Issue144【飞扬之夏】7.11的作业

青天大老爷UID: 2211672

144"It is the artist, not the critic, who gives society something of lasting value."
*a person who evaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.

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1 艺术家和批评家共同创造社会的永恒价值
2 艺术家是人类灵魂的工程师，而批评家则是守望者
3 批评家往往是艺术家，艺术家也经常是批评家
4 总结；互相补充，共同创造社会的永恒价值

With the continued development of wholly society, the taste of human being to what the real beauty belongs to or stand for has been experienced by some different typical of artic forms. Naturally, so disparate the art work the critic evaluated since the fifteen century or even earlier, is as the attitude toward whether or not it is a great valuable art the critic keeps hold of at the present-day. Even if this is ture,it also can not ignore the effect of any great critic no matter when they lived at. There has a tight knot between the artist and the critic.To say honestly, it is impossible that any the first-rate works such as paintings, novels or films are able to become a file of lasting value if nothing coherent effects from the critic,and merely through solely achieving of the artist. They the artist and the critic create society something of lasting value together.

An artist looks like an engineer of the man’s soul. The eye insight into every details in daily life prompt the artist to find surprises, which is converted to many piece of artic mostly. In the different remarkable periods, some groups of the artist would be good at own particular works, and make it at forever value. Yet outside the art the critic is more likely to as if a looker. Accounting to their’ experiment, sense of aesthetics and to such a degree the ability of appreciation, those who researched of distinguishing and differ and flaw of the art as professional work have right to assess something the artist make. For instance, in the history of China, many special classic books written by famous critics have become authority at best in the field of Chinese-landscape painting .As for the record or evaluation of the painting in old books has been turned out to a determinant at the price of biding high or low at any international auction.Some suggestion and recommendation or the method of differentiation form critics could give some ordinary people very smooth guidance. Therefore, when the accumulated attentions increase more and more, then a lasting value has a birth. Nobody can deny that the critic, who gives society something of lasting value ,is really,

A critic is the artist, and sometimes a artist also the critic, In most cases, most of great critics are at firstly a sharp artist. Mr Zhang da Qing ( very well-known Chinese painter ) would be as a good example illustrate that point .In early day of him, he was a great artist. After his fourth year old, the capability of evaluating for Chinese-landscape paintings proved him to a best one in Shanghai. Just as all of history to serve the fact, necessary sinerely cooperation between a great artist and a great critic is to gives society lasting value,

In short, artist and critics are supplement of each other, the dusty of former is the same position as the latter. We can not outlook any side. They work together ,and bring something of lasting value into society.

Issue 比Argument 难写啊

[ 本帖最后由 青天大老爷 于 2006-7-12 07:07 编辑 ]

甲猫UID: 2145556

I think the first paragraph is too long and a little difficult to understand.
In fact, I am a little comfused about your main idea.
Do you write the issue during the time limit?
I don't think it is good to write with time measuring when we are not so familiar with thinking and writing in English.
Maybe both of us need more practise.
fighting!

青天大老爷UID: 2211672

我第一段想表达的就是，虽然每个时代艺术家和批评家对于艺术的理解有时代的特征，但是
艺术家和批评家共同创造社会的永恒价值是不变的。it is a case in this point