Issue150 【0710G-HIT坚持交作业小组】第七次作业

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1.网络的确让人们了解到更多
2.旅游意义是验证我们的所知
3.旅游的其他意义

TOPIC: ISSUE150 - "Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete."
WORDS: 524          TIME: 01:17:42          DATE: 2007-8-6 15:43:12

Television and internet make it possible for us to access other places without really visiting there. However, when we have got familiar with those places the desiring of being there ourselves may become increasingly strong. Therefore, I disagree with the opinion that tourism will become obsolete.

It is true that with the help of modern technology, we can acquire the knowledge of a certain place as much as we want. The government site on the internet can provide the basic information of the history and local whether; the travel programs may show us the exiting events during the festival; and blog , a website belongs to individuals, can tell the story of others' traveling experience. In order to fulfill personal vanity, there is also a service to make fake passport and photos pictured in the focus places with both the man and the background on them in order to prove the experience. But is the photos and knowledge of the destination the only and finally purpose of travels?

In fact, the real meaning of tourism is to testify what we have known from books, internet, or television programs. As a saying in Chinese, 'Read ten thousand books walk ten thousand miles', experience by self could be the best way to convince people. If a connoisseur recommends the curry in India we may not believe unless we have tasted it. But if we have already been in Tibet all the praises of its beauty could be sound and felicitous. Although the experience can not be provided by merely watching television and surfing the internet, it is the information we got from there intrigue our curious to visit the places in order to confirm the imagination produced from those words and pictures. Therefore, the technology gives us a start point and tourism the only way to find the results.

Furthermore, there exist other meanings of tourism. One of the main reasons for people to travel should be the needs to have a rest. When people feel tired of their work, they may chose to have a trip. Hundreds of ways to relax though, travel can help people really escape from works and live a totally different life. Someone would disagree because they feel going to another places may even make them tireder. But for those who agree, they may hold the point of view that the physical weariness can remove the spiritual ennui. But if people just stay at home and compensate the lack of experience with programs, pictures, and critics, they may not get relax because e-mails from the boss still drop in the mail boxes. In addition, the communication of tourists and local residents can promote the understanding between different cultures, which help to prevent the conflict between them. Because of all of these functions of tourism, by no means will it become obsolete.

In sum, television and internet can give people tremendous knowledge of other places, which lead to stronger wishes for people to go traveling to testify the information they acquired. Stem to this and due to other function of tourism, it will not be obsolete, but only could become more popular.

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拙见，仅供参考。

LZ的观点是反驳题目，说明旅游不会受太多负面影响，仍然兴旺。其中隐含的逻辑自然是旅游有电视和网络无法替代的东西，挖掘旅游的这些特质，就变成了文章的重点。

实际上网络、电视对旅游是有冲击的，这个貌似提一下比较好，象第一段，讲了Technology的好处，但没有点出来题目的担心，即科技对旅游潜在威胁的，似乎不太有力。当然说科技传媒对旅游在某种意义上有促进作用，这本身是对的。

语言上不便于多提了，我很菜。

1.网络的确让人们了解到更多
2.旅游意义是验证我们的所知
3.旅游的其他意义

TOPIC: ISSUE150 - "Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete."
WORDS: 524          TIME: 01:17:42          DATE: 2007-8-6 15:43:12

Television and internet make it possible for us to access other places without really visiting there. However, when we have got familiar with those places the desiring of being there ourselves may become increasingly strong. Therefore, I disagree with the opinion that tourism will become obsolete（此处最好加上 because of the rise of TV and internet之类的话）.

It is true that with the help of modern technology, we can acquire the knowledge of a certain place as much as we want. The government site on the internet can provide the basic information of the history and local whether; the travel programs may show us the exiting events during the festival（句子多少有点不顺）; and blog , a website belongs to individuals, can tell the story of others' traveling experience. In order to fulfill personal vanity, there is also a service to make fake passport and photos pictured in the focus places with both the man and the background on them in order to prove the experience. But is the photos and knowledge of the destination the only and finally purpose of travels?

In fact, the real meaning of tourism is to testify what we have known from books, internet, or television programs.（作为该段的中心，这个立意有点偏。其实没有科技之前，也有旅游啊，那时候的旅游莫非就没有real meaning了？旅游的意义真的就是“检验”而已么？这个提法值得商榷。提一两个旅游自身吸引人的特质，即无法替代性可能会更好，如独特的个人体验、感觉） As a saying in Chinese, 'Read ten thousand books walk ten thousand miles', experience by self could be the best way to convince people. If a connoisseur recommends the curry in India we may not believe unless we have tasted it. But if we have already been in Tibet all the praises of its beauty could be sound and felicitous. Although the experience can not be provided by merely watching television and surfing the internet, it is the information we got from there intrigue our curious to visit the places in order to confirm the imagination produced from（这个表达貌似不太好） those words and pictures. Therefore, the technology gives us a start point and tourism the only way to find the results（这跟前面technology gives好像不对账，也就是确谓语）.

Furthermore, there exist other meanings of tourism. One of the main reasons for people to travel should be the needs to have a rest. When people feel tired of their work, they may chose to have a trip. Hundreds of ways to relax though, travel can help people really escape from works and live a totally different life. Someone would disagree because they feel going to another places may even make them tireder. But for those who agree, they may hold the point of view that the physical weariness can remove the spiritual ennui. But if people just stay at home and compensate the lack of experience with programs, pictures, and critics, they may not get relax because e-mails from the boss still drop in the mail boxes. In addition, the communication of tourists and local residents can promote the understanding between different cultures, which help to prevent the conflict between them. Because of all of these functions of tourism, by no means will it become obsolete.

In sum, television and internet can give people tremendous knowledge of other places, which lead to stronger wishes for people to go traveling to testify the information they acquired. Stem to this and due to other function of tourism, it will not be obsolete, but only could become more popular.