同主题第三期，topic7，请多指教，互拍，谢谢

夜一UID: 2130338

已经遵照斑竹的要求尽量现时写了，然而写的时候虽然基本没有超时，但是抄上来的时候，一边抄一边改，严重超时了。。。要继续努力

Movies and television are popular in modern societies. As a result of their popularity, they influence people’s behavior to some extent. They set samples for people to copy, raise topics for people to discuss, and provide social telescopes for people to see further and clearer.

As methods of transporting images, movies and televisions offer people samples to copy. Young children have their parents buy ears and clothes of Mickey Mouse for them. Teenagers write down in their dairies dreams of becoming heroes in movies or series. Adults learn wisdom and courage from movies of television when facing with problems or evils. Movies and television gives people vivid images of beauty and bravery, which attract their hearts and rouse their enthusiasm of imitating.

Besides, as a part of modern media, movies and television raise topics for people to discuss. They provide people information of current society, knowledge of increasing knowledge, and views from directors, editors, or sociologists. On watching movies, people chat about the sadness on Waterloo Bridge, the bravery of Forest Gun, and the beauty of love in Titanic. On watching television, people talk about problems in community, principles ordered by local government, or interactions between hemispheres. Movies and television inform people current situation, enable them to discuss various views and facts.

Furthermore, movies and television provide people social telescopes to see further and clearer. Showed the disaster in The Day After Tomorrow, people realize the value of their homeland, the importance of protecting environment, and the absurdity of governments which judge everything only by profits. Informed different views of one fact, people understand how to judge, how to distinguish, and how to react. Owed to movies and television, people obtain a further and clearer sight of their society.

Movies and television offer people vivid images, a great deal of information, and useful social telescopes, which provide people samples, topics, and a further and clearer sight. They do influence people’s behavior to a considerable degree.

foolboy007UID: 28322

twe要争取一次尽量写对
很低级的语法错误不要犯

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Movies and television are popular in modern societies. As a result of their popularity, they influence people’s behavior to some extent. They set samples for people to copy, raise topics for people to discuss, and provide social telescopes for people to see further and clearer.

methods of transporting images, movies and televisions offer people samples to copy（copy的话 感觉没有imitate好）. Young children have（记得听过一个听力说hava make get的区别 have应该是商量达成一致的使 感觉应该用make 属于要求） their parents buy ears and clothes of Mickey Mouse for them. Teenagers write down in their dairies dreams of becoming heroes in movies or series. Adults learn wisdom（感觉wisdom这个东西 不好学来吧 knowledge倒是可以） and courage from movies of television when facing with problems or evils. Movies and television gives people vivid images of beauty and bravery, which attract their hearts（heart 删了） and rouse their enthusiasm of imitating.

Besides, as a part of modern media, movies and television raise topics for people to discuss. They provide people information of current society, knowledge of increasing knowledge, and views from directors, editors, or sociologists. On watching movies, people chat about the sadness on Waterloo Bridge, the bravery of Forest Gun, and the beauty of love in Titanic.（好像范文里面见过） On watching television, people talk about problems in community, principles ordered by local government, or interactions between hemispheres. Movies and television inform people current situation, enable them to discuss various views and facts

Furthermore, movies and television provide people social telescopes to see further and clearer. Showed the disaster in The Day After Tomorrow, people realize the value of their homeland, the importance of protecting environment, and the absurdity of governments which judge everything only by profits.（很不错的例子） Informed different views of one fact, people understand how to judge, how to distinguish, and how to react. Owed to movies and television, people obtain a further and clearer sight of their society.

Movies and television offer people vivid images（和上面重复了）, a great deal of information, and useful social telescopes, which provide people samples, topics, and a further and clearer sight. They do influence people’s behavior to a considerable degree.

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夜一UID: 2130338

谢谢foolboy007 (含笑半步颠)斑竹纠正错误
在抄上来的过程中，由于一直拿不准所用的论述与表达是否会偏离题意，费了老半天劲，结果还是不尽人意，尤其是第四段，怎么写怎么不好，完全比不上166的感觉
谢谢ben26102 帮我拍文
关于have，have someone do something，是劝说或迫使的意思，我想用在这里，描写小孩子缠着父母要买的那种情景，虽然是很久以前学的，不过是字典里的用法，应该不会有错
关于wisdom，我是比较坚持要用的
还有，范文里真的有同样的句子么？偶还米有看过这片的范文，只是偶看的电影太少，就只有那几部。。如果可以的话偶真得很想把动画片拿出来举例子，可惜ETS哪些人肯定没听说过，还是只能用米国的大片。。。

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写的还是不错的。不过要注意语法问题哦。好好弄一下会写出很好的文章呢。
你可以举 sadness Titanic  brave Brave Heart  love The Bridges Of Madison Country

夜一UID: 2130338

谢谢，不过后面那两个，连名字都没有看到过。。。
我看过的米国电影总共也不超过5部，叫得出名字的就只有那三个。。。我这个人比较奇怪。。。。。