Issue130 FLY AW小组第25次作业（525字）

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Issue130  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：45分31秒     517 words
从2006年6月1日8时0分到2006年6月1日8时45分
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How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society.
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Is the destiny of society determined by how children are socialized today? Is it the fact that people have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society? Of course not.

Admittedly, socialization is important, whether to individuals, organizations, and counties. Getting along with others perfectly provides individuals with affable friends and teammates, and make individual lives happy and enjoyable. Excellent cooperation enables individuals to obtain resources and helps in neighborhoods and working places, and contribute to individual success. Socialization of individuals makes organizations and countries operate smoothly, and thus ensures steady social improvement. As the socialization in individuals' childhood can help them to become much more socialized in future, how children are socialized today plays a significant role in the destiny of society.

However, the importance of socialization cannot be over evaluated, as the success of individuals, which greatly contributes to the development of human society, is usually determined by individual talents and abilities other than socialization. In the realm of business, though a successful manager should be socialized enough to achieve the steady operation of the company, the most crucial factor for a manager to reach high profits is the ability to predict future market status. In the realm of politics, though a successful leader should be socialized enough to gain supports from parties and officials, the greatest leaders impressed ordinary residents by their respectable morality and the ability to make difficult but correct decisions, rather than their diplomacy and corresponding social relationships. In the field of academy, the most successful scholars depend on their intelligence and assiduity, rather than socialization, while in the domain of arts, talents are apparently much more important than socialization. As a result, socialization cannot determine the destiny of a society.

Besides, it is unverified to claim that people have not learned how to raise children who can contribute to a better society. If people have not known how to raise children, it is impossible for human society to develop so rapidly in history as well as nowadays. Human beings have managed to produce much more food, construct much more durable houses, and invent much faster transportation tools, than their ancestors. People take care of their children, educate their children, and try to understand their children. Consequently, young generations receive love from their parents, obsorb knowledge from their teachers, can learn how to raise their future generation. Human beings have successfully avoided degeneration, and achieved a smoothly developing society. Athough people have not defined the most effective way to raise young generations, they do know how to raise future generations, and have brought up children to improve the contemporary society.

In conclusion, though socialization is important to individuals, organizations, and countries, individual success, which contributes greatly to the development of society, is influenced by many other factors, and the socialization of children cannot determine the destiny of human society. On the other hand, human beings have brought up young generations who contribute to the improvement of society, and therefore the assertion that people have not learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society is unsubstantiated and unreasonable.

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Issue160  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：0分2秒     0 words
从2006年6月1日17时11分到2006年6月1日17时0分
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The most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives. Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.
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关键词：an effective leader
定义：a person who guides groups of people to achieve efficient performance and participated goals
立场：reject
结构安排：
(1)        Admittedly, an effective leader should have the ability to remain committed to particular principles and objectives, in order to establish performing standards, emphasize future goals, and make quick decision.
(2)        However, an effective leader cannot remain consistently and disregard the shifts of popular opinion, because the leader cannot succeed in making groups of people operating efficiently without understanding these ordinary people.

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Argument242  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：0分2秒     0 words
从2006年6月1日17时33分到2006年6月1日17时0分
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The following appeared as an editorial in the student newspaper of Groveton College.
'To combat the recently reported dramatic rise in cheating among college and university students, these institutions should adopt honor codes similar to Groveton's, which calls for students to agree not to cheat in their academic endeavors and to notify a faculty member if they suspect that others have cheated. Groveton's honor code replaced an old-fashioned system in which students were closely monitored by teachers and an average of thirty cases of cheating per year were reported. The honor code has proven far more successful: in the first year it was in place, students reported twenty-one cases of cheating; five years later, this figure had dropped to fourteen. Moreover, in a recent survey conducted by the Groveton honor council, a majority of students said that they would be less likely to cheat with an honor code in place than without.'
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逻辑分析：
(1)        the cases of cheating reported were reduced = the cases of cheating declined
(2)        the cases of cheating declined + contemporary monitoring system was changed = the declination of cheating resulted from the new monitoring schemes
(3)        students in the survey conducted by the Groveton honor council said they would be less likely to cheat with an honor code = students in Groveton became less likely to cheat because of honor code
(4)        honor code reduce cheating at Groveton = institutions should adopt such schemes
破题顺序：
(1)        It is unverified to claim that the cases of cheating declined at Groveton. (unreported ones)
(2)        Even if the cheating cases at Groveton really declined, it is unsubstantiated to attribute such a circumstance to the new monitoring system, the honor code.
(3)        No evidence indicates that the results of the survey conducted by the Groveton honor council are convincing enough to be taken as facts. (survey contents; representability; answers’ credibility)
(4)        Even if the honor code reduced cheating cases at Groveton, no additional information demonstrates that such a monitoring factor can induce cheating declination in other institutions.

