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issue4 [0710G +U Aug小组] 第6次作业 satanic

文章思路:不站在任何一边

行文:平衡式

文章中心:"内因和外因的辩证关系,内因是动力,外因是促进。"

/*模版开头*/

/*诚然,在某些基础理论科学方面,它的进步基本靠自身的发展:Newton & Einstein*/

/*但是,其他领域的进步将大大促进本领域的发展算法 */

/*辩关系,平衡*/

/*模版结尾*/

第一次写平衡式的文章,咖啡的上篇是平衡式,写得很好

构思花了2个小时,主要原因是想到的不会写,会写得不支持论点。不过还是开阔了一下思路。

我们要克服困难  I came.I saw.I conquer.--Ceaser

When asked about the question that whether a field of study can advance significantly due to the brought of knowledge and expeirence from outsiders, people may find it difficult to come to a concensus because of their different experiences and conflicting values. It is consumptuous to make a hasty decision. In my opinion, the outsiders' knowledge and experience as well as the study within this field itself are both decisive elements on the development road of this study.  

The phylosophy theory tells us: the inner motivation can decide the development and changing of a real thing. Some advance of study is in the determination of assiduous researchers only within in this field, especially those basic science, as phisics. There are two limestones on the developing road of phisics. The first one is gratitude-law found by British scientist Newton. By watching and confused by a common fenominon that the riped apple drop down to the grass from the tree, Newton, a exact and intellegent young man, struggle to figure out its reason by thinking and searching answer for textbooks. Weather there exists a thing to pull the apple to the ground and what is the thing? With unstopage hard-working, he established a brave assumption that the gratitude exist between all real things on earth. This law was assimilated into the classical phisics textbook. Some years later, people found that this law can only apply on earth, but not in universe. The classical phisics theory fell into a puddle. All western scientists began to put suspicion on all the early theories and even aggrasive ones criticised that phisics is a gigantic lie in the human evolution history. Almost all scientists began to feel disappointed, however, neither did Instein. Einstein is a British unfamous scientist, who foucued on philosophy in his early ages. He was assiduous and brillient, and never confessed his failure before totally made out the right conclusion. Under the theory he learnt, he researched on this study for about 10 years, searched classical theory books and compared them with his previous phycological theory. Finally, like the new continent was found by Columbus, the second greatest limestone was pull up by the smart,small man named Ienstein , after his 10 years arduous "gurney". It is still a miracle and misory that how can Einstein find out the "quality-energy formula -- E=M*C^2" 100 years ago without any assistant, any experiment, any outsider experiences --and there were not any experiences after all -- all by himself. In a word, the two limestone on the road of physics are not rely on any outsider experience or knowledge.

Therefore, there are some fields of study which are significantly advanced under the help of outsider knowledges. With the adventure and development of Discrete Maths, the algorithms on computer programming has greatly improved. The former primitive sorting algorithm in programming is called "bubble sorting" -- under the simple theory that the lighter bubbles will rise up and the heavier ones would sunk down. It cost a lot of time and precious cache capacity. With the adventure of Discrete Maths, other advanced maths modules are absorbed into the sorting algorithm -- the classical example is that with the inventing of the concept "heap" and "stack", the "heap sorting" and "inseting sorting" algorithm are invented. Accompany with them are the accelerating of database searching method and the saving of the data storing style. All the algorithm stated above play an eccetial role in later computer programming methods and computer appliance realms.

The high-rising ability of an eagle rely both on the tutoring methods of serious "eagle parents" and the struggling will of soaring in the sky by itself. Similary, the outsiders' knowledge and experiences -- the outer cause , and the hard-working of researchers in this field -- the inner cause, are both eccentric elements for the advance of study. The inner cause decide the developing and changing of a real thing while the outer cause is the motivation on its develpment.

In summary, it is very likely that the people will not be able to arrive on the same conclusion on this controversial issue. However, taking into account all the dimensions discussed in the above analysis may be a decisive step out of dilemma.



