Issue83 FLY AW小组第23次作业（523字）

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Issue83  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：46分2秒     519 words
从2006年5月29日18时8分到2006年5月29日18时46分
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Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people.
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Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even though these areas, such as forests and deserts, are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people.

First of all, human beings should protect the ecosystems in these areas, which are important but usually fragile. These areas play a crucial role in the evolvement of Earth's history, whether physically, chemically, and biologically. The existing ecosystems in such areas are of prefect research value, as they have documented the development of nature, which is much less influenced by human beings, compared with urban or rural areas. Through studying the current status and history records of these areas, human beings can better understand the natural evolvement of Earth and space. These data are so important that they cannot be replaced by any other records. Nevertheless, the ecosystems in these areas are often so fragile that they are not able to adapt human activities. Even a few individuals can induce severe devastation to these natural ecosystems. A single fire will put a million of trees into dashes, while a single ship fed by a single person will eat up the entire plants in an oasis. Moreover, the creatures living in these areas associate with each other so tightly that the disappearance of a single category can cause the devastation of much more categories. Therefore, government, the organization of human beings, should protect these areas which are of high value but area easy to be destroyed, even if they are remote and only accessible only to a few people.

Besides, people have to preserve these areas in their natural state in order to maintain the present global climate system. Because the ecosystems in these areas are often easily to be destroyed, the land surface characteristics of such areas are easily to be changed. When the trees in forests are cut down, the land surface albedo of that area will increase significantly, reflecting more sunlight back into outer space. Contemporarily, the ground temperature will rise remarkably in days and drop considerably at nights as the bare soil will become hotter than vegetated land when absorbing the same amount of heat, while it will become cooler than vegetated land when losing the same amount of heat. Furthermore, rivers and crop fields will be devastated without the protection of trees. On the other hand, when the little grasslands or oasis on deserts are destroyed, the sand and dust will no longer be restricted by vegetations, and will make more fertile areas into deserts. Even though these areas are usually remote and only accessible to a few individuals, their influence on the global climate system is so great that every single person on Earth will be impacted. As a result, government, holding the country's research abilities, financial supplies, and political authorities, should try to maintain the natural characteristics of these areas in order to avoid potential disasters.

In conclusion, wilderness areas, especially those owned publicly, should be maintained in their natural status by government. Even they are usually remote and accessible to only a few people, these fragile areas are of great research and climatology value.

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Argument4  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：0分2秒     0 words
从2006年5月29日19时50分到2006年5月29日19时0分
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The following was posted on an Internet real estate discussion site.
'Of the two leading real estate firms in our town—Adams Realty and Fitch Realty—Adams is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents. In contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch, and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000. Homes listed with Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago, I listed my home with Fitch and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month. Thus, if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams.'
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逻辑分析：
(1)        Adam has 40 real estate agents + Fitch only has 25, many of whom work part-time = Adam’s entire ability is better than Fitch
(2)        Adam’s revenue last year was twice as high as Fitch + Adam’s home sales averaged $168,000 + Fitch’s home sales averaged $144,000 = Adam sells houses at higher prices than Fitch
(3)        I listed a home ten years ago and Fitch take four months to sale it + I listed another home last year and Adam take one month to sale it = Adam sells houses more quickly than Fitch
破题顺序：
(1)        It is unverified to claim that the entire housing selling ability of Adam’s estate agents is superior to that of Fitch’s. (detailed individual working ability)
(2)        It is unsubstantiated to assert that Adam can sell the same house at a higher price than Fitch. (the total number of houses; the detailed conditions of houses, such as size, construction, and position)
(3)        It is unreasonable to conclude that Adam can sell the same house faster than Fitch. (the difference between ten years ago and last year, such as housing providing, demanding, and information transportation supplies; the difference between the former house and the latter, such as size, construction, and position)

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Argument76  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：0分2秒     0 words
从2006年5月29日20时6分到2006年5月29日20时0分
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The following appeared as part of an article in a health and beauty magazine.
'A group of volunteers participated in a study of consumer responses to the new Luxess face cream. Every morning for a month, they washed their faces with mild soap and then applied Luxess. At the end of that month, most volunteers reported a marked improvement in the way their skin looked and felt. Thus it appears that Luxess is truly effective in improving the condition of facial skin.'
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破题顺序：
(1)        It is unreasonable to disregard other factors in the process of face washing besides Luxess, such as the using of mild soap and the face washing itself.
(2)        It is unverified to attribute the improvement of facial skin simply to everyday face washing, such as diet, sports, and other face protecting activities.