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Argument67  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：0分2秒     0 words
从2006年6月1日17时53分到2006年6月1日17时0分
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The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a newspaper serving the villages of Castorville and Polluxton.
'Both the villages of Castorville and Polluxton have experienced sharp declines in the numbers of residents who pay property taxes. To save money and improve service, the two villages recently merged their once separate garbage collection departments into a single department located in Castorville, and the new department has reported few complaints about its service. Last year the library in Polluxton had 20 percent fewer users than during the previous year. It follows that we should now further economize and improve service, as we did with garbage collection, by closing the library in Polluxton and using the library in Castorville to serve both villages.'
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逻辑分析：
(1)        the two villages merged their separate garbage collection departments into a single one + the new department has reported few complaints about its service = residents are satisfied with the new department
(2)        residents are satisfied with the new garbage collection department + the library in Polluxton had 20 percent fewer users last year than during the previous year = it is profitable to close the library in Polluxton and use the library in Castorville to serve both villages
破题顺序：
(1)        It is unverified to claim that residents are satisfied with the new garbage collection department. (unreported complaints)
(2)        Even if inhabitants are satisfied with the new garbage department, it is unreasonable to deduce that the mergence of libraries will not cause severe problems. (difference between garbage collection and library using; the location of the two libraries; the different contents and users of the two libraries)

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Issue159  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：0分2秒     0 words
从2006年6月1日18时7分到2006年6月1日18时0分
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The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
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关键词：superior
定义：superiority in speed, accuracy, and creativity
立场：conditioning
结构安排：
(1)        In the case of speed, machines, for example computers, are usually superior to human minds.
(2)        In the field of accuracy, machines are often superior to human minds. (calculators used to solve mathematic questions; weighing machines used to decide the weight of objects; thermometers used to measure temperatures)
(3)        In the domain of creativity, current machines cannot exceed human minds, because they cannot think independently.

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Argument48  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：0分2秒     0 words
从2006年6月1日18时21分到2006年6月1日18时0分
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The following appeared in a newspaper article published in the country of Corpora.
'Twenty years ago, one half of all citizens in Corpora met the standards for adequate physical fitness as then defined by the national advisory board on physical fitness. Today, the board says that only one quarter of all citizens are adequately fit and suggests that spending too much time using computers may be the reason. But since overall fitness levels are highest in regions of Corpora where levels of computer ownership are also highest, it is clear that using computers has not made citizens less physically fit. Instead, as shown by this year's unusually low expenditures on fitness-related products and services, the recent decline in the economy is most likely the cause, and fitness levels will improve when the economy does.'
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逻辑分析：
(1)        one half of the citizens in Corpora met the standards of physical fitness twenty years ago + one quarter of the citizens meet the standards today = the fitness levels have declined
(2)        the fitness levels have declined + the fitness levels are highest in regions where the computer ownership levels are also the highest = using computer is not the reason of fitness declination
(3)        this years’ unusually low expenditures on fitness-related products and services + the recent decline in the economy = the declination of economy has induced the declination of fitness levels = fitness levels will improve when the economy does
破题顺序：
(1)        It is unverified to conclude that the fitness levels of Corpora’s citizens have declined.
(2)        Even if we assume that the fitness levels in Corpora have declined, it is unreasonable to claim that over using computers is not the cause.
(3)        It is unsubstantiated to attribute the declination of fitness levels to the depression of economy.

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Issue26  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：0分2秒     0 words
从2006年6月1日18时38分到2006年6月1日18时0分
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Most people would agree that buildings represent a valuable record of any society's past, but controversy arises when old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes. In such situations, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings so that contemporary needs can be served.
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关键词：valuable
定义：historical, artistic, technological, and social value
立场：conditioning
结构安排：
(1)        Buildings which represent a particular society should be preserved, while buildings not representative can be replaced by new ones.
(2)        Buildings which have high artistic value should be carefully protected, while buildings without artistic worth can be replaced by new ones.
(3)        Buildings which characterize the contemporary technology levels should be maintained, while buildings with dangerous construction should be replaced by new ones.
(4)        Buildings which carry important social functions should be prevented from destruction, while buildings not contributing to society can be replaced by new ones.

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晚上回去写130
先把83发上来，也帮我看看吧！谢谢！
明天开始就可以正常上网了！
你这篇我先收下来改好明天发上来！

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我写成教育了，没写成社会化，是不是狂偏题了？