issue136 清凉夏日小组3组四人帮作业

cpuliuwenUID: 2203373

TOPIC: ISSUE136 - "The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."
WORDS: 473          TIME: 0:45:00          DATE: 2006-8-10

Nowadays, we are faced with various choices, from what we are going to eat for a breakfast to what we pursue in our lives. As a result, some people argue that the absence of choice is a circumstance that is very , very rare. As far as I am concerned, although in most case it is true, our choices are still constrained by something which we can not control by ourselves.

Admittedly, when it comes to our study and work, we can make many choices. For example, while we study in school, we can choose the subject we are willing to study, no matter it is math or physics, literature or politics. Also we can choose the study method, learning by ourselves or discussing with others. After we get a job, we can choose which kind of institution we are going to work for, a school or a business, and we also can choose our attitudes to our work, sedulous or indifferent. Moreover, we may choose to leave the company if we find it is not appropriate for us and choose a better one. In a word, there exist numerous choices concerning our study and work.

Also, our everyday life is fraught with choices. What kind of person you choose as you friend or your husband/wife is the most common choice we are faced with. It is directly related to our happiness. Besides, even if the circumstance around us has been fixed, we also can choose our way of life, that is, our attitude to the life. In some people's eyes, their lives are compete with endless afflictions and sufferings. In spite of material abundance, they feel boring and upset. While in the similar circumstance, some people are satisfy with what they already have. In reality, the different results comes from their distinct choices. Some choose to be happy while some not. There is a popular Chinese song which says that " The happiness is your choice."  It is quite proper to illustrate this point.

However, although there seems to be substantial choices in our life, to some extent, it is totally a illusion because all of our choices is limited by the society in which we live. Before we make our decision, we have to consider may factors. For instance, when we want to study in a prestigious university, we must consider whether we can afford such expensive tuitions. When we want to choose a life style which is not advocated by the society, we must realize that we must be ready to be condemned or misunderstood by others if we stick to it. Maybe after overall consideration, some people have to give up in respect that they must consider the feeling of people they love. Besides, our choices are limited to the development level of science and technology, many people might want to choose moon as their living place. It is unrealistic considering human beings have not possess the ability to make the environment on the moon suitable for people to live. What is more, when a myriad of choice are presented to people, some of them may feel helpless since they have no choice but to choose. More often than not, people in this situation prefer to have no choice rather than make a choice which they can not make sure if it is a wise one.

Of course, you will absolutely have no choice in some situations. For example, nobody can choose his/her parents as well as his/her living standard of his/her family. In the same way, no one can choose when he/she is going to die ultimately.

In conclusion, even though we have many choices in our lives, these choices are inevitably constrained by the social environment or some other unchangeable objective conditions during this phrase of social development.

rosy0928UID: 2191748

Nowadays, we are faced with various choices, from what we are going to eat for a breakfast to what we pursue in our lives. As a result, some people argue that the absence of choice is a circumstance that is very , very rare. As far as I am concerned, although in most case it is true, our choices are still constrained by something which we can not control by ourselves.//和我不一样的立场啊!值得一看!

Admittedly, when it comes to our study and work, we can make many choices. For example, while we study in school, we can choose the subject we are willing to study, no matter it is math or physics, literature or politics. Also we can choose the study method, learning by ourselves or discussing with others. After we get a job, we can choose which kind of institution ms不大合适,呵呵~~we are going to work for, a school or a businesscompany是不是更好些?, and we also cancan also choose our attitudes to our work, sedulous or indifferent. Moreover, we may choose to leave the company if we find it is not appropriate for us and choose seek for a better one. In a word, there exist numerous choices concerning our study and work.//很善于用排比哦!有气势!

Also, our everyday life is fraught with choices. What kind of person you choose as you friend or your husband/wife is the most common choice we are faced with. It is directly related to our happiness. Besides, even if the circumstance around us has been fixed, we also can choose our way of life, that is, our attitude to the life. In some people's eyes, their lives are compete ??with endless afflictions and sufferings. In spite of material abundance, they feel boring and upset. While in the similar circumstance, some people are satisfy with what they already have. In reality, the different results comes from their distinct choices. Some choose to be happy while some not. There is a popular Chinese song which says that " The happiness is your choice."  It is quite proper to illustrate this point.//貌似是讲人生,不过主题句的every life好像不太贴切啊,对于统领全段?呵呵~~

However, although there seems to be substantial choices in our life, to some extent, it is totally a illusion because all of our choices is limited by the society in which we live. Before we make our decision, we have to consider may factors. For instance, when we want to study in a prestigious university, we must consider whether we can afford such expensive tuitions. When we want to choose a life style which is not advocated by the society, we must realize that we must be ready to be condemned or misunderstood by others if we stick to it. Maybe after overall consideration, some people have to give up in respect that they must consider the feeling of people they love. Besides, our choices are limited to the development level of science and technology, many people might want to choose moon as their living place. 好有创意!It is unrealistic considering human beings have not possess the ability to make the environment on the moon suitable for people to live. What is more, when a myriad of choice are presented to people, some of them may feel helpless since they have no choice but to choose. More often than not, people in this situation prefer to have no choice rather than make a choice which they can not make sure if it is a wise one.//这段又是那么有气势!

Of course, you will absolutely have no choice in some situations. For example, nobody can choose his/her parents as well as his/her living standard of his/her family. In the same way, no one can choose when he/she is going to die ultimately.

In conclusion, even though we have many choices in our lives, these choices are inevitably constrained by the social environment or some other unchangeable objective conditions during this phrase是不是阶段phase? of social development.

总体而言觉得很充实,而且排比反复的运用很有气势!
提点建议:你的立场偏向于选择受限,我觉得你可以将一二段body精简一下,合为一段(有些语意重复的), 然后第三段body可以分成几层论述,这样子不会象现在这么有些混乱离散!而且中心突出了!!呵呵~~参考哦~~:)