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Issue177  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：0分2秒     0 words
从2006年5月29日20时20分到2006年5月29日20时0分
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The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes.
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关键词：perceive
定义：to achieve understanding of; apprehend
立场：approve
结构安排：
(1)        The study of an academic discipline influences the schemes through which people perceive the world. (the use of visible light, infrared waves, as well as X-rays; the application of telescopes, and microscopes; the utilization of physical, chemical, and biological processes)
(2)        The study of an academic discipline impacts on the aspects which people focus when perceiving the world. (professional knowledge make some aspects easier for some people to observe, understand, and analyze; professional experience make different people interested in different domains)
(3)        The study of an academic discipline alters the way people think of the perceived world. (what people regard the most important varied according to their professional knowledge and experience)

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Argument228  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：0分2秒     0 words
从2006年5月29日21时13分到2006年5月29日21时0分
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The following appeared in a newsletter from a political organization.
'In order to promote economic growth in the city, city residents should vote 'yes' on the state government's proposal to build a new expressway linking the outlying suburbs directly to the city center. A direct link to the city center will enable downtown businesses to receive deliveries more frequently, so that downtown retailers will no longer run out of stock and city manufacturers will not be affected by shortages of materials. Booming businesses will attract qualified workers from all over the state, workers who will be able to take advantage of the new expressway to commute to work in our city. In addition to these advantages, hundreds of workers will be employed to build the expressway, further stimulating the local economy!'
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逻辑分析：
(1)        the new expressway will enable downtown businesses to receive deliveries more frequently = downtown retailers will no longer run out of stock and city manufacturers will not be affected by shortages of materials
(2)        booming businesses + the available expressway communication = more qualified workers will work in this city
(3)        hundreds of workers will be employed to build the expressway = this will further stimulating the local economy
破题顺序：
(1)        It is unverified to attribute the shortage of retailing stock and manufacturing materials simply to the absence of a expressway. (producing efficiency and demanding quantities)
(2)        It is unsubstantiated to claim that the expressway will attract more qualified workers to work in the city. (salary status; working conditions; corresponding advantages)
(3)        It is unreasonable to assert that the constructing of the new express will stimulate the local economy. (contemporary traffic problems; arrangement of the living supplies of the hundreds of workers)

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Argument220  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：0分2秒     0 words
从2006年5月30日10时31分到2006年5月30日10时0分
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The following appeared in an article in a magazine for writers.
'A recent study showed that in describing a typical day's conversation, people make an average of 23 references to watching television and only 1 reference to reading fiction. This result suggests that, compared with the television industry, the publishing and bookselling industries are likely to decline in profitability. Therefore, people who wish to have careers as writers should acquire training and experience in writing for television rather than for print media.'
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逻辑分析：
(1)        people in a recent study make an average 23 references to watching television and only 1 reference to reading fiction = people are more interested in television than in fiction
(2)        people are more interested in television than in fiction = the publishing and bookselling industries are likely to decline in profitability
(3)        television industry is more profitable = people should acquire training and experience in writing for television rather than for print media
破题顺序：
(1)        It is unreasonable to conclude from the survey that people are more interested in television than in fiction. (detailed conditions of the respondents, such as ages and careers; the contemporary environment, such as the broadcast of a national sports competition, a state election, or an important campaign or conflicting)
(2)        Even if people are more interested in television than fiction, it is unverified to claim that the publishing and bookselling industries are likely to decline in profitability. (other publications, such as anthologies, journals, comics, and newspapers)
(3)        Even if the television industry is more profitable than the publishing and bookselling industries, it is unwise to persuade ordinary writers to acquire training and experience in writing for television rather than for print media. (individual interests, intelligence, and potential abilities)