issue177 拍之

CharaznablezUID: 2140987

TOPIC: ISSUE177 - "The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes."
WORDS: 472          TIME: 0:45:00          DATE: 2006-7-21

I agree with that we perceive the world with different eyes after study of an academic discipline. Because once educated, we gain a larger picture of our opinion and perspective ,and to observe our own , our culture and others as well as our world differently .

Through pursuit the knowledge, we realize our flaws and foibles from other humans whose lives we study about. In arts areas, there are replete with such examples since arts have many incartions: paintings ,sculptures ,films, the literary expression like poem and narrative writings ,architecture and the like. This function of arts often known as instruction. From Shakespeare's Macbeth we know inordinate ambition can be pernicious. And narrative writings also often instruct us . We can realize ourselves in the character of the writings and predict our destiny in the plight ,finally find the moral dilemma of action to be representative problem of ourselves. In this cases , we realize our negative character in arts. Thereby, after reading or seeing them ,we see ourselves differently .

Furthermore, after educated, we no longer judge other humans and their ideas through the black-and-white lens of our narrow own view. Human may be born with the desire to take proud of his or her own value based on his or her tradition culture . As a result he or she may be more likely to overestimate their culture and minimize the importance of other culture. For this reason, the more education people get about other countries ,the less misunderstanding they will take . A student of sociology or cultural anthropology comes to see those customs ,rituals and ceremonies as tools which serve personal psychological need . By reading other cultural or religious writings they can find the greatness in them from bygone era that can be the common treasure for all human beings.

Equally important is another fact. While education helps us to see the flawed nature and cutural opinion ,it also help us see ideas we previously rejected out of hand in a different light. Take Copernicus for example. He found the heliocentric theory disrupting the geocentric cosmology of Ptolemy which was widely accepted from Aristotle period . But no one believe he at first . Moreover, Bruno who was enunciating his theory was condemned as heretic and burned at the stake by the religious court. However, after his theory was accepted by general population ,people change their perspectives of universe . Later, many scientists such as Newton ,Einstein and recently Hawking have developed the theory to give our human being new eyes about what the true universe is .Only through studied their theories a true and full understanding of the complexity of universe can be had .

In conclusion, edcation supplant an individual old mind with an open one. Alhough we see the same world , we see differently by ourselves, our culture and others as well as our world due to having gained a broader and brighter perspective.

CharaznablezUID: 2140987

大家拍啊! 是不是我的题目不吸引人呢?

helenlhhUID: 2127690

I agree with that we perceive the world with different eyes after study of an academic discipline. Because once educated, we gain a larger picture of our opinion and perspective ,and to observe our own , our culture and others as well as our world differently .

Through pursuit the knowledge, we realize our flaws and foibles from other humans whose lives we study about. In arts areas, there are replete with such examples since arts have many incartions: paintings ,sculptures ,films, the literary expression like poem and narrative writings ,architecture and the like. This function of arts often known as instruction. From Shakespeare's Macbeth we know inordinate ambition can be pernicious. And narrative writings also often instruct us . We can realize ourselves in the character of the writings and predict our destiny in the plight ,finally find the moral dilemma of action to be representative problem of ourselves. In this cases , we realize our negative character in arts. Thereby, after reading or seeing them ,we see ourselves differently . 这段写的好，很有文学修养啊，我可想不出来

Furthermore, after educated, we no longer judge other humans and their ideas through the black-and-white lens of our narrow own view. Human may be born with the desire to take proud of his or her own value based on his or her tradition culture . As a result he or she may be more likely to overestimate their culture and minimize the importance of other culture. For this reason, the more education people get about other countries ,the less misunderstanding they will take . A student of sociology or cultural anthropology comes to see those customs ,rituals and ceremonies as tools which serve personal psychological need . By reading other cultural or religious writings they can find the greatness in them from bygone era that can be the common treasure for all human beings.

