CRACK 9T小组第4次作业----holding

holdingUID: 2285054

writing(Characteristics & qualities):
What are some of the qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer.

Giving us life, our parents, as the people who love us most in the world, also give us the most selfless love in the world. Undoubtedly, every parents love their children. But it is not enough to only love them. They could not be good parents without some other necessary qualities.

To begin with, a good parent should know how to cultivate a child to thrive and give him a best guide to living. As a parent, you should give your child best prevent and avoid all dander to child, which could lead the child to health and happy. What is more, parent should also tell child there will be some trouble in the life and these are ordinary, and everyone should have the ability to come over the troubles. Hence, as a good parent, you should not prevent all dangers from your child, on the contrary, a good parent may use his/her knowledge and experience to tell the child not all the things in life will go smoothly firstly. And also, parent may leave child alone sometimes, and let him/her to come over dilemma all by himself/herself. Only in this way, child can treat other more difficulties in future, and parent could be a good parent.

What is more, to be a good parent, patience and endurance are necessary. One of the most important characters of children is vivacity. So children could not sit quietly and listen to the lessons. Moreover, children always forget the lessons or rules you tell him/her before forming his/her own habit. Therefore, parent should use his intelligence to analyze what methods will succeed in teaching lessons, and have enough patience to teach child several time until they remember and form to habitual behavior.

Besides, a good parent should have enough knowledge to satisfy the children’s strong curiosity. Just because children know little thing, they are curious to all things happening around them. Parents could answer their various of questions only if they have widespread knowledge. Of course, no one knows every thing in the world, but a excellent parent should know how to give a satisfying answer to children. Maybe they can not give the exactly answers, but they can inspire the children’s interesting of learning or courage children to search answers by themselves.

To sum up, I think right teaching method, patience, and knowledge are necessary to be a good parent, which could help to bring a child up to be a healthy, happy, forceful person.

speaking(X月XX号机经):1. If your friends from other country are going to visit your country,  where do you suggest them to go? And state your reasons.

Well, I think he should visit the city of beijin.
Beijin is the capital of our country. In Beijin he can feel the fast development of China. Moreover, Beijin is the culture center of China, which has five thousands-years civilization. In Beijin, he could visit many interests, such as Forbidden City, summer palace, to feel the deep Chinese culture. Besides, Beijin will hold the Olympic game in 2008, at that time Beijin will become the focus of the world.

2. 有的人旅游时喜欢直奔目的地，有的人喜欢兼顾游览沿途景观，你prefer？

Well, I prefer to see around and feel the beauty on the way. Some one thinks the most beautiful view is always in the termini, while I think the beauty on the way is more worthy to feel and remember. The beauty on the way could be changed when you are on the different paces, while the termini do not. What is more, only if you are fully feeling the difficulties and come over all the troubles on the way, you can indeed feel the success and happiness of getting the termini.

holdingUID: 2285054

cyyc0311UID: 2187097

Giving us life, our parents, as the people who love us most in the world, also give us the most selfless love in the world. Undoubtedly, every parents(parent) love their children. But it is not enough to only love them. They could not be good parents without some other necessary qualities.

To begin with, a good parent should know how to cultivate a child to thrive and give him a best guide to living. As a parent, you should give your child best prevent(prevention) and avoid all danger to child, which could lead the child to health and happy. What is more, parents should also tell the child there will be some troubles in the life and these are ordinary, and everyone should have the ability to come over the troubles. Hence, as a good parent, you should not prevent all dangers from your child, on the contrary, a good parent may use his/her knowledge and experience to tell the child not all the things in life will go smoothly firstly. And also, parent may leave child alone sometimes, and let him/her to come over dilemma all by himself/herself. Only in this way, child can treat other more difficulties in future, and parent could be a good parent.

What is more, to be a good parent, patience and endurance are necessary. One of the most important characters of children is vivacity. So children could not sit quietly and listen to the lessons. Moreover, children always forget the lessons or rules you tell him/her before forming his/her own habit. Therefore, a parent should use his intelligence to analyze what methods(which method是不是好点) will succeed in teaching lessons, and have enough patience to teach child several time until they remember and form to habitual behavior.

Besides, a good parent should have enough knowledge to satisfy the children’s strong curiosity. Just because children know little thing, they are curious to all things happening around them. Parents could answer their various of questions only if they have widespread knowledge. Of course, no one knows every thing in the world, but a excellent parent should know how to give a satisfying answer to children. Maybe they can not give the exactly answers, but they can inspire the children’s interesting of learning or courage children to search answers by themselves.

To sum up, I think right teaching method, patience, and knowledge are necessary to be a good parent, which could help to bring a child up to be a healthy, happy, forceful person.



注意名词的单复数以及冠词 danger可数不可数我也不知道~~~~
第二段有点乱，稍微整理下比较好
use his knowledge/intelligence to ...用了好几次,觉得换个句式或者换个方式说这种意思
TS写的比较好!!!比我那重复性那么大的好多了 感觉也和我的有点不一样，还是很受益。
愚见，有什么意见和我讨论！o(∩_∩)o...

cyyc0311UID: 2187097

口语我听不了
不知道什么原因，可能是软件的问题
找其他人帮个忙吧
不好意思哈

冬子UID: 2290398

发音上没有大问题，除了一些连词咬得有些重，比如那个 besides

第一题说的很好啦，内容很丰富，声音清楚，速度掌握得也很好（这个我一直作不到，要向你学习 OTZ）

第二题不知道为什么你的声音一下子就小了很多，而且好像出现了三次temini，变换一下比较好，end point, termination etc.

leadenskyUID: 2251888

内容都还不错，但是听起来感觉你比较郁闷，心情不好的样子:cool:

感觉女生好像都是这个样子啊，有点害羞？:rolleyes:

要有感情色彩，不同的地方语速和语调改变一下，让人感觉这些话是发自你内心的，要不然就感觉象是在背课文。

不要害羞了，发泄出来吧，夸张一点，这样更能吸引别人的注意力:)