issue83 我的第二篇，欢迎大家拍砖哈！

zoe797970UID: 2249886

outline:
1.summerize the author's opinion, and state mine
2.for the sake of wildlife and environment, we should
preserve some areas
3.these areas can also have some other usage: travel,
research
4.city planning

There may has been a heat discussion among people on
the topic that should government preserve publicly
owned wilderness areas in its natural state or not, and the
author believes so. As a student who have been studying
geosciences for 2 years, I must confess that I can't
agree him/her more on this subject.
Firstly, as we all know, due to many problems
caused by our human beings( such as Green House Effect,
the acid rain, grassland degradation, and so forth,)there
were more than 30000 kinds of creatures extincted  in the
past 100 years. There are often a large number of animals
and plants living in the places which called "wilderness
areas”, if we exploit those places without cogitating,
it is possible we could only show their pictures on the
books to our next generation. Fortunately, many governments
have realized the importance of these wilderness lands,
then taken some useful actions. Take Chinese Shennongjia
National Park for example, it was founded in 1983 by
Chinese government, from then on, a series of useful
actions have been made, such as forbid lumbering and
raising some endangered species. And wilder lands are
enormous to the environment of our planet, for example,
the wetland can retard floods, and the forest can absolve
carbon dioxide as well as produce oxygen for us.
Secondly, these preserved publicly owned wilderness
areas can be cultivated not only for the protection
of wildlife and environment, but also for the economic
development and some scientific research. Nowadays,
many modern people have tired of the busy and noisy life
in cities, they probably long for spending a vacation
at the wilder lands. In China, there are a group of people
who are called "lv you" which has the same meaning as
"hiker", they enjoy wondering in a forest and relaxing
themselves, and I believe the number will increase as
people paying more attention to the quality of life. Meanwhile,
these places also play a significant part in the researches
of geoscientists, biologists and even anthropologists.
They can be a prefect position to study the plate tectonics
of certain continent or the primitive shellfish. Just as
Davis, William Morris, the geoscientist I admire, said that
"Nature can always give you surprise!" Who can foresee what
gift the wilder land which you want to  build skyscrapers
on would give.
Finally, it is a wise action to preserve some places from
the angel of city planning. Although many countries have
concerned on the excessive population, the total number
is still keeping augmenting at a relatively fast speed.
In case of the short of useful lands, we should consider
the proportion of land cover and land use carefully, and
persevering some wilderness areas is a good idea.
In sum, yet remote wilderness areas are often accessible
to only a few people at the first glance, I do believe
they are truly very important to our earth, thus, I agree with the
author on his/her claim.

这篇文章确实让我无语了很久，中途又断断续续的，所以我自己也不知道究竟写了多久:L，估计也得有一个多小时吧。。。我会努力的！欢迎大家狂拍，没事的，让暴风雨来得更猛烈些吧！！！

jiangyue011UID: 2340595

There may has been a heat discussion among people on
the topic that should government preserve publicly
owned wilderness areas in its natural state or not, and the
author believes so. As a student who have been studying
geosciences for 2 years, I must confess that I can't
agree（with）him/her more on this subject.

Firstly, as we all know, due to many problems
caused by our human beings( such as Green House Effect,
the acid rain, grassland degradation, and so forth,)there
were more than 30000 kinds of creatures extincted (extinct) in the
past 100 years. There are often a large number of animals
and plants living in the places which (are) called "wilderness
areas”, if we exploit those places without cogitating,
it is possible we could only show their pictures on the
books to our next generation. Fortunately, many governments
have realized the importance of these wilderness lands,
then taken some useful actions. Take Chinese Shennongjia
National Park for example, it was founded in 1983 by
Chinese government, (添and) from then on, a series of useful
actions have been made, such as forbid (forbiding) lumbering and
raising some endangered species. (在这是不是要用个信号词，象further, furthermore之类的)And wilder lands are
enormous（vital似乎好点） to the environment of our planet, for example,
the wetland can retard floods, and the forest can absolve
carbon dioxide as well as produce oxygen for us.

Secondly, these preserved publicly owned wilderness
areas can be cultivated not only for the protection
of wildlife and environment, but also for the economic
development and some scientific research（researches）. Nowadays,
many modern people have tired of the busy and noisy life
in cities, they probably long for spending a vacation
at the wilder lands. In China, there are a group of people
who are called "lv you" (驴友？)which has the same meaning as
"hiker", they enjoy wondering in a forest and relaxing
themselves, and I believe the number will increase as
people paying more attention to the quality of life. Meanwhile,
these places also play a significant part in the researches
of geoscientists, biologists and even anthropologists.
They can be a prefect position to study the plate tectonics
of certain continent or the primitive shellfish. Just as
Davis, William Morris, the geoscientist I admire, said that
"Nature can always give you surprise!" Who can foresee what
gift the wilder land which you want to  build skyscrapers
on would give.（似乎要调整下这句才好理解，Who can foresee what
gift the wilder land on which you want to build skyscrapers could give to us?）

Finally, it is a wise action to preserve some places from
the angel (angle) of city planning. Although many countries have
concerned (添themselves)on the excessive population, the total number
is still keeping augmenting at a relatively fast speed.
In case of the short (shortness) of useful lands, we should consider
the proportion of land cover and land use carefully, and
persevering some wilderness areas is a good idea.
(这一段我没有完全理解，保护它是为城市发展预留地出来？)

In sum, yet（although） remote wilderness areas are often accessible
to only a few people at the first glance, I do believe
they are truly very important to our earth, thus, I agree with the
author on his/her claim.

