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issue 88 "Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics."
1技术给我们的生活带来很大影响　并在一定程度上冲击了传统文化
２但科学技术并不拧决定和主宰人类的文明　人类的文化和道德有着不可忽视的作用
３科技和人类的关系　科技是由人类创造出来并服务与人类的　不能喧宾夺主

It has been increasingly difficult to ingnore the top issue on the effects technology has brought to the modern society. The speaker asserts that technology not only influences but actually determines social customs and ethics. The statement suffers a serious drawbacks for the neglect to the importance and independence of the social culture and customs. Despite of the great impact on the modern society, science and technology can not be the decision-maker for the progress of the human beings' civilization. To evidence my viewpoint, the following argument is open to all.
Admittedly, it is commonly to be considered that our modern society has been changed by advanced science and technology dramatically, resulting in both benefits and consequences. Positively, people aroungd the world are taking advantages of the moder n techonology, by the convenient connection with the other part of the world. Globalization makes people in different cultures generally to appreciate and accept the foreign cultures, and not to be isolated anymore. Besides, the effects of advanced technology has a great impact on the traditional cultures and customs. It clearly shows the evidences from our daily life everywhere. One of the professon at Stanford University suggests that "people feels the cell phone is part of them. They are not whole without it, since phones connect them to the world." In the time absent tele-communication tool, face-to-face communication is the only approach of people at that period and they did not feel any trouble at all. The habits of our life have been more or less varied by the rapid development of technology.
Nevertheless, the mainstream of the society is human beings whose social customs and ethics can not be entirely determined by the techonology which is created by people themselves. In the development process of the society, the people's traditional custom and culture are also indispensable factors. The speaker's statement implies that the development of technology will inevitablely make the tradition disappear. It is entirely oblivious to the importace of the traditional culture. The case of Qian xuesin, the father of Chinese rocket history, adds great weight to the evidence of my argument. His wife was a musician, who majors in traditional German music. However, the immense difference between science and art makes them much closer rather than alienated. And it provided a decisive contribution to the success of Qian's scientifuc career. The reason lies that the traditional art saturates with not only a kind of lifestyle but also a profound and infinite ideology and a useful and special methodology which is substantial to both daily life and technology. Hegel said, "those that exist are reasonable." Traditional culture and ethics are still vital and will never be eliminated from the historical determinating stage.
Finally, what is the relationship between the technology and us? Human beings invented technology products to make them service for themselves. How can they allow their invention to relace our own civilization. It is no doubt that the customs and ethtics always play an indispansable and decisive role in the development of world, because they bestow on people a precious large warehouse of varieties of ideologies, methodologies, colorful legends, various living, eating and wearing styles from which we can learn a lot, gain more insight and, most of all, see ourselves more clearly and precisely. With the help of these, the world will be push foward in both science and technology and the civilization will come into a prosperity.
In summary, from such like and these considerations, it clealy appears that the speaker's statement is inconclusive that little attention has been focused on the independent and leading role of the human beings' culture in the developing process of the whole world. The science and technology are products of smart people and its finally task is to work for us instead of determining the mainstream of the society.

[ 本帖最后由 anita840808 于 2007-12-1 00:38 编辑 ]

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issue 88 "Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics."
1技术给我们的生活带来很大影响　并在一定程度上冲击了传统文化
２但科学技术并不拧决定和主宰人类的文明　人类的文化和道德有着不可忽视的作用
３科技和人类的关系　科技是由人类创造出来并服务与人类的　不能喧宾夺主

It has been increasingly difficult to ingnore the top issue on the effects technology has brought to the modern society. The speaker asserts that technology not only influences but actually determines social customs and ethics. The statement suffers a serious drawbacks for the neglect to the importance and independence of the social culture and customs. Despite of the great impact on the modern society, science and technology can not be the decision-maker for the progress of the human beings' civilization. To evidence my viewpoint, the following argument is open to all.(楼主的开头和上次的一个模板的吧？不过很个人话的模板，8错8 错。另，如果题目涉及到两个方面的问题，就最好提全，比如这篇涉及到custom and ethics，那么，不管是在开头结尾，还是中间的论证，都别落下其中任何一个。当然，论证的时候可以一起论证，也可以分开论证。)