我的WORD又不能检查拼写语法错误了,请咖啡,IRIS多见谅
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When asked about the questionthat whether a field of study can advance significantly due to the brought ofknowledge and expeirence from outsiders, people may find it difficult to cometo a concensus because of their different experiences and conflicting values.It is consumptuous(presumptuous,你这词是奢侈华丽的意思,呵呵) to make a hasty decision. In my opinion, the outsiders' knowledge andexperience as well as the study within this field itself are both decisiveelements on the development road of this study.  
The phylosophy theory tells us: the inner motivation candecide the development and changing of a real thing. Some advance of study isin the determination of assiduous researchers only within in this field,especially those basic science, as phisics. There are two limestones on the developing road of phisics. The first one is gratitude-lawgravitationfound by Britishscientist Newton. By watching and confused by a common fenominonphenomenon that the riped apple drop down to thegrassgrassland from the tree,Newton, a exact and intellegent young man, struggle to figure out its reason bythinking and searching answer for textbooks. Weather there exists a thing topull the apple to the ground and what is the thing? With unstopage unceasinghard-working, he established a brave(strikingaudacious如何) assumption that the gratitudeexists between allreal things on earth. This law was assimilated into the classical phisics textbook. Some years later, people foundthat this law can only apply on earth, but not in universe(严重曲解了科学,应该说普遍适用,除了极少数情况与观测不符合). The classical phisics theory fell intoa puddle. All western scientists began to put suspicion on all the earlytheories and even aggrasiveaggressiveones criticised thatphisics is a gigantic lie in the human evolution history. Almost all scientistsbegan to feel disappointed, however, neither did Instein. Einstein is a British(这个都弄错还不如别说这一句)unfamous scientist, who foucued onphilosophy in his early ages. He was assiduous and brillient, and neverconfessed his failure before totally made out the right conclusion. Under thetheory he learnt, he researched on this study for about 10 years, searchedclassical theory books and compared them with his previous phycological theory. Finally, like the new continentwas(去掉) found by Columbus, the second greatestlimestone was pull up by the smart(哪学的句子),small man named Ienstein , after his 10 years arduous"gurney". It is still a miracle and misory that how can Einstein find out the"quality-energy formula -- E=M*C^2" 100 years ago without anyassistant, any experiment, any outsider experiences --and there were not anyexperiences after all -- all by himself. In a word, the two limestone(milestone吧?limestone我实在无法理解) on the road of physics are not rely on any outsiderexperience or knowledge.
Therefore, there are some fieldsof study which are significantly advanced under the help of outsider knowledges(所有这样的都不行,改成outsiders’knowledge). With theadventure and development of Discrete Maths, the algorithms on computerprogramming has greatly improved. The former primitive sorting algorithm inprogramming is called "bubble sorting" -- under the simple theorythat the lighter bubbles will rise up and the heavier ones would sunk down. It cost a lot of time and preciouscache capacity. With the adventure of Discrete Maths, other advanced mathsmodules are absorbed into the sorting algorithm -- the classical example isthat with the inventing of the concept "heap" and "stack",the "heap sorting" and "inseting sorting" algorithm areinvented. Accompany with them are the accelerating of database searching methodand the saving of the data storing style. All the algorithm stated above playan eccetial role inlater computer programming methods and computer appliance realms.(这段的例子很难啊,对于我的理解而言。离散数学)
The high-rising ability of aneagle rely both on the tutoring methods of serious "eagle parents"and the struggling will of soaring in the sky by itself. Similary, the outsiders' knowledge and experiences-- the outer cause , and the hard-working of researchers in this field -- theinner cause, are both eccentric(这词用错了,word自动检查找不出来的elements for the advance of study. The inner cause decide thedeveloping and changing of a real thing while the outer cause is the motivationon its develpment.
In summary, it is very likely thatthe people will not be able to arrive on(at) the same conclusion on thiscontroversial issue. However, taking into account all the dimensions discussedin the above analysis may be a decisive step out of dilemma.
(总体思路是正确的:
先提出观点:需要分别讨论。1、科学上有例子证明单干也能有成就,EinsteinIsaac Newton.2、知识间的互相促进。DiscreteMathematics 3、共同作用。Eagles
就象你说的,我不应主要关心你的拼写问题。个人意见:即使拼错也要让最难最长的单词拼错。简单词、拼错后意思截然不同的词千万避免出错。以上红色的是找出来的大部分拼写错误。Coffee可在我的基础上批改。最后提一点:斑竹很喜欢用E=MC2嘛,虽然不会有雷同的嫌疑,因为你的句子不优美,不会是抄的)

