20烤鸭，作文急拍，各位多提意见啊

大飞UID: 2201187

QUESTION:
Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree of disagree.

It is a striking fact that the numbers of male and female students are not equal in different subjects, some subjects even just open for male/female only. Some people think that is unfair, they also suggest that the number of both male/female students should be the same in every subject. However as far as I can see, university should supply the same opportunity in some subjects to both gender, but not in every major.
Admittedly, both male and female students should be treated equally. For one thing, women have the same ability to do something that we thought they could not do before. For example, there are a lot of female scientists which we thought as a profession to women. Meanwhile, a lot of men work as babysitter now, which is the women's occupation before. What’s more, everyone in the world is equal; so everyone has the some right to choose what major he/she likes. Therefore, it seems almost right that we should offer the same opportunity to both male/female students in every subject.
However, before we get such a harsh conclusion we should considerate other facts that can make this decision different. First of all, man and woman are different in their body. Man are stronger than women, hence, it is better for a man to be a police than a women. Moreover, male and female are different in temper. Generally, women are more gentle and careful than man. Thus, most of the nurses are female, because they can take care of patient better than man.
Above all, from what I noted above we can getter the conclusion that, we should accept the equal numbers of both genders in some subjects which have no relationship with the gender, but not in every subject.

forbeckUID: 2297645

各位有时间的帮忙改一改，谢谢:)

67169619UID: 2320695

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H-KevinUID: 2182070

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最好不要等待别人主动给你修改作文

建议你先修改论坛上别人的作文

然后把自己的作文链接留下

给对方互改

如果你不愿意修改别人的作文，别人可能也有同样的想法

一份耕耘一份收获

强调互改，不是被动接受  

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bluefly123UID: 2138093

It is a striking fact that the numbers of male and female students are not equal in different (most/each) subjects, some subjects even just open for male/female only. Some people think that is unfair, they also suggest that the number of both male/female students should be the same in every subject. However as far as I can see, university should supply(provide) the same opportunity in some subjects to both gender, but not in every major.(这段论述有问题，题目的意思是在每一个专业都应该招收相同数量的男女学生，而不是提供相同的机会)
Admittedly, both male and female students should be treated equally. For one thing, women have the same ability to do something that we thought they could not do before. For example, there are a lot of female scientists which we thought as a profession to women（这是病句，没看懂）. Meanwhile, a lot of men work as babysitter now, which is the women's occupation before. What’s more, everyone in the world is equal; so everyone has the some right to choose what major he/she likes. Therefore, it seems almost （这词用的含糊不清）right that we should offer the same opportunity to both male/female students in every subject.
However, before we get such a harsh（不恰当的修饰） conclusion we should considerate other facts that can make this decision different（表达不当）. First of all, man and woman are different in their body. Man are stronger than women, hence, it is better for a man to be a police than a women. Moreover, male and female are different in temper. Generally, women are more gentle and careful than man. Thus, most of the nurses are female, because they can take care of patient better than man.

Above all, from what I noted above we can getter（get） the conclusion that, we should accept the equal numbers of both genders in some subjects which have no relationship with the gender(太绝对，哪个科目是专属于男性或女性的？), but not in every subject.

forbeckUID: 2297645

这个题目不好写呀~~~