Issue141 【0710G-HIT坚持交作业小组作文大帖】第十五次作业 ambitionxx

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TOPIC: ISSUE141 - "Most people recognize the benefits of individuality, but the fact is that personal economic success requires conformity."
WORDS: 618          TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2007-8-15 上午 11:17:08

With the coming of the economic times, more and more individuals get the benefits from the market or other areas, such as science, political and so forth. Then there comes a question: whether most people recognize the benefits of individuality, but overlook the fact that the personal economic success requires conformity. As far as I concerned, the requiring conformity is dispensable for the success, however, the personal economic success, especially, the significant breakthrough, always comes from the individual’s creation and endeavor. To better present the viewpoint let me illustrate in details.

Admittedly, in order to acquire the acceptance by most people and keep the society stabilization, the personal economic success should require conformity. Many things have changed with the development of the society; however, the basic elements of the society, such as the basic living materials, law, the culture, etc, will continue to exist in the society to keep the society stabilization. In addition, our human being is the society animal that the benefits or the relationships depend on each other. Therefore, only we can succeed from the economical market when we obey and utilize these basic elements. The P&G, a very famous company all over the world, best illustrates this point. When the company first came to China, it has realized that potential market in China, because every people have to use the living materials, such as the toothpaste, toothbrush, soap and so on. More important, considering the Chinese’s characteristic, these living materials have been added to satisfy the need of Chinese. Of course, obeying the law is necessary. All these guarantee P&G to get the enormous benefits from China. The same to the Wall Mart, he not only sells the commodities to the residenters but also help the community to build the harmonious society. All these say one conclusion: the personal economic success requires conformity.

However, in order to make the great achievements, we should individually create rather than only the conformity. The philosophy tells us that the motion is the absolutely while the quiet is the relatively. With the development of the society, the things regarded as the individuality today may become the conformity tomorrow. Every people who want to make great benefits must own the long- term view to create the enormous benefits. The Bell can succeed in the telephone industry, because he invents the telephone and predicts that the telephone will make significant influence in people’s daily life. The same to the Bill Gates, very few people know the Computer let alone own them at his times; however, the Bill Gates had a dream that let every people own the PC in every family. He realizes his dream and become the richest people in the world.

Moreover, the individuality and the conformity are not incompatible; in fact, they come from the same family. Many elements get together to make the economical market very complex, so only these who can combine the individuality and the conformity can benefit more in the technological society. Take the Google as the best example. The Larry Page and Sergey Brin, two PH. D in the Stanford University, have realize that the future is a information time and then every people have to search and use the information, and the same time, they use their intelligence to invent the search engineer-Google, whose mission statement is, "to organize the world's information and make it universally accessible and useful." Consequently, we should combine the conformity and the individuality to get enormous benefits.

In summary, through all the discussion above, we can safely reach the conclusion that the individuality and conformity are important to make the economic benefits, however, only these people who can combine them can succeed in the economical market.

kiki1988UID：2329056

With the coming of the economic times, more and more individuals get the benefits from the market or other areas, such as science, political and so forth. Then there comes a question: whether most people recognize the benefits of individuality, but overlook the fact that the personal economic success requires conformity. As far as I concerned, the requiring conformity is dispensable for the success, however, the personal economic success, especially, the significant breakthrough, always comes from the individual’s creation and endeavor. To better present the viewpoint, let me illustrate in details.

Admittedly, in order to acquire the acceptance by most people and keep the society stabilization, the personal economic success should require conformity. Many things have changed with the development of the society; however, the basic elements of the society, such as the basic living materials, law, the culture, etc, will continue to exist in the society to keep the society stabilization. In addition, our human being is the society animal that the benefits or the relationships depend on each other. Therefore, only we can succeed from the economical market when we obey and utilize these basic elements. : the perThe P&G, a very famous company all over the world, best illustrates this point. When the company first came to China, it has realized that potential market in China, because every people have to use the living materials, such as the toothpaste, toothbrush, soap and so on. More important, considering the Chinese’s characteristic, these living materials have been added to satisfy the need of Chinese. Of course, obeying the law is necessary. All these guarantee P&G to get the enormous benefits from China. The same to the Wall Mart, he not only sells the commodities to the residenters but also help the community to build the harmonious society. All these say one conclusionsonal economic success requires conformity.好例子！

However, in order to make the great achievements, we should individually create rather than only the conformity. The philosophy tells us that the motion is the absolutely while the quiet is the relatively. 引用很好With the development of the society, the things regarded as the individuality today may become the conformity tomorrow. Every people who want to make great benefits must own the long- term view to create the enormous benefits. The Bell can succeed in the telephone industry, because he invents the telephone and predicts that the telephone will make significant influence in people’s daily life. The same to the Bill Gates, very few people know the Computer let alone own them at his times; however, the Bill Gates had a dream that let every people own the PC in every family. He realizes his dream and become the richest people in the world.这里显得略仓促了~而且和段落观点连接不紧密

Moreover, the individuality and the conformity are not incompatible; in fact, they come from the same family. Many elements get together to make the economical market very complex, so only these who can combine the individuality and the conformity can benefit more in the technological society. Take the Google as the best example. The Larry Page and Sergey Brin, two PH. D in the Stanford University, have realize that the future is a information time and then every people have to search and use the information, and the same time, they use their intelligence to invent the search engineer-Google, whose mission statement is, "to organize the world's information and make it universally accessible and useful." Consequently, we should combine the conformity and the individuality to get enormous benefits.

In summary, through all the discussion above, we can safely reach the conclusion that the individuality and conformity are important to make the economic benefits, however, only these people who can combine them can succeed in the economical market.

我大体看了你的结构，觉得你的文章分析已经蛮好了，论证比较有模有样。论证的例子很多，展开很顺利。就是例子之间还有与段落的连接方面还差点。另外就是别让例子冲淡了你的文章论述的观点！
感觉写的很好，学习ing~~~`

kiki1988UID：2329056

and 你的字好小。。。。。