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issue4 [0710G +U Aug小组] 第6次作业 satanic
文章思路:不站在任何一边
行文:平衡式
文章中心:"内因和外因的辩证关系,内因是动力,外因是促进。"
/*模版开头*/
/*诚然,在某些基础理论科学方面,它的进步基本靠自身的发展:Newton & Einstein*/
/*但是,其他领域的进步将大大促进本领域的发展算法 */
/*辩关系,平衡*/
/*模版结尾*/
第一次写平衡式的文章,咖啡的上篇是平衡式,写得很好
构思花了2个小时,主要原因是想到的不会写,会写得不支持论点。不过还是开阔了一下思路。
我们要克服困难  I came.I saw.I conquer.--Ceaser
When asked about the question that[引导词重复] whether a field of study can advance significantly due to the brought of knowledge and expeirence from outsiders, people may find it difficult to come to a concensus because of their different experiences and conflicting values. It is consumptuous to make a hasty decision. In my opinion, the outsiders' knowledge and experience as well as the study within this field itself are both decisive elements on the development road of this study. [这个句子不错]
The phylosophy theory tells us: the inner motivation can decide the development and changing of a real thing[有这种说法?]. Some advance of study is in the determination of assiduous researchers only within in this field, especially those basic science,[加such更好吧] as phisics. [加上for example衔接一下]There are two limestones on the developing road of phisics. The first one is gratitude-law found by British scientist Newton. By watching and confused by a common fenominon that the riped apple drop[时态注意,还是要用过去式吧] down to the grass from the tree, Newton, a[n] exact and intellegent young man, struggle[d] to figure out its reason by thinking and searching answer for textbooks. Weather[不是从句还是要用does] there exists a thing to pull the apple to the ground and what is the thing? With unstopage hard-working, he established a brave assumption that the gratitude exist between all real things on earth. This law was assimilated into the classical phisics textbook. Some years later, people found that this law can only apply on earth, but not in universe. The classical phisics theory fell into a puddle. All western scientists began to put suspicion on all the early theories and even aggrasive ones criticised that phisics is a gigantic lie in the human evolution history. Almost all scientists began to feel disappointed, however, neither did Instein. Einstein is a British unfamous scientist, who foucued on philosophy in his early ages. He was assiduous and brillient, and never confessed his failure before totally made[making] out the right conclusion. Under[Based on] the theory he learnt, he researched on this study for about 10 years, searched classical theory books and compared them with his previous phycological theory. Finally, like the new continent was found by Columbus, the second greatest limestone was pull up by the smart, small man named Ienstein , after his 10 years arduous "gurney". It is still a miracle and misory that how can Einstein find out the "quality-energy formula -- E=M*C^2" 100 years ago without any assistant, any experiment, any outsider experiences --and there were not any experiences after all -- all by himself. In a word, the two limestones on the road of physics are not rely on any outsider experience or knowledge.
Therefore, there are some fields of study which are significantly advanced under[with] the help of outsider knowledge. With the adventure and development of Discrete Maths, the algorithms on computer programming has greatly improved. The former primitive sorting algorithm in programming is called "bubble sorting" -- under the simple theory that the lighter bubbles will rise up and the heavier ones would[will] sunk down. It cost a lot of time and precious cache capacity. With the adventure of Discrete Maths, other advanced maths modules are absorbed into the sorting algorithm -- the classical example is that with the inventing of the concept "heap" and "stack", the "heap sorting" and "insetting sorting" algorithm are invented. Accompany[accompanied] with them are the accelerating of database searching method and the saving of the data storing style. All the algorithm stated above play an essential role in later computer programming methods and computer appliance realms.
The high-rising ability of an eagle rely both on the tutoring methods of serious "eagle parents" and the struggling will of soaring in the sky by itself.[这个比喻用的很好] Similary,[用副词] the outsiders' knowledge and experiences -- the outer cause , and the hard-working of researchers in this field -- the inner cause, are both eccentric elements for the advance of study. The inner cause decide the developing and changing of a real thing while the outer cause is the motivation on its development.
In summary, it is very likely that the[去掉] people will not be able to arrive on the same conclusion on this controversial issue. However, taking into account all the dimensions discussed in the above analysis may be a decisive step out of dilemma.
[总评:
一、 从内因、外因的角度切入,显得逻辑很清晰,也利于表述,非常值得学习。我昨天把自己绕进去出不来了。
二、 正文二写得很好,举例与说理衔接的很好,在阐述例子的同时reasoning。与之相比,正文一举例的篇幅虽多,阐述与reasoning结合却不如二,尤其是在短尾最好回到说理,总结一下,从物理学到其他学科,个别上升到一般。
三、 正文三的平衡显得比较单薄,不过平衡确实难写,我上次的自己也不是很满意,感觉到了这除了那几句套话就没话说了,还好偏重一边的立场吧。]

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