smile小组 issue4

imzxzUID: 2138612

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枫晰UID: 2123661

In today’s rapid changing and complex society,the combination of two different(differences) has become more and more important. Compared with the old acdamic ways that engages the scholars separated in each single field, the interaction between different principles bring about not only fresh ideas and new perspectives, but also some mixed subjects.. making the the combination significant.

By learning from other related subjects and absorbing the innovative ideas , the old subject could broaden the sphere of their studying fields, growing into some new subjects.. Back to the 1950s, when people were eager to find out the 3-dimensional structure of the DNA molecule, it is two young man , James Watson, and Francis Crick who reached the destination ahead of all else not only by their biology background, but also by  their sensitivity about the contemporary  research from the chemists ,which is about the chemical structure analysis of the DNA molecule , especially the X-ray diffraction picture of it , and the report on the compounds of the DNA. Their accomplishment actually heralded a new subject that are famous now, named molecular biology, the subject studying biology from the scale of moleculars Given the biologists and the chemists had not shared their information ,the discovery would have been delayed for several years of more , not to mention the new subject, molecular biology. (不错)
At the same time ,the introduction of other  fields could brings about the fresh perspectives and ideas, then it is more likely to get significant advance. The carbon-14 dating method , invented by a chemist, resulted in a radical change in Archeology, as it enables people to determine the approximate age of a prehistoric organic remains,.(和TS有关吗) So it is with the CT scanning, the technical innovation by introducing computer science and physics into iatrology . It now serves as one of the most important medical technology which uses X rays and computers to produce three-dimensional images of the human body. It provides detailed views of the body’s soft tissues, including blood vessels, muscle tissue, and organs, such as the brain, while the traditional X rays, could only highlight dense body parts, such as bones. Moreover,the conventional X rays provide flat two-dimensional images, while the CT images depict a cross-section of the body, providing a much more clearer view of human body. for the doctors.
To sum up , the introduction of one academia field into another evokes inspiration as well as innovation. These fresh ideas serves as the complement ,making new and better approach to some particular issues; they also play the part of catalyst when a brand new subject emerges

应该是完全赞同的观点把
结构还是比较清晰的
只是感觉第二段的例子不会是很恰当,例子应该为论证这段TS服务的
以上只是本人的一点意见:) 加油

xinxinwUID: 2144273

In today’s rapid changing and complex society,the combination of two different？？t has become more and more important. Compared with the old acdamic ways that engages the scholars separated in each single field, the interaction between different principles bring about not only fresh ideas and new perspectives, but also some mixed subjects.. making the the combination significant.

By learning from other related subjects and absorbing the innovative ideas , the old subject could broaden the sphere of their studying fields, growing into some new subjects.. Back to the 1950s, when people were eager to find out the 3-dimensional structure of the DNA molecule, it is two young man , James Watson这个不年轻了, and Francis Crick who reached the destination ahead of all else not only by their biology background, but also by  their sensitivity about the contemporary  research from the chemists ,which is about the chemical structure analysis of the DNA molecule , especially the X-ray diffraction这个是物理的方法 picture of it , and the report on the compounds of the DNA. Their accomplishment actually heralded a new subject that are famous now, named molecular biology, the subject studying biology from the scale of moleculars Given the biologists and the chemists had not shared their information ,the discovery would have been delayed for several years of more , not to mention the new subject, molecular biology.例子是不错的，但是句子可以在精炼一些。细节的问题无所谓。

At the same time ,the introduction of other  fields could brings about the fresh perspectives and ideas, then it is more likely to get significant advance对比两段的TS，总觉得分工不明确. The carbon-14 dating method , invented by a chemist, resulted in a radical change in Archeology, as it enables people to determine the approximate age of a prehistoric organic remains,. So it is with the CT scanning, the technical innovation by introducing computer science and physics into iatrology . It now serves as one of the most important medical technology which uses X rays and computers to produce three-dimensional images of the human body. It provides detailed views of the body’s soft tissues, including blood vessels, muscle tissue, and organs, such as the brain, while the traditional X rays, could only highlight dense body parts, such as bones. Moreover,the conventional X rays provide flat two-dimensional images, while the CT images depict a cross-section of the body, providing a much more clearer view of human body. for the doctors.还是缺少最后的总结。

To sum up , the introduction of one academia field into another evokes inspiration as well as innovation. These fresh ideas serves as the complement ,making new and better approach to some particular issues; they also play the part of catalyst when a brand new subject emerges