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Issue36
The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries.

　There has long been a violent conversation among people that whether pertinent assessment of individuals' greatness can be got from their contemporaries. All through history can indeed recognize an individual's greatness, I still deem that one's contemporaries can also appreciate his or her greatness, and in some way better, in accordance with their advantages both in similar backgrounds and communications with that particular individual.
   Those who live after the great individuals are facing a world that maybe we can not even make more than the wildest guess at how sophisticated that it will be. Thus there may be some barriers for them to understand the great hardness that their pioneers were confronted with. This kind of situation is right amount to that we can hardly imagine the difficulty for our forerunners to understand why the earth is a sphere instead of a plane, and so the greatness of the first person who concluded that earth is not a plane may be overlooked by us now, for even a child knows that conclusion. However, individuals living contemporarily are experiencing the same level of science and technology, and they may have the same practice or have a better understanding than future people about the great person's culture background. So, as assessors, contemporaries can draw on these to get a complete apprehension of the hardness the great person have overcome and make a objective evaluation.
   On the other hand, the contemporaries have the facility that they can communicate with that great person, and so his or her initial thoughts and explanations can be recount to them. Consider the picture that Albert Einstein standing in front of a blackboard to convince other scientists his relative theory. And this kind of face to face help will surly leads to better understanding of the great person’s abstruse deductions. Thus, it is just as likely that reliable assessments to the individual’s greatness will be made.
   As for those living after great individuals, although they can easily draw a conclusion about the greatness of their forerunners according to their works or theories, during a comparatively long time, which has turned into practical account and spawned a new generation of  art or technology trends. The gulf of time between history and future may make complete and detail understanding impossible.
    Based on these two above-mentioned respects, there is no reason to deny that contemporaries can also well assessed great individual’s achievement in a different but significant way.

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There has （long去掉） been a violent conversation among people that whether 我个人意见觉得用这个句子恰当些（individuals can get）pertinent assessment （加about his）(of individuals'去掉) greatness (can be got去掉) from their contemporaries or not for a long time. (All through去掉，要不这个句子就没有主语了 )history （加which like a mirror）can indeed recognize an individual's greatness, I still deem that one's contemporaries can also appreciate  (将his or her改为other’s) greatness, and in some way better, in accordance with their advantages both in similar backgrounds and communications with that particular individual(s).不好意思，我这句话没看懂。
   Those（我觉得用the people是否好点） who live after the great individuals are facing a world that maybe we can not even make more than the wildest guess at how sophisticated that it will be.（不通）Thus there may be some barriers for them to understand the great(用very是否好些) hardness that their pioneers （were去掉，是主动语态度）confronted with. This kind of situation ( is去掉) right amounts to that we can hardly imagine the difficulties for our forerunners to understand why the earth is a sphere instead of a plane, and （so去掉） the greatness of the first person who concluded that earth is（was） not a plane may be overlooked by us now(去掉) for even a child knows that conclusion（加nowadays）. However, individuals living contemporarily are experiencing the same level of science and technology, and they may have the same practice or （改but）have a better understanding than future people about the great person's culture background. So, as assessors, contemporaries can draw on these to get a complete apprehension of the hardness the great person have overcome and make an objective evaluation.
   On the other hand, the contemporaries have the facility that they can communicate with that great person, and so his or her initial thoughts and explanations can be recounted to them. Consider the picture that Albert Einstein standing (改为standed) in front of a blackboard to convince other scientists his relative theory. And this kind of face to face help will surly leads（改为lead） to better understanding of the great person’s abstruse deductions. Thus, it is just （as去掉 ）likely that reliable assessments to the individual’s greatness will be made.
   As for those living after great individuals, although they can easily draw a conclusion about the greatness of their forerunners according to their works or theories, during a comparatively long time, which has turned into practical account and spawned a new generation of  art or technology trends. The gulf of time between history（用past） and future may make complete and detail(用detailed) understanding impossible.
    Based on these two （放后面above-mentioned） respects（mentioned above）, there is no reason to deny that contemporaries can (also well放后面 ) assess(ed) great individual’s achievement(加S) in a different but significant way.
文章改的不好，请见谅。跟你一样，我也不太会用例子。一起努力，背些例子哦。