issue154 FLY AW小组第35次作业（603字）

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写太多了。。要精简。。。

Issue154  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：56分54秒     488 words
从2006年6月8日12时59分到2006年6月8日13时56分
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Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators.
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Should parents and communities be involved in the local schools? Or should education be left solely to professional educators? In my opinion, though parents and communities are not professional enough, they serve as important supplements to school education.

Admittedly, parents and communities cannot teach students as skillfully as professional educators. Not all parents are good parents, while not all good parents are good teachers. It is hard for parents to avoid teaching children bad habits, such as littering, smoking and staying up at night, because they are not as sensible as professional teachers. Besides, parents do not have enough professional knowledge and experience to satisfy students' needs, which can be achieved by teachers and professors. Moreover, parents usually tend to put too much expectation on children, without carefully judging their children's ability and affordability, which is always considered by professional educators. Similarly, communities cannot always educate students correctly either. As most parents and communities are not professionally trained educators, they cannot perform as excellently as teachers and professors in the realm of education.

However, education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators. According to United Nations Educational, Scientific, and Cultural Organization, the targets of individual education are learning to know, learning to do, learning to get together, and learning to be. Without the contribution of parents and communities, it is extremely difficult for teachers and professors to achieve such goals.

First of all, though professional knowledge and skills are mostly taught by educators, parents and communities help students to advance smoothly and overcome difficulties. Although professional educators are experienced and skillful, they do not have enough time to take care of every student. If an educator has 50 students, he can give each student only 2 percent of his time and consideration. Teachers can explain a question as careful as possible in classes, but cannot help solve problems and difficulties of each student. Even if parents and communities do not have enough professional knowledge to solve each problem, their encouragement and suggestions are especially beneficial. Parents are particularly important, because they usually care about their children as much as possible. Consideration, including encouragement, suggestions, and other pleasant experience, undoubtedly help students to learn more knowledge and skills. Without parents and communities, students cannot receive as much consideration as necessary.

Besides, it is hard for professional educators to teach students every aspects of live. Leaving solely to teachers and professors, students are not able to learn as much as what is required by the targets of education, such as cooperation, competition, and activity standards. Though cooperation, competition, and activity standards are also involved in school education, they are too simple to be compared with those in society. Living in the illusion of school harmony of pleasant cooperation and competition, how can students survive when they come across severe conflictions in society? Living under the protection of school discipline, how can students maintain their activity standards when they come across complex evaluation in society? Parents and communities serve as important resources as well as perfect examples to teach students how to get along with the complex society, which cannot be taught by professional educators.

In conclusion, though parents and communities are not professionally trained to perform as perfectly as teacher and professors in the field of education, it is impossible for education to become successful without the contribution of parents and communities. Parents and communities act as crucial supplements to school education, because they are able to give children as much consideration as necessary, and provide students with various information of society, which cannot be achieved by professional educators only.

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Argument153  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：0分2秒     0 words
从2006年6月8日14时30分到2006年6月8日14时0分
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The following is from an editorial in the Midvale Observer, a local newspaper.
'Ever since the 1950's, when television sets began to appear in the average home, the rate of crimes committed by teenagers in the country of Alta has steadily increased. This increase in teenage crime parallels the increase in violence shown on television. According to several national studies, even very young children who watch a great number of television shows featuring violent scenes display more violent behavior within their home environment than do children who do not watch violent shows. Furthermore, in a survey conducted by the Observer, over 90 percent of the respondents were parents who indicated that prime-time television—programs that are shown between 7 p.m. and 9 p.m.—should show less violence. Therefore, in order to lower the rate of teenage crime in Alta, television viewers should demand that television programmers reduce the amount of violence shown during prime time.'
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逻辑分析：
(1)        teenager crimes increased + violence shown on television increased = the former results from the latter
(2)        very young children are easily influenced by television violence = teenagers are likely to be influenced by television violence
(3)        parents in the survey want to reduce television violence in prime-time = reduce television in prime-time will reduce teenager crimes
破题顺序：
(1)        First of all, it is unverified to attribute the increase of teenager crimes to the increase in violence shown on television.
(2)        Besides, it is unreasonable to deduce the situation of teenagers from the status of very young children.
(3)        Furthermore, no evidence indicates that the prime-time television is mainly watched by teenagers.

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Argument179  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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从2006年6月8日14时47分到2006年6月8日14时0分
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The following is a memorandum written by the director of personnel to the president of the Cedar Corporation.
'It would be a mistake to rehire the Good-Taste Company to supply the food in our employee cafeteria next year. It is the second most expensive caterer in the city. In addition, its prices have risen in each of the last three years, and it refuses to provide meals for people on special diets. Just last month three employees complained to me that they no longer eat in the cafeteria because they find the experience 'unbearable.' Our company should instead hire Discount Foods. Discount is a family-owned local company and it offers a varied menu of fish and poultry. I recently tasted a sample lunch at one of the many companies that Discount serves and it was delicious—an indication that hiring Discount will lead to improved employee satisfaction.'
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逻辑分析：
(1)        Good-Taste Company is the second expensive caterer in the city + its process have risen in each of the last three years = the meals offered by Good-Taste Company are not reasonable
(2)        Good-Taste Company refuses to provide meals for people on special diets + Discount offers a varied menu of fish and poultry = Discount offers more variable meals
(3)        last month three employees complained about Good-Taste Company + the director tasted a sample lunch + it is delicious = hiring Discount will improve employee satisfaction
破题顺序：
(1)        It is unreasonable to evaluate the meals offered by Good-Taste Company solely according to process.
(2)        It is unverified to claim that Discount can offer a more variable menu of meals than Good-Taste Company.
(3)        It is unsubstantiated to assert that the service of Discount is better than that of Good-Taste Company.

