Issue196 同主题 科技解决或是创造问题 不一样的写法不知可否 欢迎讨论

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Issue196   
“Technology creates more problems than it solves, and may threaten or damage the quality of life”
采用了跟大家普遍不一样的写法，不知可不可取，望达人指教！
1 科技带来的好处和问题（长寿，网络；污染，失业）
2 科技是无辜的，人决定了科技的作用（核能与核武器）
3 人们责怪科技，实际是责怪自己。人类完全可以更好的利用科技
While we are enjoying the benefits and comforts that technology has brought to our life, a

sense of insecurity arises alongside. The statement above well represents the condemnation

of some people toward technology. In my opinion, technology is innocent; both its merits and demerits are due to people who create it and use it in substance. Whether it has created

more problems or solved, is determined by people.

Obvious are the advantages and disadvantages of the era of technology now that we have been in it for long. For one, human's life-span is extended because of the ever-improving

technology of medical treatment: we can now fight off some of the diseases that used to be

fatal in the past, like tuberculosis; and we have become stronger in combating some others,

though not completely defeated, like cancer and diabetes. For another, people's lives are

now far more exciting then ever before: we can go to almost anywhere on the earth we wish to go to, even the opposite of the globe, thanks to the technology of transportation; we can communicate with people around the world instantly, by the aid of Internet technology; the confine of time and space is almost eliminated. Meanwhile, we are suffering from more. The exhaust of automobiles has notably decreases the number of the days we can see the blue-sky; thousands of workers have to confront the fortune of being laid off since technology has made their work unnecessary any more. While we are better off, we are worse off at the same time.

However, we should not blame technology for these drawbacks more than we should simply sing high of the improvement. Technology is only something that are being developed, and utilized by human. What effect there would be is totally in control of human ourselves. One

illuminating example is the use of nuclear. While it is becoming an important substitute to

the traditional resources, such as coals and water power, and are millions times more

efficient in producing electricity, which lights up the way to solve the problem of resource

exhaust; it is meanwhile a biggest threat to the safety of people. Nuclear weapons, also,

has become the greatest concern of the international world, being the fuse of several wars,

for instance, Iraq War. The explosion of the nuclear bomb in Hiroshima, 1945, is still a

nightmare of many people who were fortunate enough to survive in that disaster, as well as

unfortunate enough to suffer from the both terrible memory and the radioactive effect which

is still unclear. Then could we announce that it is the responsibility of technology itself

that leads to all this merit and demerit? Absolutely not. It is the people who dedicated in

turning the enormous energy of nuclear reaction to people's use that makes the nuclear

technology beneficial; on the other hand, it is those who utilize this technology in the

field of military affairs that ultimately bring the disaster.

Therefore, when we feel like criticizing technology for the problems it has created and the

damage of the quality of our life, we should realize that we are, as a matter of fact,

criticizing ourselves. We can choose the role of technology on our own. If we focus all our

effort in making better use of technology, say, to produce more delicate videos with the

camera instead of detecting the privacy of other people with it, or to research on the

methods to improve the environment, rather than discarding the waste of modern industry into

the nature. Then we can expect for a really better life.

In closing, this statement contains an issue far more beyond a simple debate on whether

technology has made more contribution or done more harm. It is the people who determine the final conclusion.

yuchenUID：2111079

While we are enjoying the benefits and comforts that technology has brought to our life, a
sense of insecurity arises alongside. The statement above well represents the condemnation

of some people toward technology. In my opinion, technology is innocent; both its merits and demerits are due to people who create it and use it in substance. Whether it has created

more problems or solved, is determined by people.

Obvious are the advantages and disadvantages of the era of technology now that we have been in it for long. For one, human's life-span is extended because of the ever-improving

technology of medical treatment: we can now fight off some of the diseases that used to be

fatal in the past, like tuberculosis; and we have become stronger in combating some others,

though not completely defeated, like cancer and diabetes. For another, people's lives are

now far more exciting then(than) ever before: we can go to almost anywhere on the earth we wish to go to, even the opposite of the globe, thanks to the technology of transportation; we can communicate with people around the world instantly, by the aid of Internet technology; the confine of time and space is almost eliminated. Meanwhile, we are suffering from more【这句是不是就说明你同意题目中的这句话Technology creates more problems than it solves。但是在你上面的举例中可看不出more在那里，你举好处的例子要比坏处多】. The exhaust of automobiles has notably decreases the number of the days we can see the blue-sky; thousands of workers have to confront the fortune of being laid off since technology has made their work unnecessary any more. While we are better off, we are worse off at the same time.

However, we should not blame technology for these drawbacks more than we should simply sing high of the improvement. Technology is only something that are being developed, and utilized by human. What effect there would be？ is totally in control of human ourselves. One

illuminating example is the use of nuclear. While it is becoming an important substitute to

the traditional resources, such as coals and water power, and are millions times more

efficient in producing electricity, which lights up the way to solve the problem of resource

exhaust; it is meanwhile a biggest threat to the safety of people. Nuclear weapons, also,

has become the greatest concern of the international world, being the fuse of several wars,

for instance, Iraq War. The explosion of the nuclear bomb in Hiroshima, 1945, is still a

nightmare of many people who were fortunate enough to survive in that disaster, as well as

unfortunate enough to suffer from the both terrible memory and the radioactive effect which

is still unclear. Then could we announce that it is the responsibility of technology itself

that leads to all this merit and demerit? Absolutely not. It is the people who dedicated in

turning the enormous energy of nuclear reaction to people's use that makes the nuclear

technology beneficial; on the other hand, it is those who utilize this technology in the

field of military affairs that ultimately bring the disaster【这个是不是没有展开】.

Therefore, when we feel like criticizing technology for the problems it has created and the

damage of the quality of our life, we should realize that we are, as a matter of fact,

criticizing ourselves. We can choose the role of technology on our own. If we focus all our

effort in making better use of technology, say, to produce more delicate videos with the

camera instead of detecting the privacy of other people with it, or to research on the

methods to improve the environment, rather than discarding the waste of modern industry into

the nature. Then we can expect for a really better life.

In closing, this statement contains an issue far more beyond a simple debate on whether

technology has made more contribution or done more harm. It is the people who determine the final conclusion.

语言很干净，这点要赞。至于观点只要自己能说清楚就好，你的观点很好，但论证时如果能在多几个句子向题目靠近就好了。同主题的第一篇（第二篇）参考例文中有一段的观点和你很相似，我觉得那个靠题靠的就很好。

[ 本帖最后由 yuchen 于 2006-2-27 12:54 编辑 ]

yuchenUID：2111079

不好意思，应该是看第二篇，这里给链接，看修改过的那个
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... issue196&page=2

yuchenUID：2111079

我也写了这篇，发上来看看！
欢迎互拍，谢谢
http://edu.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1