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rabbitvvUID: 2115592

issue7、"The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."

提纲：
1、录像的优点：
   A.图像记录往往比书面记录准确、更逼真，让人印象更深刻。
      B.图像记录往往更加公正和客观，而WRITING在事件的描述上融入了人的主观性。
2、文字的优点：
    A.图像记录只是停留在事件表面，对于事件间的联系及其含义等深层次的思考需要诉诸于文字
     B.对于数据的记录更多倚赖于书面
3、应该两者更好得结合

   With the technological progress, more and more modern tools has served to extend our capacities to record events happened in our every day lives. Video camera is rising to be one of the most brilliant stars among those tools and is regarded by the speaker as a more effective way than the traditional written records. In my opinion, both video and written records have their respective merits and disadvantages, and their combination may be a better choice.

As a fruit of modern science, Video record owns a great amount of virtues which far excel the seemingly outmoded written record. On one hand, video camera can catch events more accurate ly and vividly and thereby provide people a stronger impression. Facilitated by video camera, we can experience Oscar Night and Olympic Games vividly as though we were really sitting in the brilliant hall or brand stand. A transient smile on a star's corner of mouth, a shinning spackle on a celebrity's brilliant robe, or a fatal drop shot in a tennis game could all be caught precisely by video camera. Comparatively, correspondents' description seems to be dull and inaccurate. On the other hand, video serves to be an objective and candid witness. As a cold machine, all video camera can do is to record and offer the truth, without any subjective inclination and prejudice. For instance, before the video lens, people can see the truculent nature of the war although all the reports in the newspaper allege its justice and necessity. For that matter, if people want to realize the real face of any events, they should better resort to video record.

However, overemphasizing the benefits of video record can also bring negative consequences. Under certain circumstances, written record may be more valuable and it is unwise to overlook the power of this kind of traditional means. First of all, written records, usually the products of human kinds' mental activities, can go deep into the events while not merely staying on the surface. In this sense, with the analysis and research of the reporters, written record is surely more incisive and profound. Take the war for example again, although video can help people realize what is really happening in the battlefield, only the written record could tell people what is the purpose of this war and is there any insidious motivations behind it and what would be the meaning. What is more, video camera would be no use when it comes to the abstract statistical processing and analysis. Any supermarkets' sales conditions, including revenues and expenses every month, could only resort to written records. I doubt if the accountant is substituted by the video camera, although this machine can record each dealing happened in the supermarket every day, it can offer the total amount as well, let alone the huge cost it would cause.

Having fully realized the merits and drawbacks of video and written record, as far as I concerned, the combination of both of them would amount to be more effective. Actually, there already exists such kind of attempts. For instance, people can understand a movie or even a foreign one easily facilitated by the printed translation of the dialogue of characters at the bottom of the screen. Similarly, during the live program, usually a printed narration or a comment would flash between the scenes. In this way, audiences in the theaters or before the TV set can not only enjoy the moving and vivid pictures, but also understand the background and meanings of what is exhibited on the screen instantly.

In sum, we can not weigh one record means over another; both video camera and written records embrace certain values and also shortcomings. In some circumstances, their combination will actually create a type of record vividly as well as profoundly.

meilinUID: 2169936

issue7、"The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."

提纲：
1、录像的优点：
   A.图像记录往往比书面记录准确、更逼真，让人印象更深刻。
      B.图像记录往往更加公正和客观，而WRITING在事件的描述上融入了人的主观性。
2、文字的优点：
    A.图像记录只是停留在事件表面，对于事件间的联系及其含义等深层次的思考需要诉诸于文字
     B.对于数据的记录更多倚赖于书面
3、应该两者更好得结合

   With the technological progress, more and more modern tools has served to extend our capacities to record events happened in our every day lives. Video camera is rising to be one of the most brilliant stars among those tools and is regarded by the speaker as a more effective way than the traditional written records. In my opinion, both video and written records have their respective merits and disadvantages, and their combination（the combination of them好象） may be a better choice.

As a fruit of modern science, Video record owns a great amount of virtues which far excel（应该是 video record excel// He excels others in knowledge,excel换用法）the seemingly outmoded written record. On one hand, video camera can catch events more accurate ly and vividly and thereby provide people a stronger impression（ms缺少比较对象）. Facilitated by video camera, we can experience Oscar Night and Olympic Games vividly as though we were really sitting in the brilliant hall or（on the） brand stand. A transient smile on a star's corner of mouth, a shinning spackle on a celebrity's brilliant robe, or a fatal drop shot in a tennis game could all be caught precisely by video camera. Comparatively, correspondents' description seems to be dull and inaccurate（inaccruate用在词不要，为什么seeming inaccurate？）. On the other hand, video serves to be an objective and candid witness. As a cold（这个好象不太合适，我也没想出很好的替换词） machine, all video camera can do is to record and offer the truth, without any subjective inclination and prejudice. For instance, before the video lens, people can see the truculent （and evil）nature of the war although all the reports in the newspaper allege（propagate宣扬） its justice and necessity. For that matter, if people want to realize the real face（clarify the truth//actual facts） of any events, they should better resort（be better off resorting） to video record.

