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Is it the artist gives society something of lasting value, not the critic who evaluates works of art? The speaker claims so. I concede that some artwork from artist actually could be some lasting-value things and the undue criticism not only cannot promote but also impede this progress. Otherwise, from my view of point, artists could not give society perdurable value without the help of critics in some certain circumstance.
我觉得你这段表达自我的观点有点混乱,最好能明确表示artist and critics are of the same importance.
It is no denying that works of art could bring society something cannot be substituted. For one thing, looking back at the history, artists have given people varieties of meritorious information and revelation. Painting, one part of art, is a powerful supporting example. In field of history, artists, who lived prehistoric in Spain, leave their paintings on the rocks in caves, where the earliest painting found out, tell us what happened long ago; in field of religion, a renaissance painting of Madonna and child, for many viewers, is somehow a revelation of transcendent spirituality; in field of sociology, "The Crying", a famous paint of Munch, reflected the high stress that an individual endured via the behavior of crying out and the expression of agony in the painting. 例子很不错的,做笔记...For another thing, artists bring us encouragement in spirit as well as the works of art bring forward aesthetic feeling. Take some well-known works of art as examples: “David”, the statuary of Michelangelo, shows us the power and the beauty of a human body; Beethoven’s ninth symphonies set up a good example of fighting to (against) doom and encourage people in adversity to never give up.
Aside from the foregoing proviso, however, I do disagree that critics do no effort in giving society something of lasting value. In some circumstance, the art works could not be understand by ordinary people without critics, even if they contain much high value. For instance, Monet’s outstanding painting “Impression: sunrise”, which use a large amount of blue as the major color for sunlight, was not comprehended initially and regarded as an absurd works. Yet, critics studied this painting and found out its deep meanings which show the society that it is a great works of art. Further more, the criticism could prolong the life and promote the value of an art works, like catalyzer. “Mona Lisa”, a splendid painting of Leonardo da Vinci, is case in point. Critics found that the landscape of the right side behind Mona Lisa is not same as those of the left side, which then attract uncountable critics studied on, publishing large number of articles and books about it. These productions make people notice “Mona Lisa” from one generation to another, not only because aesthetic value but also the comment of mystery which stands behind it.
这段写的很不错,向你学习!!
As is shown above, equitable and objective criticism could help people to find out the value of art works and give society some lasting-value thing, but for the limitation of comprehension critics could not always make correct criticism, which would minify, even exterminate the achievement of artists and impede the development of art. A well-known illustration is Van Gogh, a superexcellent artist who is regarded as the founder of postimpressionism. But, the critics in that time could not understand his art and pay no attention to this gift-painter, which led the works from Van Gogh were buried for a fairly long time until sometime after he ended in suicide for depression.
In sum, although artist gives society something of lasting value through their works of art, we could not neglect the effort of critics, neither positive nor negative, in this course. With equitable and objective criticism, the worth of an art works could be dug out more deeply, and that make the art works more valuable. With prejudice and subjective criticism, the value of an art works perhaps will be buried for a long period. Thus, critics should do their best to give some equitable and objective comment to accurately evaluate a work of art, to propel the development of art, to give more things of lasting value to society.
这篇文章算是很不错的了,条理清晰,例子也能很好的论点.我觉得一点就是你实际上是强调两者同样重要,你也在文中开头和结尾部分间接提出了观点,但是你文中始终没明确指明这一点.
还有一点是,毋庸置疑,这篇文章属于事实型,你的处理也不错,但最后加了那两句倾向性的话,有点画蛇添足的感觉.当然仁者见仁,智者见智,也许有人会觉得是深化主题.
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