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发表于 2006-7-3 22:07:20 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
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1.process是否能完成不可知
2.人们是否会买这种牡蛎不可知,可能不喜欢这种风味,对抗菌素会有怀疑
3.效益是否会提高不一定,还有其它市场因素决定

The atguer wishes a greater profit for Gulf Coast oyster produces could be got following a process of  killing the bacteria in Gulf Coast oysters. Wheter the expect can occur or not depends on several coincide aspects.

The mainly reason making the arguer have the "greater profits" opinion is a process for killing the bacteria. Some scientists have devised this process now, but can it be accepted by the goverment? Numerious problems should be focused in this process. How could scientists control the influences on the enviorment and other species in Gulf Coast during this process? To kill the bacteria, some antibiologies have to inject in water. Obvioursly, people and goverment will think about the pollution thus the process may not be obtained by goverment. Otherwise the result in laboratory but can't give us any promise in nature.

Although the process is really success in the future, will customs surely want to pay for Gulf Coast oysters? Perhaps the arguer pays too much attaintion on killing bacteria but ignore the feeling of customs. Why did the custom pay more money to northeastern Atlantic Coast oysters than Gulf Coast oysters from five years ago to recently? As we know the bacteria only found in a few raw oysters, how can it become the most significant reason of the lower price for five years? The flavor the quality even the color of oyster may be more important reason than bacteria influence the price. On the other hand, do people increase the sense of safety eating after killing the baceria is another unknown aspect. The commen sense tells us the chemical products can stay in the muscle of animals and after eating the food done by these muscle, these medicine can translate into human body then influence our healthy at last. So the dream of customs eager to buy the oysters of Gulf Coast needs the evidence of none influence of the healthy of people and makes the customs feeling well.

At last, the arguer should consider the condition of the market before gives out the conclusion of the following greater profits. If the products of oysters is so many thus over the offering ability of customs, the profits may lower than the day before the killing bacteria process. And if the price of labor market rise quickly at that time, the profit of oyster also can't raise too much.

Because of the reasons mentioned above, the arguer needs more details to persuade the customs to buy the oysters of Gulf Coast and have to do some survey of market to insure the profit of future.
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