Issue4 076G myth 小组第一次作业-sarning

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好像写得比argu还短，汗一个，是在挤不出来了
Issue4
No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study.

PS: I fundamentally agree with
Syllabus:
1, Because of increasing complexity of modern science, more and more disciplines have been crossed together and majority of fields of study need ideas or knowledge of other fields.
2, Although one field of study is not developing lonely, many field of study have its own content absolutely different with other fields.

There are many examples can prove that knowledge and experience from other field of study could be vastly beneficial to the research of the field concerned. I basically concede speaker's statement, however, to some extent, speaker oversimplify the relationship between various fields of study.

Because of increasing complexity of modern science, more and more disciplines have been crossed together and majority of fields of study need ideas or knowledge of other fields. Especially mathematics and physics have been foundation of modern nature science. An exemplary case is economics, which develops better since knowledge of mathematics has been introduced into this field. GDP as one conception of economics is purely a figure value that needs a series of math method to calculate it. Another case is meteorology which need method of physics to analyze component of atmosphere and how many calories would be release when gas was coagulated to water and where the wind come from and how about its intension and velocity. And electrics need not only mathematic tools for calculation of quantum of electrons but also physical method to analyze the nature of stream of electrons. Nowadays biology has a eminent progress with knowledge of chemistry used for this field of study. All in one word, many field of study can not advance significantly with isolating research.

Although one field of study is not developing lonely, every field of study have its own content absolutely different with other fields. You can never depend on that knowledge of mathematics would impulse the advancement of art. So the distinct difference comes from science of nature and humanities. Science of nature is a set of invariable truth that never change itself and humanities come from aggregation of history of human beings including various cultures. Someone engaged in field of science of nature such as electrics or meteorology maybe need some instruction of mathematician and physical scientist, artist's advice is some helpful but not huge. The same as artist or musician, they almost never use knowledge of mathematic.

In sum, Speaker's statement that outsiders bring knowledge and experience can make advancement is advisable. In fact, many discipline have compound together. Faced with science of nature and humanities simultaneously, situation may be some different. Fields of science of nature basically don't need the knowledge and experience of humanities .On the contrary the knowledge of science of nature is dispensable to humanities.

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Issue4
No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study.

PS: I fundamentally agree with
Syllabus:
1, Because of increasing complexity of modern science, more and more disciplines have been crossed together and majority of fields of study need ideas or knowledge of other fields.
2, Although one field of study is not developing lonely, many field of study have its own content absolutely different with other fields.

需要充实提纲，单凭这两点是不大可能写出太多内容的，建议看看小组其他人的提纲。

There are many examples can prove that knowledge and experience from other field of study could be vastly beneficial to the research of the field concerned. I basically concede/accept/admit/confess/grant speaker's statement, however, to some extent, speaker oversimplify the relationship between-among various fields of study.

Because of increasing complexity of modern science, more and more disciplines have been crossed together and majority of fields of study need ideas/experience or knowledge of other fields. Especially mathematics and physics have been foundation of modern nature science.

这句话有歧义，能理解你是想说数学和物理为其他类学科贡献很多，但是从英文翻译上来看，好象是表明数学和物理作为基础学科也被其他学科影响着，事实上，经典物理还有数学在很大程度上并没有被其他学科影响。所以可以把这句话改成这样：especially mathematics and physics have been foundation of modern nature science contribute greatly to other realms .
An exemplary case is economics, which develops better since knowledge of mathematics has been introduced into this field. GDP as one conception of economics is purely a figure value that needs a series of math method to calculate it. Another case is meteorology which needs method of physics to analyze component of atmosphere and how many calories would be released  when gas was-is coagulated to water and where the wind comes from and how about its intension and velocity. And electrics needs not only mathematic tools for calculation of quantum of electrons but also physical method to analyze the nature of stream of electrons. Nowadays biology has a eminent progress with knowledge of chemistry-biochemistry-used for this field of study. All in one word, many fields of study can not advance significantly with isolating researches .

属于自己的例子，很好，我写的例子是大量交叉学科的出现，你也可以参照一下。Biochemistry ,molecular biology ,astrophotography etc.

Although one field of study is not developing lonely, every field of study have-has  its own content absolutely different with/from  other fields. You can never depend on that knowledge of mathematics would impulse-inspire the advancement of art. So the distinct difference comes from science of nature and humanities. Science of nature is a set of invariable truth that never change itself and humanities come from aggregation of history of human beings including various cultures. Someone engaged-engaging  in field of science of nature such as electrics or meteorology maybe need some instruction of mathematician and physical scientists , artist's advice is some helpful but not huge. The same as artist or musician, they almost never use knowledge of mathematic.

说实话这段需要从新构思了，论证方面不够清楚，深入。

In sum, Speaker's statement that outsiders bring knowledge and experience can make advancement is advisable. In fact, many discipline have compound together. Faced-facing with science of nature and humanities simultaneously, situation may be some different.
中国式英语，改成-maybe occur differently .

Fields of science of nature basically don't need the knowledge and experience of humanities .On the contrary the knowledge of science of nature is dispensable to humanities.

结尾有堆砌的嫌疑。
我在例子方面有很大缺陷，在资料方面可能不能给你提供太多，但是为了我们共同的发展，我一定尽量找一些能够充实文章的例子，你先改一下，再发上来，我再来拍。