5T同题写作第三期作文 请指教

danielfeiUID: 2143290

“Life is like a box of chocolate , you never know what you are going to get .” these are really classic , popular words from a particular movie , from which we can not only know about a story the movie told us , but also learn some ideas ,even personalities that a great movie or a fantastic TV show can have . So it is obvious that movies or television affect people’s behavior now and then .

First of all , powerful movies and great television program can show us great images , give us useful knowledge and the wisdom of our lives . For example , a very popular television program called discovery , which contains a lot of new and exciting things about nature and our human being , has brought us a tremendous pleasure , and given us the adventure we can never acquire from our daily lives . That is amazing ! Also , we can learn many skills such as cooking or swimming from the teaching program .

Secondly , I must mention movies bring a great number of fans and pleasures to us , especially for me as a huge fan of movies .
Some boys and girls even imitated the person in movies . A boy living near me dressed like the Superperson in a morning , and it really scared me more or less , it is funny! We can not miss Hollywood if we talk about movie . As the largest movie producer in the world , the Hollywood has affected the whole world a lot . Not only its classic movies , but also the culture and the value its movies acquired has been transplanted all over the world .

However , we can not deny that the movies or television influence lots of people in a bad way . Such movies or TV programs , which talked about crime or sex , can have a strong impact on our society , and it is not good impact at all . For instance , a teenager may have some kind of bad influence , after he or she go through a movie about fighting and shooting , that is so terrible .

Finally , although movies or television can affect people negatively more or less , I also conclude that movies or television not only have influenced people’ behavior a lot , but also improved the circumstance of our society , and even have an tremendous effect on our personalities and our spirits .

kanganqiUID: 2156211

总体来说还是不错的
请尽量不要用firstly secondly开头，有点缺乏新意
也请少用I we 之类的词，这会使文章缺乏客观性

danielfeiUID: 2143290

谢了！
楼上的请把你写的连接帖出来啊
我给你回拍

[ 本帖最后由 danielfei 于 2006-4-21 22:08 编辑 ]