第一篇TWE－topic5-同主题第一篇（刚写过AW，再写这个很不适应啊哈）

dhfpsyUID: 2167022

5.A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

4-11 20:09-20:39
As the saying goes, every coin has two sides, so are to build a factory in our community. On the one hand, it is out of question that to build a factory is instructive to promote the development of economy of our community. On the other hand, some harmful effect which the factory brings out will be in front of us so as to attract us much attention to prevent, such as water and air pollution and the like. I will discuss the advantage and disadvantage below.

Certainly, anyone could not ravel the advantages of building a factory in our community. It is a necessary outcome that so many jobs could be provided by the factory, which is helpful to solve the problem, people out of work. If a majority of residents in our community could get a content job, the society of the community will become more stable and the number of commit rates will decline with the advancement of quality of people’s life. In addition, though the factory could gain great profits every year, our government also gain more tax from it so that the financial problem might be solved easily. Moreover, given the poor situation of transportation in our community, it is necessary for us to repair the road and highway, especially for the convenience of business transportation of the factory.

However, as we try to emphasize the good merits of building a factory in our community, next in importance to be considered is its disadvantages. Firstly, we should consider what kind the factory is. If the major product of the factory is to produce metal or plastic goods, the extent of pollution might be heavy. Thus, it is necessary for us to evaluate the possibility of the extent of pollution the factory will bring out. Furthermore, whether the factory could gain great profits is open to doubt. So, the question, that is, how far the site providing raw material is from the community, what about the need of the right product the factory will produce in the market and the like, should be concerned before we come to a conclusion.

In brief, if the pollution is not heavy and there is a good prospective in market, we strongly agree the recommendation of the company. And by this way, more people who are out of work could make their living and the financial problem of the government might be solved easily.

有改必复！

另有两个愚蠢的问题：
1TWE考多长时间？
2TWE要写多少字？一般分几段？

xiaoce1984UID: 2176488

1 TWE 30分钟
2 多少字不太清楚 最好能到300吧 也是听别人说的
   开头一段 结尾一段 中间二到四段都可以吧

xiaoce1984UID: 2176488

As the saying goes, every coin has two sides, so are to build a factory in our community.
感觉这句很好 是不是在这种文章中都用得上呢？

undoerlcUID: 194641

1TWE考多长时间？
2TWE要写多少字？一般分几段？
答: 1.30分钟  2. 字数是300上够用,不过经验表明如果文章写得不是很精练的话字数多了有分数上升的趋势(当然不是没话找话废话连篇那种),所以我们老师建议是能写400尽量400W,毕竟你以前ARGUMENT25分钟写500训练过挑战不是很大; 段落就是那样吧,我自己还是喜欢理由段给3个,写惯了3个了.

自己把老师上课一些东西总结了一下,看看有用没^^

undoerlcUID: 194641

(404 words)-LZ强的说,30分钟写了400W成功类^^赞!
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As the saying goes, every coin has two sides, so are to build a factory in our community. On the one hand, it is out of question that to build a factory is instructive to promote the development of economy of our community. On the other hand, some harmful effect which the factory brings out (带来:bring about 或 引起:bring on) will be in front of us so as to attract us much attention to prevent, such as water and air pollution and the like. I will discuss the advantage and disadvantage below.

Certainly, anyone could not ravel(?) the advantages of building a factory in our community. It is a necessary outcome that so many jobs could be provided by the factory, which is helpful to solve the problem, people out of work. If a majority of residents in our community could get a content job, the society of the community will become more stable and the number of commit rates (crime rate或criminal rate) will decline with(due to) the advancement of quality of people’s life. In addition, though the factory could gain great profits every year, our government also gain more tax from it so that the financial problem might be solved easily. Moreover, given the poor situation of transportation in our community, it is necessary for us to repair the road and highway, especially for the convenience of business transportation of the factory.

However, as we try to emphasize the good merits of building a factory in our community, next in importance to be considered is its disadvantages. Firstly, we should consider what kind the factory is. If the major product(product is to produce?可以换aim,objective) of the factory is to produce metal or plastic goods, the extent of pollution might be heavy. Thus, it is necessary for us to evaluate the possibility of the extent of pollution the factory will bring out. Furthermore, whether the factory could gain great profits is open to doubt. So, the question, that is, how far the site providing raw material is from the community(这句感觉语序有些问题,是否改成:how far it is from the center of the raw material to the location of the factory), what about the need of the right product the factory will produce in the market and the like, should be concerned before we come to a conclusion.

In brief, if the pollution is not heavy and there is a good prospective in market(the sales of the product of the company is of great prospective on the market这样比较平行一些), we(I) strongly agree the recommendation of the company. And by this way, more people who are out of work could make their living and the financial problem of the government might be solved easily(可以改平行一些).

[[个人的感觉因为写惯ISSUE的不太喜欢case by case写,因为这样比较行成自己观点要难写很多,虽然TWE不要求逻辑上论证很强,不过TWE有什么好写写什么这一点,所以觉得能偏向一方写就尽量不case by case. 两段写法没有概念,不知道分2段好不好,因为英语中有成3规则]] 框内为个人看法~ 另外,可以自己改写提高语句,毕竟TWE语句最重要别在逻辑上下工夫

undoerlcUID: 194641

另还有你拍我时的问题:
1.呵呵,如果把ARGUMENT那套辩论都拿过来,什么文章都没办法写了,这点写ISSUE时就已经是这样了,伪造名人逸事,伪造数据,伪造例子已经是老外最信服的方法了,他是要知道你知道树立观点后怎么来支持你的观点,并不要去攻击你逻辑完备性,逻辑完备性即使在最完备的数学物理中也很难具备,都是基于假设的
2.最后一句主要想呼应一下,自己说自己好罢了^^

dhfpsyUID: 2167022

呵谢谢各位的指点！
对TWE有点初步概念了哈！

TWE重语言？句子结构多样化？

呵觉得TWE比AW难写，难于展开，可能是没有准备例子的缘故？

感谢undoerlc帮拍，指出的几处问题都是写的时候犹豫着不知如何落笔的哈！＾＾