issue184 【0710G Superstar 小组】第十二次作业 by totalsm45518

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在宿舍写，很难限时啊，干扰很多，所以又写多了

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提纲：1. data对于theorize的重要
        2. 有些不用data也可以建立
         3.二者的紧密关系

The speaker asserts that it is indispensible for one to have sufficient data before he come up with a new theory. In some discreet academic disciplines, it is really a rule that scientists and scholars should obey, for data and evidence are the foundation and basis of the theory. However, in some special areas sometimes it is difficult or even impossible to collect enough data, in which case making out a hypothesis first is a better choice.

As an architecture needs solid foundation under the ground, data plays an role as the basis of this special building-theory. Data is very important and necessary in theorizing an ideology, for it provides the circumstances and conditions to test the theory’s applicability. What invariably happens is that scientists and experts set up or come down to a new theory during multiple processes of numerous experiments which provide sufficient data. With data and experiments, people often found out the truth or some important principle which have not been discovered before. There are numerous instances in history that data have give births to many principles and axioms. The father of genetics-Mendel, who create the famous Mendel’s laws of inheritance, which brought biological science to a new level depending on experiments. He concluded these significantly famous laws by practicing plenty of experiments concerning hybridizing different species of peas. He made experiments with hundreds of thousands of peas before he finally found out the secret of life. Therefore, data is a key to open up the gate of truths when those theory should be precise and accurate.

Even though data is necessary and helpful to set up theories, sometimes in special areas such as chemistry, physics or biology and so forth, it is impossible for scientists and scholars to collect sufficient data before a new theory has come out, because the strict situation of experiment cannot be satisfied in the environmental on the earth. Nevertheless, there is no limitation of human’s brain and ideology, which often brings out creative thoughts only enlightened by some connective matters. In this case, people should care less about the amount of data and subsequently propose those novel ideas first, which often prove to be accurate and true in the future. Consider, for example, the most significant principle of the world concerning space and time proposed by the greatest scientist Einstein-the Relativism, is just a theory without sufficient data or experiments basis when it was just introduced, which even caused lots of doubts from most contemporary people. However, after sufficient work had been done to prove the stable speed of light, everyone realize the value of this theory, which also influence forever in the future. Other instances such as Newton’s classic principle of inertia, Vegener’s hypothesis of continental drift, the famous guess of gold Bach, all demonstrate that putting forward a theory without sufficient data is also a common and applicable method on the way of exploring science in the world.

There is a tight connective relationship between theory and data, each can promote and need the other. Without data, some theory is like a water without source and a tree without root, which may often leads to a grave mistake as the speaker contends. Meanwhile, without setting up any theory, however enough the data is, there is no valuable use for it. Even though many conditions theories are coming out before collecting data, they need to be proved whether right or wrong through data in the future. Consider, for example, the theory proposed by Maxwell about the relationship between electricity and magnetism was proved to be right by his student after he had died. Therefore, whether a theory is set up upon data or not, it always need data to be a touchstone so that it can exist rightly, while data also need theory to make them valuable and useful.

In sum, whether it is a grave mistake to theorize before one has data depends on the particular objects that the theory concerning on. Nevertheless, data plays an important and indispensible role in either setting up or testing the accuracy of a theory. As a result, neither theory and data should be neglect in the way of searching for the truths.

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The speaker asserts that it is indispensable for one to have sufficient data before he come up with a new theory. In some discreet academic disciplines, it is really a rule that scientists and scholars should obey, for data and evidence are the foundation and basis of the theory. However, in some special areas sometimes it is difficult or even impossible to collect enough data, in which case making out a hypothesis first is a better choice.

As an architecture needs solid foundation under the ground, data plays an role as the basis of this special building-theory. Data is very important and necessary in theorizing an ideology, for it provides the circumstances and conditions to test the theory’s applicability. What invariably happens is that scientists and experts set up or come down to a new theory during multiple processes of numerous experiments which sufficient data. With data and experiments, people often found out the truth or some important principle which have not been discovered before. There are numerous instances in history that data have give births to many principles and axioms. The father[Father] of genetics-Mendel, who create[created] the famous Mendel’s laws[law?] of inheritance, which brought biological science[biology] to a new level depending on experiments.[句子结构有点乱，谓语是depend? 或者把which 去掉？] He concluded these significantly famous laws by practicing plenty of experiments concerning hybridizing different species of peas. He made experiments with hundreds of thousands of peas before he finally found out the secret of life. [上两句合成一句或许更好]Therefore, data is a key to open up the gate of truths when those theory should be precise and accurate.

Even though data is necessary and helpful to set up theories, sometimes in special areas such as chemistry, physics or biology and so forth, it is impossible for scientists and scholars to collect sufficient data before a new theory has come out, because the strict situation of experiment cannot be satisfied in the environmental on the earth. Nevertheless, there is no limitation of human’s brain and ideology, which often brings out creative thoughts only enlightened by some connective matters. In this case, people should care less about the amount of data and subsequently propose those novel ideas first, which often prove to be accurate and true in the future. Consider, for example, the most significant principle of the world concerning space and time proposed by the greatest scientist Einstein-the Relativism[Relativity], is just a theory without sufficient data or experiments basis when it was just introduced, which even caused lots of doubts from most contemporary people[scientists]. However, after sufficient work had been done to prove the stable speed of light, everyone realize the value of this theory, which also influence forever in the future. Other instances such as Newton’s classic principle[law] of inertia, Vegener’s hypothesis of continental drift, the famous guess of gold Bach, all demonstrate that putting forward a theory without sufficient data is also a common and applicable method on the way of exploring science in the world.

There is a tight connective relationship between theory and data, each can promote and need the other. Without data, some theory is like a water without source and a tree without root, which may often leads to a grave mistake as the speaker contends.[这个应该展开写] Meanwhile, without setting up any theory, however enough the data is, there is no valuable use for it. Even though many conditions theories are coming out before collecting data, they need to be proved whether right or wrong through data in the future. Consider, for example, the theory proposed by Maxwell about the relationship between electricity and magnetism was proved to be right by his student after he had died. Therefore, whether a theory is set up upon data or not, it always need data to be a touchstone so that it can exist rightly, while data also need theory to make them valuable and useful.

In sum, whether it is a grave mistake to theorize before one has data depends on the particular objects that the theory concerning on. Nevertheless, data plays an important and indispensable role in either setting up or testing the accuracy of a theory. As a result, neither theory and data should be neglect in the way of searching for the truths.


语言依旧很出色，错误很少，用词也很准确，不得不羡慕啊。
我写错题目了，这篇没写，所以结构上也给不了好建议，只当参考吧：层次很清晰，例子也很好，只是觉得对于题目本身关于mistake的讨论有点少。
总的来说，是篇出色的文章，加油