isssue87 新手VS老手。限时，沉重打击中。

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issue87. In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries.

限时完成，就是一顿胡打，还经常把单词打错而浪费时间，真不知道那些QQ都练哪去了？！
用词和句式已经简单到家了，大家猛拍吧，绝对满足虚荣心的。

提纲：
观点：谁做出的重大发现多不是单单看他们的身份是新手还是老手，他们各有优势，做出重大发现的是那些发挥了自身的优势又弥补了劣势的人。
1、        新手的优势：有尝试的精神（甚至不计后果），不受限有知识限制，身体状况也好；
2、        老手的优势：经验，名誉可以帮助带了经济资助。
3、        做出重大发现不是身份的问题，是能不能各自发挥自己的优势，弥补劣势。(兼做结尾)

正文：

In any domain of research, the beginners have their own advantage, while the experts also have their own ones. Who are more inclined to make significant discoveries is not determined by the status they serve as, either beginners or experts. Only by harnessing the advantages while remedying the shortcomings, can they achieve success.

First turning to the beginners, they have their own merits which frequently are the flaws of experts. First of all, beginners have passion, which can motivate them to try any access to the key to some issues, regardless of whatever the consequence will be. Although the available data may be inadequate, beginners will recklessly put them into practice and expert desirable results. Second, beginners are not restricted by the knowledge and do not think in a fixed way. For instance, Einstein broke through the existed notion of time and space at the age of 26. Beginners do not always follow the routine trace. Last, the physical condition of beginners cannot serve as the obstacle in their work. Beginners are often young, which admit them can stay night to work. Young scholars can do experiment in lab for some days with only little sleeping. So do the new computer software programmers while designing software. All of these mentioned advantages of beginners, to some extent, are just what experts do not own.

With respect to experts, besides the shortcomings compared with beginners mentioned above, their own advantage should not be denied. Undoubtedly, experts have adequate experience, which help them forecast what will be happen when they do research by some method, what the consequence will be. And if the forecasted consequence is not ideal, they can adjust the project early. What is more, experts are more familiar with the knowledge, resulting in that they can work relatively efficient. For some science research, the financial support may be a vital issue and the reputation of experts in their fields, to some degrees, can help they get more financial support. Economical assistance can ensure the research on. A telling example can involve the support faculty get in every university. It is frequently those professors can get more support than the assistant. Generally speaking, these merits of experts may be just what beginners do not have.

From the compare between beginner and experts above, it is obvious that the advantages of both of them are the positive factors for some important discoveries. Therefore, if experts and beginners can work together, the consequence may be better than they work individually. The creativity of beginners can remedy the restriction when experts work and the experience of experts can make the work more effective, improving the quality of the results. In addition, the relative high reputation of experts in the realm is more likely to bring financial support to the project. Hence, it is wrongheaded to draw any conclusion about who are likely to make important discoveries, no matter the referring to the beginners or the experts.

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提纲：
观点：谁做出的重大发现多不是单单看他们的身份是新手还是老手，他们各有优势，做出重大发现的是那些发挥了自身的优势又弥补了劣势的人。
1、        新手的优势：有尝试的精神（甚至不计后果），不受限有知识限制，身体状况也好；
2、        老手的优势：经验，名誉可以帮助带了经济资助。
3、        做出重大发现不是身份的问题，是能不能各自发挥自己的优势，弥补劣势。(兼做结尾)

正文：

In any domain of research, the beginners have their own advantage, while the experts also have their own ones. Who are more inclined to make significant discoveries is not determined by the status they serve as, either beginners or experts. Only by harnessing the advantages while remedying the shortcomings, can they achieve success. [开头还是简明的提出了观点]

First turning to the beginners, they have their own merits which frequently are the flaws of experts.[不是很顺畅。这个句子] First of all, beginners have passion, which can motivate them to try any access to the key to some issues, regardless of whatever the consequence will be. Although the available data may be inadequate, beginners will recklessly put them into practice and expert desirable results. Second, beginners are not restricted by the knowledge and do not think in a fixed way. For instance, Einstein broke through the existed notion of time and space at the age of 26.[这个例子要和你之前的分论点更好的联系起来，稍微提一下他怎么不受思维限制，突出新手的特点] Beginners do not always follow the routine trace. Last, the physical condition of beginners cannot serve as the obstacle in their work. Beginners are often young, which admit them can stay night to work. [至此我有个不同的观点，新手与否，不是取决于他们的年龄的吧。而是经验的多少吧]Young scholars can do experiment in lab for some days with only little sleeping. So do the new computer software programmers while designing software. All of these mentioned advantages of beginners, to some extent, are just what experts do not own. [段落层次还是一如既往的清晰]

