Finally, through the pursuit of the knowledge of discipline, we are able to see our own culture with different eyes. No doubt that we all accept our own culture from childhood, so it is impossible for us to think about it at that moment. However, having experienced the study in cultures, we have a broader awareness about the characters of our culture. For instance, from the style of Chinese architecture, a Chinese student can deeper understand the essence of Chinese culture, which represents a kind of elegant and implicit character. Meanwhile In the same way, by studying the European architecture, an Italian student will realize more about their nation’s character (举一个具体的外国和中国形成对比更好，比如美国的奋斗和坦率). So with the help of the knowledge, we can detect many more traits of their own cultures rather than accept it instinctively. (前两段分别讲了学习科学和历史可以带来的好处，可是第三段讲的是学习可以带来的影响，和前两段不对应阿，如果你就是想讲影响的话，那么只讲对文化带来的影响不能体现alter the way we preserve the world)

In conclusion, due to the study of academic discipline, not only can we attain the capacity to understand natural principle, but we also establish the notion of apprehending the human’s flaw from history and scanning our culture with different perspectives.
(从你的最后一段看，你的第二段主题句应该是we attain the capacity to understand natural principle，然后从学习各个学科来说明带来了这个影响，而不是只从学习science上，第三段也是这样，所以你的大提纲似乎还是可以改进的)