（其实我自己更喜欢观点立场鲜明，没有让步的文章，但我总感觉如果没有让步，写着写着就写不出来了，sigh. 这篇文章似乎更像写的是托福的作文，且我觉得在语言、在论证上都还是很有提高空间的，呵呵.相信你下次可以做得更好些）

小破孩UID: 2125288

There may has been a heat discussion among people on the topic thatadd whether? should government preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in its natural state or not, and the author believes sobelieves so? believes yes 是不是更明确?. As a student who have been studying geosciences for 2 years, I must confess that I can't agree him/her more on this subject.为什么不说strongly agree之类的,搞得我还以为你不同意sign

Firstly, as we all know, due to many problems caused by our human beings( such as Green House Effect, the acid rain, grassland degradation, and so forth,)there were more than 30000 kinds of creatures extincted  in the past 100 years. There are often a large number of animals and plants living in the places which called "wilderness
areas”, if we exploit those places without cogitating,
it is possible we could only show their pictures on the
books to our next generation. Fortunately, many governments
have realized the importance of these wilderness lands,
then taken some useful actions. Take Chinese Shennongjia
National Park for example, it was founded in 1983 by
Chinese government, from then on, a series of useful
actions have been made, such as forbid lumbering and
raising some endangered species. And add换成additionally?wilder lands are
enormous to the environment of our planet, for example,
the wetland can retard floods, and the forest can absolve
carbon dioxide as well as produce oxygen for us.感觉这点还没看够呢就没了,要不就再多展开一句加个结尾要不就自成一段?不过感觉这段好像没有ts耶?
Secondly, these preserved publicly owned wilderness
areas can be cultivated not only for the protection
of wildlife and environment, but also for the economic
development and some scientific research. Nowadays,
many modern people have tired of get tired of吧?the busy and noisy life
in cities, they probably long for spending a vacation
at the wilder lands. In China, there are a group of people
who are called "lv you" which has the same meaning as
"hiker", 应该另开一句,句号they enjoy wondering in a forest and relaxing
themselves, and I believe the number will increase as
people paying more attention to the quality of life. Meanwhile,
these places also play a significant part in the researches
of geoscientists, biologists and even anthropologists.
They can be a prefect position to study the plate tectonics
of certain continent or the primitive shellfish. Just as
Davis, William Morris, the geoscientist I admire, said that
"Nature can always give you surprise!" Who can foresee what
gift the wilder land which you want to  build skyscrapers
on would give.结尾的部分很不错,最后一句学习之
Finally, it is a wise action to preserve some places from
the angel of city planning. Although many countries have
concerned on the excessive population, the total number
is still keeping augmenting at a relatively fast speed.
In case of the short of useful lands, we should consider
the proportion of land cover and land use carefully, and
persevering some wilderness areas is a good idea.
In sum, yet remote wilderness areas are often accessible
to only a few people at the first glance, I do believe
they are truly very important to our earth, thus, I agree with the
author on his/her claim.

本来想改成每行对齐了，后来懒了就这么改了，不过下次预览一下吧，改的人方便
好像第一段没有ts，看了好几遍，应该没走眼，呵呵
我对issue现在还没啥感觉，写过的东西自己都不是很想看，感觉语言上可以再提高一点，例子还不错，大家一起加油

sara0522UID: 2336981

There may has been a heat discussion among people on
the topic that should government preserve publicly
owned wilderness areas in its natural state or not, and the
author believes so. As a student who have been studying
geosciences for 2 years, I must confess that I can't
agree him/her more on this subject.(这个写的好,我想到听力那个时候经常听到这种句子)
Firstly, as we all know, due to many problems
caused by our human beings( such as Green House Effect,
the acid rain, grassland degradation, and so forth,)there
were more than 30000 kinds of creatures extincted  in the
past 100 years. There are often a large number of animals
and plants living in the places which called "wilderness
areas”, if we exploit those places without cogitating,
it is possible we could only show their pictures on the
books to our next generation. Fortunately, many governments
have realized the importance of these wilderness lands,
then taken some useful actions. Take Chinese Shennongjia
National Park for example, it was founded in 1983 by
Chinese government, from then on, a series of useful
actions have been made(taken), such as forbid lumbering and
raising some endangered species. And wilder lands are
enormous to the environment of our planet, for example,
the wetland can retard floods, and the forest can absolve
carbon dioxide as well as produce oxygen for us.
Secondly, these preserved publicly owned wilderness
areas can be cultivated not only for the protection
of wildlife and environment, but also for the economic
development and some scientific research. Nowadays,
many modern people have tired of the busy and noisy life
in cities, they probably long for spending a vacation
at the wilder lands. In China, there are a group of people
who are called "lv you" which has the same meaning as
"hiker", they enjoy wondering in a forest and relaxing
themselves, and I believe the number will increase as
people paying more attention to the quality of life. Meanwhile,
these places also play a significant part in the researches
of geoscientists, biologists and even anthropologists.
They can be a prefect position to study the plate tectonics
of certain continent or the primitive shellfish. Just as
Davis, William Morris, the geoscientist I admire, said that
"Nature can always give you surprise!" Who can foresee what
gift the wilder land which you want to  build skyscrapers
on would give.(不知道是不是模式的问题,我看到好几个点啊,你应该分开写,不然一陀~~~不清楚,然后因为这里面条理不清楚,我没怎么细看,~~~ 原谅我啊,不过我看了大概,例子好象不错~~~)
Finally, it is a wise action to preserve some places from
the angel of city planning.(这点好~~~) Although many countries have
concerned on the excessive population, the total number
is still keeping augmenting at a relatively fast speed.
In case of the short of useful lands, we should consider
the proportion of land cover and land use carefully, and
persevering some wilderness areas is a good idea.
In sum, yet remote wilderness areas are often accessible
to only a few people at the first glance, I do believe
they are truly very important to our earth, thus, I agree with the
author on his/her claim.