Admittedly, it is commonly to be considered that our modern society has been changed by advanced science and technology dramatically, resulting in both benefits and consequences. Positively, people aroungd the world are taking advantages of the moder n techonology, by the convenient connection with the other part of the world. Globalization makes people in different cultures generally to appreciate and accept the foreign cultures, and not to be isolated anymore. Besides, the effects of advanced technology has a great impact on the traditional cultures and customs. It clearly shows the evidences from our daily life everywhere. One of the professon(professor) at Stanford University suggests that "people feels the cell phone is part of them. They are not whole without it, since phones connect them to the world."(学习了) In the time absent tele-communication tool, face-to-face communication is the only approach of people at that period and they did not feel any trouble at all. The habits of our life have been more or less varied by the rapid development of technology.
（论证technology changes custom，很严密，句型富于变化。）

Nevertheless, the mainstream of the society is human beings whose social customs and ethics can not be entirely determined by the techonology which is created by people themselves. In the development process of the society, the people's traditional custom and culture are also indispensable factors. The oblivious speaker's statement implies that the development of technology will inevitablely make the tradition disappear. (楼主误解作者的意思啦。change social custom and ethics 并不等于will inevitabely make the tratition disappear.改变并不一定会导致其消失)It is entirely  to the importace of the traditional culture. (?)The case of Qian xuesin, the father of Chinese rocket history, adds great weight to the evidence of my argument. His wife was a musician, who majors in traditional German music. However, the immense difference between science and art makes them much closer rather than alienated. And it provided a decisive contribution to the success of Qian's scientifuc career. The reason lies that the traditional art saturates with not only a kind of lifestyle but also a profound and infinite ideology and a useful and special methodology which is substantial to both daily life and technology. Hegel said, "those that exist are reasonable." Traditional culture and ethics are still vital and will never be eliminated from the historical determinating stage.(题目是要论述科技进步对社会习俗和伦理的影响。这一段首先作者在开头会错的作者意，其次，个人觉得钱学森的例子可以作为学科之间交流的例子，但是用在这里似乎不太贴切。作者最前面的关于这段的思路是合理的，但是论述不是很好

Finally, what is the relationship between the technology and us? Human beings invented technology products to make them service for themselves. How can they allow their invention to relace our own civilization. It is no doubt that the customs and ethtics always play an indispansable and decisive role in the development of world, because they bestow on people a precious large warehouse of varieties of ideologies, methodologies, colorful legends, various living, eating and wearing styles from which we can learn a lot, gain more insight and, most of all, see ourselves more clearly and precisely. With the help of these, the world will be push foward in both science and technology and the civilization will come into a prosperity.（本段第一句可否改为：what is the relationship between the technology and the custom aand ethics? 这样的话， 接下来本段再论述科技是怎样影响我们的习俗和伦理，然后论述科技和cicilization共同促进人类繁荣。）

In summary, from such like and these considerations, it clealy appears that the speaker's statement is inconclusive that little attention has been focused on the independent and leading role of the human beings' culture in the developing process of the whole world. The science and technology are products of smart people and its finally task is to work for us instead of determining the mainstream of the society.
总的说来，个人觉得楼主谈科技与ethics关系的文字十分少，几乎没谈到。科技和人类的关系的论述个人觉得在这里不是很有说服力。有点跑题了。

都是个人的一些见解，希望多交流：）留链接：https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=771040&extra=page%3D1 这篇issue今天暑假新东方正好作为例子讲了，楼主可以参考一下我的思路，不过我的表达实在有些糟糕，楼主就不用学啦。呵呵