issue185 限时模考 [清凉夏日一组作业贴]

helenlhhUID: 2127690

写得比较仓促，而且个人觉得这题不太有感觉，很空洞，临考前还望大家多多帮助，如果友好的思路或例子可以提供一下。谢谢！

提纲：
     1、学术界的丑闻能够起到警戒的作用
     2、商业上的丑闻督促人们规范自己的行为。
     3、有些丑闻涉及了名人的私生活，没有太大意义甚至有负面影响。
TOPIC: ISSUE185 - "Scandals-whether in politics, academia, or other areas-can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could."
WORDS: 486          TIME: 0:40:11          DATE: 2006-7-25

Scandals, reported by the media, can provide us with a totally different view about the dark side of famous people or institution. In my analysis, these new point of views benefits the society in some ways but they sometimes bring problems to us since everything has its two sides.

In academic areas, the revealing of scandals will keep researcher alert that they should behave themselves in any fields of study by avoiding invading other people's rights. Plagiarism, quite familiar with us, is bad for the atmosphere of academic fields, this kind of scandals should be reported in order to prevent more such actions. Another example concerns with ethical problem was the scandal of Stanford prison experiment. The professors doing this experiment were seriously and widely criticized for they made the prisoners suffered from sadistic and humiliating. Even if their research are of value, but their behavior hurt other people's psychological feeling. If this kind of scandals was not criticized, scientists can also do anything they like such as cloning human being because they never have the pressure from the public.

Scandal in economic field also have great value. It helps to compel leaders of companies to be honest in the society. One well-known example is the event of Enrron. As one of the world's well-known company, it was exposed to the public that in many years, Enrron is in deficits although it appears to be gain profits. Such dishonesty destroyed the company and leaders related to this event were heavily punished and their fame were totally destroyed. In this, people learn from such teach to obey the rules in economic world.

However, some scandals are meaningless. It is everyone's curiosity that stimulates the media to search as much scandal as possible in order to attract people's eyes. Our media are compelled by the profits that may gain from such hot spots. Scandals on celebrities' personal lives are revealed. Frankly speaking, these things are of no value because we should care more about their performance in their jobs, we have no right to know too much about other people's personal life, so do celebrities. Furthermore, some scandals are even created without realistic. In this, such scandals may hurt those who are reported. It is quite possible that there will be a shadow in their heart and from them on, they will not be free to do anything, including their jobs. To this point, scandals are harmful and our media should not do this anymore.

From what has been discussed above, we can safely arrive at the conclusion that whether a scandal is valuable should be judge by our careful thinking. We should not rely so much on our media to do the thinking for us for they are not actually the thinkers but benefactors from our lack of thinking. Once a scandal is reported, we should think for a few minute before we response to the event.

loryshuangUID: 2211255

我觉得写得挺好, 语言也很流畅! 不错!
唯一的一点就是如果后面的总结段能在正面呼应以下前面两段就好了!
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CharaznablezUID: 2140987

TOPIC: ISSUE185 - "Scandals-whether in politics, academia, or other areas-can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could."
WORDS: 486          TIME: 0:40:11          DATE: 2006-7-25

Scandals, reported by the media, can provide us with a totally different view about the dark side of famous people or institution. In my analysis, these new point of views benefits the society in some ways but they sometimes bring problems to us since everything has its two sides.

In academic areas, the revealing of scandals will keep researcher alert that they should behave themselves in any fields of study by avoiding invading other people's rights. Plagiarism, quite familiar with us, is bad for the atmosphere of academic fields, this kind of scandals should be reported in order to prevent more such actions. Another example concerns with ethical problem was the scandal of Stanford prison experiment. The professors doing this experiment were seriously and widely criticized for they made the prisoners suffered from sadistic and humiliating. Even if their research are of value,（ but）their behavior hurt(torture) other people's( those prisoners’)（psychological ）feeling. If this kind of scandals was(were) not criticized, scientists can also do anything they like such as cloning human being because they never have the pressure from the public.

Scandal in economic field also have great value. It helps to compel leaders of companies to be honest in the society. One well-known example is the event of Enrron. As one of the world's well-known company(companys), it was exposed to the public that in many years, Enrron is in deficits although it appears to be gain profits. Such dishonesty destroyed the company and leaders related to this event were heavily punished and their fame were totally destroyed.(这句写的感觉不好) In this, people learn from such teach(动词) to obey the rules in economic world.

However, some scandals are meaningless. It is everyone's curiosity that stimulates the media to search as much scandal as possible in order to attract people's eyes. Our media are compelled by the profits that may gain from such hot spots. Scandals on celebrities' personal lives are revealed. Frankly speaking, these things are of no value because we should care more about their performance in their jobs, we have no right to know too much about other people's personal life, so do celebrities. Furthermore, some scandals are even created without realistic. In this, such scandals may hurt those who are reported. It is quite possible that there will be a shadow in their heart and from them on, they will not be free to do anything, including their jobs. To this point, scandals are harmful and our media should not do this anymore.

From what has been discussed above, we can safely arrive at the conclusion that whether a scandal is valuable(or not) should be judge(judged) by our careful thinking. We should not rely so much on our media to do the thinking for us for they are not actually the thinkers but benefactors from our lack of thinking. Once a scandal is reported, we should think for a few minute before we response to the event.
安然公司Enron.可能是模考比较紧张用语不像前几篇好 不过还好啦.我觉得大体还不错 反正是比我生写的强多了.例子也还可以,就是再详细论述一下.安然公司的例子太短了实际只有一句.再改一下肯定好很多.加油!