Equally important is another fact. While education helps us to see the flawed nature and cutural opinion ,it also help us see ideas we previously rejected out of hand in a different light. Take Copernicus for example. He found the heliocentric theory disrupting the geocentric cosmology of Ptolemy which was widely accepted from Aristotle period . But no one believe he at first . Moreover, Bruno who was enunciating his theory was condemned as heretic and burned at the stake by the religious court. However, after his theory was accepted by general population ,people change their perspectives of universe . Later, many scientists such as Newton ,Einstein and recently Hawking have developed the theory to give our human being new eyes about what the true universe is .Only through studied their theories a true and full understanding of the complexity of universe can be had .

In conclusion, edcation supplant an individual old mind with an open one. Alhough we see the same world , we see differently by ourselves, our culture and others as well as our world due to having gained a broader and brighter perspective.

赞！写的很好，我昨晚看题库的时候才看到这题，觉得很抽象，打算放弃了，现在看了觉得你的思路很开阔，特别是对例子的运用，很不错。因为对这题没什么感觉，也指不出什么问题，见谅！:D

helenlhhUID: 2127690

三组domothy mm有一篇，你们可以互拍
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... xtra=#pid1768861050

domothyUID: 2224019

TOPIC: ISSUE177 - "The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes."
WORDS: 472          TIME: 0:45:00          DATE: 2006-7-21

I agree with that we perceive the world with different eyes after study of an academic discipline. Because once educated, we gain a larger picture of our opinion and perspective(总觉得翻译的味道太浓，用enlarge our ken什么的好不好一点？) ,and to observe our own（ourselves?） , our culture and others as well as our world differently .

Through pursuiting the（ms不用the） knowledge, we realize our flaws and foibles from other humans whose lives we study about（这边through pursuing knowledge和后面的from other humans有点重复了，只留一个就好，或者把前面改成in the process of pursuing knowledge） . In arts areas, there are(replete是动词吧？) replete with such examples since arts have many incartions: paintings ,sculptures ,films, the literary expression like poem and narrative writings ,architecture and the like. This function of arts often known as instruction（instructive？）. From Shakespeare's Macbeth we know inordinate ambition can be pernicious. And narrative writings also often instruct us . We can realize ourselves in the character of the writings and predict our destiny in the plight ,finally find the moral dilemma of action to be representative problem of ourselves（这段话很搅啊，建议断开写）. In this（these？） cases , we realize our negative character in arts. Thereby, after reading or seeing them ,we see ourselves differently . （那个麦克白的例子，最好用自己的话说，否则被判抄袭岂不是很冤？）
Furthermore, after educated, we no longer judge other humans and their ideas through the black-and-white lens of our narrow own（own narrow?） view. Human may be born with the desire to take proud of his or her own value based on his or her tradition culture . As a result he or she may be more likely to overestimate their culture and minimize the importance of other culture. For this reason, the more education people get about other countries ,the less misunderstanding they will take . A student of sociology or cultural anthropology comes to see those customs ,rituals and ceremonies as tools which serve personal psychological need . By reading other cultural or religious writings they can find the greatness in them from bygone era that can be the common treasure for all human beings.(建议还是不要用太多范文里面的例子句子，因为很多人都看过，用过。貌似ETS的雷同探测器相当严，而且不近人情。)
Equally important is another fact. While education helps us to see the flawed nature and cutural opinion ,it also help us see ideas we previously rejected out of hand in a different light. Take Copernicus for example. He found the heliocentric theory disrupting the geocentric cosmology of Ptolemy which was widely accepted from Aristotle period . But no one believe he（him） at first . Moreover, Bruno who was enunciating his theory was condemned as heretic and burned at the stake by the religious court. However, after his theory was accepted by general population ,people change their perspectives of universe . Later, many scientists such as Newton ,Einstein and recently Hawking have developed the theory to give our human being new eyes about what the true universe is .Only through studied their theories a true and full understanding of the complexity of universe can be had .（总觉得这几个例子有点……是接受的知识改变了看法，还是改变看法接受知识？）
In conclusion, education supplants an individual old mind with an open one. Although we see the same world , we see differently by ourselves, our culture and others as well as our world due to having gained a broader and brighter perspective.(最后这句话读着很不顺，你自己再改改？)

我有一篇同主题的文章，互拍吧。

chuanteng2000UID: 2186047

百宝箱看多了，看来不能用啊incartion写错了，是incarnation