Issue87 【黄金十二宫－白羊宫】第十二次作业(6.26)

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In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries
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不同的研究领域，结果不同，取决于该领域是否拥有科学的理论基础
1.        在科学不发达的时候，很多学科的初生牛犊更容易打破传统。
2.        居里夫人经过科学的推测和长期的努力，终于取得成功。
3.        在多数的艺术领域，激情四射的天才们更容易成功。

Undoubtedly, the statement above is excessively dogmatical. It is due to whether the field of inquiry has a mature and scientific system where all researches are based.

When our scientific field are immature and filled with fallacious theories, the beginner's spark and impavitity help them break tranditionary bonds.  For example, frederick Reines is American physicist and co-winner of the 1995 Nobel Prize in physics for his confirmation of the exit  The major new developments during the first third fo the 20th century, the quantum theory changed the understanding of physics as it is known today. According to classical physics, all molecules in a solid can vibrate with the amplitude of hte vibrations directly related to the temperature. As a tyro of physics, Planck made a radical assumption by postulating that the molecular oscillator could emit electromagnetic waves only in discrete bundles, now called quanta,or photons. Planck's discoveries, which were later verified by other scientists, were the basis of an entirely nes field of physics, know as quantum mechanic.

However, in most of field of science, the expert with a high degree of skill in or knowledge of a certain subject always make more important discoveries. Before a new theory or invention be founded, the expert often speculate an possible result according to a its scientific academic basic. So the fact of success is long-term study which the beginner impossibly hold. For example , Madame Curie was an early investigator of radioactivity. She discovered that the metallic element thorium and the mineral pitchblende  emit radiation even more radiation than its uranium and thorium chntest could cause. So she rationally confered that an unknown element could be producing the radioactivity. She then carried out an exhaustive search for the substance by processing an enormous amount of pitchblende,separating it into its chemical components. After hardly and agelong work, the Curies announced the discovery of the element polonium, followed in December of  that year with the discovery of the element radium. Without scientific illation and long - term endeavor, it is impossible to believe that she would success.

Moreover, in most of field of art, the beginner always possibly overthrow customary mode. Such as painting, van gogh whose work represents the archetype of expressionism, the idea of emotional spontaneity in painting was influenced by the work of the impressionists. Abandon early used dark and silent, he turned to try his best to catch hold of subjective feelings and emotions rather than to depict reality or nature bojectively, which is unable to accepted by many skilled masters. It is well known that ,besides field of painting, there are many infant prodigy in the field of music.For instance, Mozart is considered one of the most birlliant and versatile composer ever.By the time Mozart died at age 35, he had completed numerous inspired works . Six as he is, he made musical performance , without any professional and long train. After all, genius and enthusiasm are more important than proficiency and experience  in the field of art. The beginner may become a maestro easily  and created  great production , compared with so-called old artist.

In sum, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries in some of field of inquiry . It  lie on the essence of  this field of inquiry whether it is  scientific and precise or not.

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Undoubtedly, the statement above is excessively dogmatical. It is due to whether the field of inquiry has a mature and scientific system where all researches are based.

When our scientific fields are immature and filled with fallacious theories, the beginner's spark and impavitity help them break tranditionary bonds.  For example, frederick Reines is American physicist and co-winner of the 1995 Nobel Prize in physics for his confirmation of the exit这里是想说existence吧  The major new developments during the first third to the 20th century, the quantum theory changed the understanding of physics as it is known todaychange是个不及物动词,不能说A change B,要么说A makes B change;那个first third是什么意思?. According to classical physics, all molecules in a solid can vibrate with the amplitude of the vibrations应该是vibration of amplitude吧 directly related to the temperature. As a tyro of physics, Planck made a radical assumption by postulating that the molecular oscillator could emit electromagnetic waves only in discrete bundles, now called quanta,or photons. Planck's discoveries, which were later verified by other scientists, were the basis of an entirely nes:confused: field of physics, known as quantum mechanic.

However, in most of删 field of science, the expert with a high degree of skill in or knowledge of a certain subject always make more important discoveries. Before a new theory or invention be founded, the expert often speculate a possible result according to its scientific academic basic. So the fact of success is long-term study which the beginner impossibly holds. For example , Madame Curie was an early investigator of radioactivity. She discovered that the metallic element thorium and the mineral pitchblende  emit radiation even more radiation than its uranium and thorium chntest could cause. So she rationally confered that an unknown element could be producing the radioactivity could produce the radioacticity. She then carried out an exhaustive search for the substance by processing an enormous amount of pitchblende,separating it into its chemical components. After hardly and agelong work, the Curies announced the discovery of the element polonium, followed in December of  that year with the discovery of the element radium. Without scientific illation and long - term endeavor, it is impossible to believe that she would success.

Moreover, in most field of art, the beginner always possibly overthrow customary mode. Such as painting, van gogh whose work represents the archetype of expressionism, the idea of emotional spontaneity in painting was influenced by the work of the impressionists这一句的逻辑有点乱.... Abandon early used dark and silent, he turned to try his best to catch hold of subjective feelings and emotions rather than to depict reality or nature bojectively, which is unable to accepted by many skilled masters. It is well known that ,besides field of painting, there are many infant prodigy in the field of music.For instance, Mozart is considered one of the most birlliant and versatile composer ever.By the time Mozart died at age of 35, he had completed numerous inspired works . Six as he is, he made musical performance , without any professional and long train. After all, genius and enthusiasm are more important than proficiency and experience  in the field of art. The beginner may become a maestro easily  and created  great production , compared with so-called old artist.

In sum, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries in some of field of inquiry . It  lie on the essence of  this field of inquiry whether it is  scientific and precise or not.

这次是我来改你的么??

关于语法:要注意单复数的搭配.还有很多小的拼写错误,要注意检查.过多的错误依然会影响判卷人的评分.

关于选材:感觉居里夫人做实验的过程描述得过细.其实很多名词不用写出来的,只要说明就好,反而在说明其作用上欠缺一些支持.感觉没说圆.

本来不是很确定是不是可以写艺术创作,现在确定咯.asong想得好~~

[ 本帖最后由 微末三月 于 2006-6-27 22:14 编辑 ]

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谢谢三月，我现在对例子的选择处于迷茫期，找的时候花很多的功夫，找到后怎样写也让我挠头，下次issue的目标就是让例子为ts服务

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我想说的是
这里的field of inquiry是否包括艺术？
我的理解这里应该指研究领域，即探索未知
艺术无所谓什么重大发现吧？
所以楼主的第三段实际上是离题的