Impulse 小组13次作业-双手的温柔

双手的温柔UID: 173110

When encountering problems or in the crossroad of life, we may consult our parents, tutors or friends for suggestions. As in different perspectives, 100 friends may have 100 different suggestions to one issue. Who should we listen to, or in another word, whose advise is more helpful for us? Some people would turn to the older friends, however, in my perspective, older friends’ advice is not, inevitalbely, more valuable than your peers.

Admittedly, people accumulate experiences during their lives. That’s why some elders, even without high education, what they have saw or tasted teach them a lot and make them wiser in life. However, another phenomenon should be noticed is that, in many case, the younger understands or is more sophisticated than older guy. The relationship between age and wisdom are varied from case to case. We can not judge a people only by age.

Further more, peers who share the similar experiences with us may understand our problem better than the elder. In this situation, even given the assumption that elder knows more, we can not assert elder’s advice will benefit more, since seldom, even for a wise guy, appropriate suggestions can be offered when little information known. When thinking of learning oversea, doubtless, the best advisor should be your peers who already have an abroad learning experience rather than some older friends who know little about this.

In addition, age doesn’t mean being expert in all disciplines. Older friends they may, for certain issues, have advantages due to their more ample experiences. Yet, when it comes to the particular terrain, the correct choice is not going to the older but the expert. Age should not be considered as a crucial criterion in this circumstance. If you have a biological question and two friends, one has the expertise while another does not, the right person to go is the biologist- no matter how old he is.

In conclusion, from above statement, I would like to say: the value of advice, does not depend on the age. Whenever when we have problems, the most advisable choice is to consult the most suitable friends and figure out your solution. This will benefit best!

rebeccavenUID: 2140456

1. As in different perspectives, -as 能删除吗?
2. older friends’ advice is not, inevitalbely, more valuable than your peers. -....more valuable than your peers' advice.
3. That’s why some elders, even without high education, what they have saw or tasted teach them a lot and make them wiser in life. 这个句子不通. That's why sb. what sb. has done...
   that's why even without high education, what the elders have saw or tasted teach them ...
4. in many case,- in many cases.
5. The relationship between age and wisdom (are -is)varied from case to case.
6. Further more, peers who share the similar experiences with us may understand our problem better than the elder(s).
7. since seldom, even for a wise guy, appropriate suggestions can be offered when little information known.
　我有疑问：　如果ＳＥＬＤＯＭ提前，是否该是倒装句呢？　我觉得如果是，even for a wise guy, appropriate suggestions can be seldom offered when little information known. 那么一定对！　但是副词提前，我就不是很有把握了．
　since seldom can be offered appropriate suggestions when little information known, even for a wise guy. 我自己都不知道这个句子的正确与否．．．　希望咱们好好讨论下倒装句．:loveliness:
8.... doubtless(ly), the best advisor should be your peers who already have an abroad learning experience

9. Yet, when it comes to the particular (terrain,你确定这个词语合适吗？　field/major也不错．　如果你的确看过美国人写的文章里这么用，　也是很赞的．　希望和你讨论下～～！）

10. Whenever (when 删除）we have problems,:loveliness:

19811010316UID: 2220703

When encountering problems or in the crossroad of life, we may consult our parents, tutors or friends for suggestions. As in different perspectives, 100 friends may have 100 different suggestions to one issue. Who should we listen to, or in another word(in other words), whose advise(advice) is more helpful for us? Some people would turn to the older friends, however, in my perspective, older friends’ advice is not, inevitalbely(spelling error), more valuable than your peers.


Admittedly, people accumulate experiences during their lives. That’s why some elders, even without high education, can supply us meaningful advice. It is what they have saw or tasted teach them a lot and make them wiser in life. However, another phenomenon should be noticed is that, in many case, the(delete) younger understands or is more sophisticated than older guy. The relationship between age and wisdom are varied from case to case. We can not judge a people only by age.


Further more, peers who share the similar experiences with us may understand our problem better than the elder. In this situation, even given the assumption that elder knows more, we can not assert elder’s advice will benefit more, since seldom, even for a wise guy, appropriate suggestions can be offered when little information is known. When thinking of learning oversea, doubtless, the best advisor should be your peers who already have an abroad learning experience rather than some older friends who know little about this.

In addition, age doesn’t mean being expert in all disciplines. Older friends they may, for certain issues, have advantages due to their more ample experiences. Yet, when it comes to the particular terrain(where does it come from? explain it? please.), the correct choice is not going to the older but the expert(the correct is not going to be given by older but expert). Age should not be considered(this usage is as better as "be regarded") as a crucial criterion in this circumstance. If you have a biological question and two friends, one has the expertise while another does not, the right person to go is the biologist- no matter how old he is.

In conclusion, from above statements, I would like to say: the value of advice, does not depend on the age. Whenever when we have problems, the most advisable choice is to consult the most suitable friends and figure out your solution(the conclusion is contradictory to first paragraph and your standpoints is not clear because suitable friends is not entirely equal with peer friends ). This will benefit best!

开头段写的很好，展开论述也很好，很有语言功底。
最后一段写得不太好。

双手的温柔UID: 173110

1. As in different perspectives, -as 能删除吗?
不行，由于的意思。。。就是说因为大家立场不同，so。。。
2. older friends’ advice is not, inevitalbely, more valuable than your peers. -....more valuable than your peers' advice.
这里我觉得可以省略掉后面的advice

3. That’s why some elders, even without high education, what they have saw or tasted teach them a lot and make them wiser in life. 这个句子不通. That's why sb. what sb. has done..
   that's why even without high education, what the elders have saw or tasted teach them
恩，这个句子是乱七八糟的:P,谢谢修改

4. in many case,- in many cases.

5. The relationship between age and wisdom (are -is)varied from case to case.
6. Further more, peers who share the similar experiences with us may understand our problem better than the elder(s).


7. since seldom, even for a wise guy, appropriate suggestions can be offered when little information known.
　我有疑问：　如果ＳＥＬＤＯＭ提前，是否该是倒装句呢？　我觉得如果是，even for a wise guy, appropriate suggestions can be seldom offered when little information known. 那么一定对！　但是副词提前，我就不是很有把握了．
这个。。。俺也不清楚，那天忽然心血来潮就提前了一把。。。

　since seldom can be offered appropriate suggestions when little information known, even for a wise guy. 我自己都不知道这个句子的正确与否．．．　希望咱们好好讨论下倒装句．
8.... doubtless(ly), the best advisor should be your peers who already have an abroad learning experience

9. Yet, when it comes to the particular (terrain,你确定这个词语合适吗？　field/major也不错．　如果你的确看过美国人写的文章里这么用，　也是很赞的．　希望和你讨论下～～！)
terrain 应该是可以用的，因为它在webster里面有a field of specific knowledge的意思。

10. Whenever (when 删除）we have problems,

rebeccavenUID: 2140456

2. older friends’ advice is not, inevitalbely, more valuable than your peers. -....more valuable than your peers' advice这里我觉得可以省略掉后面的advice
但是,你的原句是PEERS 而不是PEERS'.

terrain 应该是可以用的，因为它在webster里面有a field of specific knowledge的意思~~~3Q, 学到东西啊:o