issue177 [0710G Superstar]第十一次作业

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一周没写了，今天没有限时，不过写得也不顺手啊， 看来不能断啊

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The whole life of humans is a process of learning and studying, which fertile the inner quality of individuals. Academic disciplines often offer us new but more scientific ideologies which play an important role in helping us understand the world more clearly and accurately, and study which usually alters the way we perceive the world.

It is undoubted that academic disciplines often reveal the truth face of nature, society, human beings and so forth, which lead us to a deeper level of recognition the environmental materials in our daily life. No one knows everything when he was born, it is the study of academic disciplines with scientific ideas and theories that makes a person sensible and intelligent. On the way we exploit the truth of the world through studying academic disciplines we can complete our values of the world and eliminate the stupid ignorant ones before. It is the study of physics that lets us know the reason why we have gravities. It is the study of geography that remove the veil of the secret that why we have daily exchange of day and night, along with the alternation of four distinguished seasons. It is the study of biology that help us find out the origin of human being-primate. Without all of these, we might have many other wrong and absurd ideas to explain the phenomena of the world, which cannot be imagined. So that study of academic disciplines does have an positive effect in altering people’s perception of the world.

With the change of valuing the world, people usually change their angles and ways to deal with present problems at the same time, which also a supply by study of an academic discipline, for it does not only offer creative and scientific ideologies to people, but also more applicable methodologies which can conduct or indicate people to deal with problems and events in right directions. Consequently, people often see the same world as they study an academic discipline before with different eyes which are filled with more sensible ideas and theories. For example, by learning deeper of philosophy, one know the truth that everything locates in a network connecting with other things, which warns us to think more comprehensively of the following reaction of related things when we have some activities. Another instance is that after studying ecology, we know the tight relationship between human beings and the environmental factors, including the climate, the natural source and also other kinds of species living around us. Having this principle, we can develop our society and continue the process of progressing according with the coexist with other livings and the protection of the environment so that we can ultimately have a healthy and stable living condition for further development.

As the significance of studying of an academic discipline is so important, it is rather more crucial for people to choose the right discipline of which we are going to learn. Because different ideas and theories often have different effects and results in building one’s value and recognition. It is a better choice to learn those positively right advanced thoughts as the tools to understand the truths in the world rather than those with wrong and pessimistic attitudes, which may mislead people in the real way of perceiving the world.

Learning of an academic disciplines offers us a magnifying glass through which we can recognize and understand the world much more clearly and accurately. As thoughts and ideas constitute the real soul of people, the direction and essence of these thoughts and ideas are the keys which determinate the color of glasses that people wearing to observe the world. So that it is very important for people to choose the right and scientific academic disciplines in their way of study and exploring the real world.

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The whole life of humans is a process of learning and studying, which fertile【这个是形容词吧，能这样用吗？】 the inner quality of individuals. Academic disciplines often offer us new but more scientific ideologies which play an important role in helping us understand the world more clearly and accurately, and study which usually alters the way we perceive the world.

It is undoubted that academic disciplines often reveal the truth 【true】face of nature, society, human beings and so forth, which lead us to a deeper level of recognition the environmental materials in our daily life. No one knows everything when he was born，【断句吧】it is the study of academic disciplines with scientific ideas and theories that makes a person sensible and intelligent. On the way we exploit the truth of the world through studying academic disciplines we can complete our values of the world and eliminate the stupid ignorant ones before. It is the study of physics that lets us know the reason why we have gravities. It is the study of geography that remove【removes】 the veil of the secret that why we have daily exchange of day and night, along with the alternation of four distinguished seasons. It is the study of biology that help【helps】 us find out the origin of human being-primate. Without all of these, we might have many other wrong and absurd ideas to explain the phenomena of the world, which cannot be imagined. So that study of academic disciplines does have an【a】 positive effect in altering people’s perception of the world.

With the change of valuing the world, people usually change their angles and ways to deal with present problems at the same time, which also a supply by study of an academic discipline, for it does not only offer creative and scientific ideologies to people, but also more applicable methodologies which can conduct or indicate people to deal with problems and events in right directions. Consequently, people often see the same world as they study an academic discipline before with different eyes which are filled with more sensible ideas and theories. For example, by learning deeper of philosophy, one know the truth that everything locates in a network connecting with other things, which warns us to think more comprehensively of the following reaction of related things when we have some activities. Another instance is that after studying ecology, we know the tight relationship between human beings and the environmental factors, including the climate, the natural source and also other kinds of species living around us. Having this principle, we can develop our society and continue the process of progressing according with the coexist【？？contact？？】 with other livings and the protection of the environment so that we can ultimately have a healthy and stable living condition for further development.

As the significance of studying of an academic discipline is so important, it is rather more crucial for people to choose the right discipline of which we are going to learn. Because different ideas and theories often have different effects and results in building one’s value and recognition. It is a better choice to learn those positively right advanced thoughts as the tools to understand the truths in the world rather than those with wrong and pessimistic attitudes, which may mislead people in the real way of perceiving the world.【补充的很好】

Learning of an【去掉】 academic disciplines offers us a magnifying glass through which we can recognize and understand the world much more clearly and accurately. As thoughts and ideas constitute the real soul of people, the direction and essence of these thoughts and ideas are the keys which determinate the color of glasses that people wearing to observe the world. So that it is very important for people to choose the right and scientific academic disciplines in their way of study and exploring the real world.
点评：开头直接同意作者的观点，中间分两部分论述相互的作用，说理很是充分，有层层深入的感觉，结尾有升华。很好啊，用词和句子也都很不错，值得学习。加油！