However, overemphasizing the benefits of video record can also bring（about） negative consequences. Under certain circumstances, written record may be more valuable and it is unwise to overlook the power of this kind of traditional means. First of all, written records, usually the products of human kinds' mental activities, can go deep into the events while not （instead of）merely staying on the surface. In this sense, with the analysis and research of the reporters, written record is surely more incisive and profound. Take the war for example again, although video can help people realize what is really happening in the battlefield, only the written record could tell people what is the purpose of this war and is there any insidious motivations behind it and what would be the meaning. What is more, video camera would be no use when it comes to the abstract statistical processing and analysis. Any supermarkets' sales conditions, including revenues and expenses every month, could only resort to written records. I doubt if the accountant is（could be） substituted by the video camera, although this machine can record each dealing happened in the supermarket every day, it can offer the total amount as well, let alone the huge cost it would cause.

Having fully realized the merits and drawbacks of video and written record, as far as I concerned, the combination of both of them would amount to be more effective. Actually, there already exists（exist） such kind of attempts. For instance, people can understand a movie or even a foreign one easily facilitated by the printed translation of the dialogue of characters at the bottom of the screen. Similarly, during the live program, usually a printed narration or a comment would flash between the scenes. In this way, audiences in the theaters or before the TV set can not only enjoy the moving and vivid pictures, but also understand the background and meanings of what is exhibited on the screen instantly.

In sum, we can not weigh（weigh好象不可一这样用） one record means over another; both video camera and written records embrace certain values and also shortcomings. In some circumstances, their combination will actually create a type of record vividly as well as profoundly.
总体来说还不错，就是B3那个例子，我想即使有caption的话，也不可能有时间去深入了解，不如写看完电影，看相关的剧本或者小说，深入了解

linda_zhengUID: 2124165

好困啊,先睡了,明早就改

linda_zhengUID: 2124165

issue7、"The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."

提纲：
1、录像的优点：
   A.图像记录往往比书面记录准确、更逼真，让人印象更深刻。
      B.图像记录往往更加公正和客观，而WRITING在事件的描述上融入了人的主观性。
2、文字的优点：
    A.图像记录只是停留在事件表面，对于事件间的联系及其含义等深层次的思考需要诉诸于文字
     B.对于数据的记录更多倚赖于书面
3、应该两者更好得结合

   With the technological progress, more and more modern tools has served to extend our capacities to record events happened in our every day lives. Video camera is rising to be one of the most brilliant stars 这句好哦，赞一个among those tools and is regarded by the speaker as a more effective way than the traditional written records. In my opinion, both video and written records have their respective merits and disadvantages, and their combination may be a better choice.

As a fruit of modern science, Video record owns a great amount of virtues which far excel the seemingly outmoded written record主体句在具体一些就更好了，让改卷人一眼就明白讲了哪些缺点. On one hand, video camera can catch events more accurate ly and vividly， and thereby provide(provides) people a stronger impression. Facilitated by video camera, we can experience Oscar Night and Olympic Games vividly as though we were really sitting in the brilliant hall or brand stand. A transient smile on a star's corner of mouth, a shinning spackle on a celebrity's brilliant robe, or a fatal drop shot in a tennis game could all be caught precisely by video camera. 奥斯卡和世界杯选一个写吧，两个混在一起些看着不舒服Comparatively, correspondents' description seems to be dull and inaccurate. On the other hand, video serves to be an objective and candid witness. As a cold machine, that all video camera can do is to record and offer the truth, without any subjective inclination and prejudice. For instance, before the video lens, people can see the truculent nature of the war although all the reports in the newspaper allege its justice and necessity. For that matter, if people want to realize the real face of any events, they should better resort to video record.第一个分论点的accurate在分析中没有展开，反倒是和第二个分论点有些相近了

However, overemphasizing the benefits of video record can also bring negative consequences. Under certain circumstances, written record may be more valuable and it is unwise to overlook the power of this kind of traditional means. First of all, written records, usually the products of human kinds' mental activities, can go deep into the events while not merely staying on the surface. In this sense, with the analysis and research of the reporters, written record is surely more incisive and profound. Take the war for example again, although video can help people realize what is really happening in the battlefield, only the written record could tell people what is the purpose of this war and is there any insidious motivations behind it and what would be the meaning. What is more, video camera would be no use when it comes to the abstract statistical processing and analysis. Any supermarkets' sales conditions, including revenues and expenses every month, could only resort to written records. I doubt if the accountant is substituted by the video camera, although this machine can record each dealing happened in the supermarket every day, it can offer the total amount as well, let alone the huge cost it would cause. 最后这句读起来有点怪，是什么意思啊？这一段感觉逻辑很好，尤其是第一个分论点

Having fully realized the merits and drawbacks of video and written record, as far as I concerned, the combination of both of them would amount to be more effective. Actually, there already exists such kind of attempts. For instance, people can understand a movie or even a foreign one easily facilitated by the printed translation of the dialogue of characters at the bottom of the screen. Similarly, during the live program, usually a printed narration or a comment would flash between the scenes. 这两个例子仔细想想都是文字记录辅助影像资料的，也可以举一个影像辅助文字的，比如我们分析历史问题的时候，可以先看一些影像资料，感官认识辅助理性分析，呵呵，一点个人看法哈In this way, audiences in the theaters or before the TV set can not only enjoy the moving and vivid pictures, but also understand the background and meanings of what is exhibited on the screen instantly.

In sum, we can not weigh one record means over another我查了一下字典，没有weigh over这种说法，兔子姐姐在那里见到过吗？ ; both video camera and written records embrace certain values and also shortcomings. In some circumstances, their combination will actually create a type of record vividly as well as profoundly