Issue183 自己又改过了~希望大家拍拍~

黑崎猫猫UID: 209414

下次记得写自己的提纲，中英文都可,有一些拼写和语法错误，先去word里纠下错

The speaker seems to assert that things may become more complex and more mysterious rather than more comprehensible as we acquire more knowledge.i (I~大写啦，下次先到word里纠下错^ ^汗~~后面貌似还有一些)agree with this view,and i also hold that with the knowledge of ours grows day by day,our ability of analyzing and solving problems can be strenghened.（strengthened）

This is a time,when the technology in cell biology and molecular biology is highly developed,when people's perspective of life has changed different from that in the old times to some degree（感觉加在这里有些拗口，I think）.Due to people's increasing demands in many aspects,it is neccesary (necessary)for them to make a good command of some knowledge,that is to say,they have to acquire more knowledge that is more specific and detailed .As a result,things goes complex and mysterious gradually.What the students study in school is a case in point.In the past ,there was only one major related to animals , plants,and bacteria,that is biology,but nowadays,this kind of major has been divided into a lot of relevant majors which are aimed to different researches that are more advanced,such as aquaculture,botany,zoology.What's more,the students have to take more classes which can give them relevant knowledge in great detail,take the students whose major are aquaculture for example,they have the classes like fisheries,cell biology,biochemistry,genetics and so on.Compared with the students who studied in the old times,students today,undoubtedly,have to face more pressure on grounds of the complexity of the knowledge.（学科的细化导致事情复杂好像是个不错的突破口，说理需要再深入，还不错，小璇~~你是学生物的吧~^ ^）

Admittedly,people go to great lengths to  acquire more knowledge which  meet the society's demands,but on the other hand,their abilities of analyzing and solving problems have improved.A pregnant woman can know how her baby is going from the equipments in the hospital and then make plans to  take some exercise for the sake of the baby's health;a business man can have bargains through the internet,which not only saves each other's time but also brings much convenience;a housewife knows to use the washing machine and the dryer properly so as to do housework better.It seems that we reap the benefit of the acquired increasing knowledge at the same time.

To sum up,it is likely that things become more complex and more mysterious,but no matter how it develops at last,we can be adjusted to it,for we can think which differs from other animals.
（结尾的综述貌似应该和题目有个照应，你写的好像没点到为什么复杂）
语言流畅，值得表扬

[ 本帖最后由 黑崎猫猫 于 2006-1-30 13:18 编辑 ]

freud5027UID: 2165870

The speaker seems to assert that things may become more complex and more mysterious rather than more comprehensible as we acquire more knowledge.iI大写吧 agree with this view,and iI also hold that with the knowledge of ours growsgrowth day by day, our ability of analyzing and solving problems can be strenghenedstrengthened.

This is a time,when the technology in cell biology and molecular biology is highly developed,when people's perspective of life has changed different from that in the old times to some degree.Due to people's increasing demands in many aspects,it is neccesary for them to make a good command of some knowledge,that is to say,they have to acquire more knowledge that is more specific and detailed .As a result,things goes complex and mysterious gradually.What the students study in school is a case in point.In the past ,there was only one major related to animals , plants,and bacteria,that is biology,but nowadays,this kind of major has been divided into a lot of relevant majors which are aimed to different researches that are more
advanced,such as aquaculture,botany,zoology.What's more,the students have to take more classes which can give them relevant knowledge in great detail,take the students whose major are aquaculture for example,they have the classes like fisheries,cell biology,biochemistry,genetics and so on.这一段感觉好像是在论述现在的学科分工更细更专，我们要学得东西也越来越多，还是没说清楚到底为什么复杂了？Compared with the students who studied in the old times,students today,undoubtedly,have to face more pressure on grounds of the complexity of the knowledge.