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Argument214  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：0分2秒     0 words
从2006年6月8日22时55分到2006年6月8日22时0分
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In each city in the region of Treehaven, the majority of the money spent on government-run public school education comes from taxes that each city government collects. The region's cities differ, however, in the value they place on public education. For example, Parson City typically budgets twice as much money per year as Blue City does for its public schools—even though both cities have about the same number of residents. It seems clear, therefore, that Parson City residents care more about public school education than do Blue City residents.
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逻辑分析：
(1)        Parson City budgets twice as much as money per year as Blue City does for public schools = each public school in Parson City receive more money than that in Blue City
(2)        Each public schools in Parson City receive more money than that in Blue City + the majority of money spent on public schools comes from taxes that each city government collects = residents in Parson City spend more money on public schools than residents in Blue City do
(3)        Residents in Parson City spend more money on public schools than residents in Blue City do + both cities have about the same number of residents = the former care more about public schools than do the latter
破题顺序：
(1)        It is too arbitrary to claim that the situation of public schools in Parson City is better that of Blue City’s. (the number of public schools; the number of students in public schools)
(2)        Even if the situation of public schools in Parson City is better than that of Blue City’s, it is unverified to attribute this status to taxes collected from ordinary residents. (other resources of government taxes, such as large factories, companies, and shops)
(3)        Even if residents in Parson City collect more money for public schools than those in Blue City, it is unsubstantiated to deduce that the former care more about public school education than do the latter. (annual income of residents in each city)

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Argument190  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：0分2秒     0 words
从2006年6月8日23时23分到2006年6月8日23时0分
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The following is a letter to the editor of the Glenville Gazette, a local newspaper.
'Over the past few years, the number of people who have purchased advance tickets for the Glenville Summer Concert series has declined, indicating lack of community support. Although the weather has been unpredictable in the past few years, this cannot be the reason for the decline in advance ticket purchases, because many people attended the concerts even in bad weather. Clearly, then, the reason for the decline is the choice of music, so the organizers of the concert should feature more modern music in the future and should be sure to include music composed by Richerts, whose recordings Glenville residents purchase more often than any other contemporary recordings. This strategy will undoubtedly increase advance ticket purchases and will increase attendance at the concerts.'
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逻辑分析：
(1)        the number of people who have purchased advance tickets has declined = Glenville Summer Concert experiences lack of community support
(2)        the number of advance tickets has declined + many people attended the concert even in bad weather = the reason for the declination is not the unpredictable weather, but the choice of music
(3)        The reason for the declination is the choice of music = more modern music and music composed by Richerts
破题顺序：
(1)        It is unverified to claim that Glenville Summer Concert has been experiencing lack of community support, even though the number of advance tickets has declined. (the actual number of people attending the concert)
(2)        It is unreasonable to assert that the declination of advance tickets does not result from the unpredictable weather in last few years, but the choice of music. (people attend concert even in bad weather, which indicates wonderful choice of music)
(3)        Even if the declination of advance tickets results from the choice of music, it is unsubstantiated to recommend more modern music and music composed by Richerts. (people’s inclination; difference between recordings and concerts)

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Issue59  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：0分2秒     0 words
从2006年6月9日9时42分到2006年6月9日9时0分
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Too much emphasis is placed on role models. Instead of copying others, people should learn to think and act independently and thus make the choices that are best for them.
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关键词：independently
定义：free from the influence, guidance, or control of another or others
立场：reject
结构安排：
(1)        Admittedly, people should avoid to be controlled by others, and learn to think and make decisions for their own.
(2)        However, people should accept the guidance of predecessors, otherwise they will have to spend much more time and energy to achieve the same targets.
(3)        Besides, people should not refuse to be influenced by others, or they will become isolated. (the importance of communication, cooperation, and competition)

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Argument109  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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从2006年6月9日10时4分到2006年6月9日10时0分
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The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Maple City newspaper.
'Twenty years ago Pine City established strict laws designed to limit the number of new buildings that could be constructed in the city. Since that time the average housing prices in Pine City have increased considerably. Chestnut City, which is about the same size as Pine City, has over the past twenty years experienced an increase in average housing prices similar to Pine City, but Chestnut City never established any laws that limit new building construction. So it is clear that laws limiting new construction have no effect on average housing prices. So if Maple City were to establish strict laws that limit new building construction, these laws will have no effect on average housing prices.'
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逻辑分析：
(1)        Pine City established strict laws twenty years ago + Chestnut City never establish any laws + both cities experienced an increase in average housing prices similarly = laws twenty years ago have no effect on average housing prices for both cities
(2)        Laws twenty years ago have no effect on average housing prices for both cities = laws nowadays will have no effect on average housing prices for Maple City
破题顺序：
(1)        It is unverified to conclude that laws to limit the number of new buildings twenty years ago have no effect on average housing prices of Pine City and Chestnut City.
(2)        Even if such laws twenty years ago have no effect on average housing prices of Pine City and Chestnut City, it is unreasonable to deduce that strict laws that limit new building construction will have no effect on average housing prices of Maple City.

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Issue226  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：0分2秒     0 words
从2006年6月9日10时20分到2006年6月9日10时0分
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People are mistaken when they assume that the problems they confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. This illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience.
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关键词：problem
定义：a question to be considered, solved, or answered
立场：partly reject
结构安排：
(1)        Admittedly, people tend to assume that the problems they confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors, usually without considering actual situations.
(2)        However, it is too arbitrary to claim that people are mistaken when they make such assumptions.
(3)        Although cannot be evaluated as illusion, such assumptions will never become dispelled by increasing knowledge and experience.