With respect to experts, besides the shortcomings compared with beginners mentioned above, their own advantage should not be denied.[承上启下] Undoubtedly, experts have adequate experience, which help them forecast what will be happen when they do research by some method, what the consequence will be. And if the forecasted consequence is not ideal, they can adjust the project early. What is more, experts are more familiar with the knowledge, resulting in that they can work relatively efficient. For some science research, the financial support may be a vital issue and the reputation of experts in their fields, to some degrees, can help they get more financial support. Economical assistance can ensure the research on. A telling example can involve the support faculty get in every university. It is frequently those professors can get more support than the assistant.[这个观点我当时没有想到] Generally speaking, these merits of experts may be just what beginners do not have.

From the compare between beginner and experts above, it is obvious that the advantages of both of them are the positive factors for some important discoveries. Therefore, if experts and beginners can work together, the consequence may be better than they work individually. The creativity of beginners can remedy the restriction when experts work and the experience of experts can make the work more effective, improving the quality of the results. In addition, the relative high reputation of experts in the realm is more likely to bring financial support to the project. Hence, it is wrongheaded to draw any conclusion about who are likely to make important discoveries, no matter the referring to the beginners or the experts.[结尾是一个深化]
[很羡慕你可以限时成功的，语言或者其他方面也都会越来越好的。加油哈。继续互拍]

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In any domain of research, the beginners have their own advantage, while the experts also have their own onesred(前面是advantage, 这又是ones好象不太对). Who are more inclined to make significant discoveries is not determined by the status they serve as, either beginners or experts. Only by harnessing the advantages while（是不是after更好些） remedying the shortcomings, can they achieve success.

First turning to the beginners, they have their own merits which frequently are the flaws of experts（flaw用的不是很适当，虽然你想说experts的缺陷，但我觉得还是说beginners have the unique ability or idea that experts do not have 好点吧， 反正不要说初学者的优点是专家的缺点就好）. First of all, beginners have passion, which can motivate them to try any access to the key（destination通路应该向目的地吧，更顺一些吧？） to some issues, regardless of whatever the consequence will be. Although the available data may be inadequate, beginners will recklessly put them into practice and expert desirable results（这个短语在这我有点不懂什么意思）. Second, beginners are not restricted by the knowledge and do not think in a fixed way（Not confined by the experience, beginners often think everything widely）. For instance, Einstein broke through the existed notion of time and space at the age of 26.(好象例子刚起个头就结束了， 如果多写几句，不但论证的生动有力，还能多添点字数) Beginners do not always follow the routine trace（routine  is ok!delete trace,or it will be repeated）. Last, the physical condition of beginners cannot serve as the obstacle in their work（this sentence is hard to understand）. Beginners are often young（often? most of beginners are young）, which admit them can stay night to work（admit sb can? delete can or make them able to stay up all night）. Young scholars can do experiment in lab for some days（several） with only little sleeping. So do the new computer software programmers while designing software（Why use "so"? In my opinion, programmers belong to scholars. so->like）. All of these mentioned advantages of beginners, to some extent, are just what experts do not own. （or have）

With respect to experts, besides（except 吧， 你后面不是补充了，是转折） the shortcomings compared with beginners mentioned above, their own advantage should not be denied. Undoubtedly, experts have adequate experience, which help them forecast what will be happen when they do research by some method, what the consequence will be（come out）. And if the forecasted consequence is not ideal, they can adjust the project early. What is more, experts are more familiar with the knowledge, resulting in that they can work relatively efficient. For some science research, the financial support may be a vital issue and the reputation of experts in their fields, to some degrees, can help they(笔误them) get more financial support. Economical assistance can ensure the research on. A telling example can involve the support faculty get in every university. It is frequently those professors can get more support than the assistant. Generally speaking, these merits of experts may be just what beginners do not have.

From the compare between beginner and experts above, it is obvious that the advantages of both of them are the positive factors for some important discoveries. Therefore, if experts and beginners can work together, the consequence may be better than they work individually（independently）. The creativity of beginners can remedy the restriction when experts work and the experience of experts can make the work more effective,（这句话有点别弄 没太读懂） improving the quality of the results. In addition, the relative high reputation of experts in the realm is more likely to bring financial support to the project. Hence, it is wrongheaded to draw any conclusion about who are likely to make important discoveries, no matter the referring to the beginners or the experts. Sample Textbrown

你用的“can” 好多！