Admittedly,people go to great lengths to  acquire more knowledge which  meet the society's demands,but on the other hand,their abilities of analyzing and solving problems have improved.A pregnant woman can know how her baby is going from the equipments in the hospital and then make plans to  take some exercise for the sake of the baby's health;a business man can have bargains through the internet,which not only saves each other's time but also brings much convenience;a housewife knows to use the washing machine and the dryer properly so as to do housework better.It seems that we reap the benefit of the acquired increasing knowledge at the same time.这段马马虎虎

To sum up,it is likely that things become more complex and more mysterious,but no matter how it develops at last,we can be adjusted to it,for we can think which differs from other animals. 可能全文思路都不是很清楚，这个结尾也稍微有点……与动物相比我们会思考，其实动物的思考只是人类还无法探究，至于适应调整，人也是动物，大家都可以的吧。

yogurt4UID: 198389

你们组的人,ID都好酷挖

黑崎猫猫UID: 209414

给你改了^ ^看上面第二贴

黑崎猫猫UID: 209414

原帖由 yogurt4 于 2006-1-30 01:42 发表
你们组的人,ID都好酷挖

是吗~~星星眼~~

deelee221UID: 2170883

TOPIC: ISSUE 183 - "As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious."
提纲:1,开头.态度部分同意
         2由于人类获得的知识越来越多导致学科分工的细化,既而学生学习的东西越来越复杂,东西越来越复杂.
         3,用几个通俗的例子说明正是因为人们得到的知识越来越丰富,人们看问题也越来越通俗,问题越来越易懂.

The speaker seems to assert that things may become more complex and more mysterious rather than more comprehensible as we acquire more knowledge.I agree with this view partially, for I concede that, as our knowledge grows day by day, what the students should learn to meet the society's dmands 整篇都没有提到要和社会需要相关 is growing much more complex and mysterious, while our abilities of analyzing and solving problem may be strenghened,that is to say,we think of a problem in a way that delete from complex to comprehensible.始终没有找到该论点相关的例子.


This is a time,when the technology in cell biology and molecular biology is highly developed,when people's perspective of life has changed and is different from that in the old times. Due to people's increasing demands in many aspects,it is neccesary for them to make a good command of some knowledge,therefore, they have to acquire more knowledge which is more specific and detailed . As a result,things goes complex and mysterious gradually. What the students study in school is a case in point. In the past, there was only one major related to animals , plants, and bacteria,that is biology, but nowadays, this kind of major has been divided into a lot of relevant majors which are aimed to studying all the living things in a much deeper way, such as aquaculture,botany,zoology.What's more,the students have to take more classes which can give them relevant knowledge in great detail,take the students whose major are aquaculture for example,they have the delete classes like fisheries,cell biology,biochemistry,genetics and so on.l delete Compared with what the students who studied in the old times learned,that students today,undoubtedly, have to face more pressure on grounds of the complexity and myth of the knowledge.最后一句与主题无关.你需要说明的只是学科分细了.
这段用学科分细的例子说明了知识越来越多和复杂.

Admittedly, people go to great lengths to acquire more knowledge which meets the society's demands,but on the other hand,the knowledge they have gained has helped them in many aspects.Examples as follows can illustrate it well. A pregnant woman can know how her baby is going from the equipments in the hospital and then make plans to  take some exercise for the sake of the baby's health; a business man can have bargains through the internet, which not only saves each other指代不明确's time but also brings much convenience;a housewife knows how to use the washing machine and the dryer properly so as to do housework more efficient. It seems that we reap the benefit of the acquired increasing knowledge at the same time.例子贴近生活,很好!!
该段说明更多的知识对人类是有利的.与提纲中的意思有所不同.


To sum up,it is likely that things become more complex and more mysterious,on the contrary,we may look into problmes in a clear way which makes them more comprehensible, all of these coming out are absolutely attributed to the development of the society为何和社会发展相关?.
最后一段总结的作用不明显,需斟酌.

mm呀,逗号后面还是没有空格哦...这样不好啦...