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[i习作temp] ISSUE15 Toheart(cavana)想了两个思路 哪个更好呢 [复制链接]

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发表于 2006-2-15 10:36:41 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
论点:社会的稳定性更取决于社会对造成人们极端行为的问题的反应
而不仅仅是行为本身
1表明观点

2 极端的行为往往是由人们一时冲动做出来的。由于不理智,
这些肇事者本身很可能在事情发生之后会很后悔。而这些不理智的极端行为
很大可能造成他人或自己生命财产,或国家资源的重大损失,而无法挽回。
极端行为会导致犯法犯罪。社会根据法律对犯法犯罪人的处置,是对受害人
的一种补偿,也是对罪犯的惩罚,也是对世人的警告。因为有了这些惩罚措施
人们才会考虑这些极端行为的成本,而倾向于用合法温和的手段解决问题
人与人之间的伤害少了,国家的损失少了,社会才能稳定

3对极端行为的回应往往体现了一个社会的道德准则和价值观(这段没写, 怕跑题)

4 解决极端行为的根本是解决造成这些极端行为的问题。任何人都有维护自己
利益的权利,当这些利益受到严重损害,而其他途径又到不到很好的解决的时候
人们很可能采取极端的行为来伸张他们的权利。这个时候,如果仅仅是采取对
极端行为的镇压,而不去想办法用其他途径解决根本问题,这种极端行为会
一再得出现。例如,一个地区的政府腐败问题很严重,政府官员挪用贪污大额公款而
当地的居民却过得很艰辛的生活,势必会造成居民的极大不满,人们会上街游行,甚
至和警察造成武装冲突,如果这个时候对政府官员的行为坐视不管,而对居民
的游行严加禁止,问题不但得不到解决,反而会使居民和政府之间的矛盾越
来越深,社会的安定会遭到极大的损害

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TOPIC: ISSUE 15 - "The stability of a society depends on how it responds to the extremes of human behavior."
WORDS: 470          TIME: 0:45:00          DATE: 2006-2-15

I fundamentally agree to the speaker that the stability of a society depends on how it responds to the extremes of human behavior. Moreover, in my view, how a society copes with the conflicts causing these extreme behaviors has greater affection on the stability of it.

Usually, the extreme behaviors are driven by the insensible mind of human. Lacking of the reason, people are probable to do something they will regret for after they calm down. Because insensible, these behaviors have great possibility to do harm to lives and belongings of others and themselves, and resources of nation. There are so many examples that people killed their family members by the force of angry, and upset persons burnt a great extent of forest which belongs to the nation. These damages are so severe, and could not be made up any more. And, these extreme behavior leads to crime. A society has to punish the criminals and their behaviors, in order to offset the damage of victims, and to give warnings to other people to acknowledge them that the serious result of crime and extreme behaviors. So people would like to solve problems with gentler avenues since they know what they have to pay out by extreme behaviors. If a society lacks such laws to limit people's extreme behaviors, it is indescribable how disordered the society would be.

Furthermore, to decrease the extreme behaviors, a society should pay more attention on how to deal with the causes leading to these behaviors. Every one has rights to protect his or her own benefits, if she or he could not have any other way to stop their benefits from damaged, she or he is probably to adapt extreme behaviors to against that. If a society only establish limits and punishment on extreme behaviors, but not make any effort to solve the causing problems, the extreme behaviors will never be dismissed. For  example, the government  in a town have every sever corruption problems,  the officials of which have defalcated great amount of tax every year, but the citizens there are living  poor lives. The public have to parade to show their rage on these officials and protest them to be government officials any longer. And violent conflicts happen between the citizens and the army. At that time, if the society just limits public extreme behavior, and take no action to punish these government officials, the clash between citizens and government will be more and more acutely. The stability of the society will be damaged badly if this situation goes on.

In sum, to keep the stability the society should have establish some laws to limit and punish extreme behaviors which leads to bad result, and the more important thing the society should pay attention on is to solve the ultimate contradictions at all.

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发表于 2006-2-15 10:44:10 |只看该作者

后来想想, 再写了一个思路

1人们为什么会有极端的行为,因为个人素养问题 因为除了极端行为之外没有别的解决办法

2极端行为会产生怎么样的后果,是否有好的方面的?(似乎是没有)不好的后果有很多,会造成自己或他人的身心伤害,严重的损害他人财产,生命,导致犯罪。

3 对于极端行为,社会应该怎样处理,对极端行为本身要加以限制,对造成这种行为的原因要加以解决。一个社会公民的受教育程度很大程度上决定了人们的素质水平,社会应该为民众提供更好的受教育的 条件,至少也要普及法律知识和提倡道德修养,让人们形成一个正确的观念。

4对于造成极端行为的原因,社会应该尽最大努力解决,否则这些极端行为是无法从根本上减少的。人都有权利维护自己的利益,当自己的利益受到严重威胁,却没有别的方法可以有效解决的时候,人们迫不得已采取极端行为。如果不根本解决,冲突会越来越激烈。。。这段同上文

5总结

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发表于 2006-2-15 10:57:56 |只看该作者

大家帮我看看 哪个思路更好一点

个人觉得第二个更好

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