IMPULSE小组-19811010316-第三周主题-个人成功-Tuesday

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2006 年10 月15 日
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement.For someone who wants to be successful in the society, knowledge gained from study is more important than the ability of being creative（周二作业）


Nowadays, there are so many people in our society hold the opinion that the person who obtains high education could be more creative than that doesn't, but we should understand that knowledge and creativity are two distinct conceptions. However, in this case, most people will want to know whether knowledge acquired from study is more significant than ability of creativity when considering their determination to people's succession in society? As far as I am concerned, we can not absolutely assert either knowledge or creativity plays an exclusive role in people's success.

To start up, by investigating the elites in our society, we can divide them into two groups, including people who accumulated a great amount of knowledge through studying and individuals who were creative but achieved less knowledge. The reason why the people in first group can obtain huge achievements is that they could use their knowledge well and set up a reasonable aim in their life. Through hard-working, they finally harvest their happy life and make their dreams come true. The fulfillments of people in the second group are due to their outstanding creativity or innovation. Innovation is one of the most important factors that propel our social development faster and faster. Therefore, if one person is really creative, they can contribute more to our society. And as compensation, they will get more money or be granted various honors, and all these stand for their success. So knowledge and creativity have different influence on our brilliant lives.

In the second, both knowledge and creativity are indispensable to our success. In most cases, people's successes are attributed to their extensive knowledge and powerful abilities of creativity. Knowledge is of great significance when people are lack of basic information about one career area or developmental direction. Because only through amassing a lot of knowledge, people can mine a profound perspective about our society and drive our ships of enterprises toward bright and animated oceanic coast. And then, when getting accustomed to the fundamental status of certain career domain, it is essential for us to exploit and enlighten our creativities in work. By exerting our knowledge effectively and activating creativities thoroughly, we could add more weight to our enormous success in society.

To sum up, after researching successful people in our society and weighing the importance of knowledge and creativity to our attainments, I strongly believe that not just knowledge but creativity account for our every accomplishment in society and there are equally important.

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Nowadays, there are so many people in our society hold the opinion that the person who obtains high education could be more creative than that doesn't, but we should understand that knowledge and creativity are two distinct conceptions. However, in this case, most people will want to know whether knowledge acquired from study is more significant than ability of creativity when considering their determination to people's succession [success] in society[这个状语想表达什么？]? As far as I am concerned, we can not absolutely assert either knowledge or creativity plays an exclusive role in people's success.

To start up, by investigating the elites in our society, we can divide them into two groups[they can be divided into two groups], including people who accumulated a great amount of knowledge through studying and individuals who were creative but achieved[received] less knowledge. The reason why the people in first group can obtain huge achievements is that they could use their knowledge well and set up a reasonable aim in their life. Through hard-working, they finally harvest their happy life and make their dreams come true. The fulfillments[啥意思？] of people in the second group are due to their outstanding creativity or innovation. Innovation is one of the most important factors that propel our social development faster and faster. Therefore, if one person is really creative, they[he/she] can contribute more to our society. And as compensation, they will get more money or be granted various honors, and all these stand for their success. So knowledge and creativity have different influence on our brilliant lives.

In the second, both knowledge and creativity are indispensable to our success. In most cases, people's successes are attributed to their extensive knowledge and powerful abilities of creativity. Knowledge is of great significance when people are lack of basic information about one career area or developmental direction. Because only through amassing a lot of knowledge, people can mine a profound perspective about our society and drive our ships of enterprises toward bright and animated oceanic coast. And then, when getting accustomed to the fundamental status [condition] of certain career domain, it is essential for us to exploit and enlighten our creativities in work. By exerting our knowledge effectively and activating creativities thoroughly, we could add more weight to our enormous success in society.

To sum up, after researching successful people in our society and weighing the importance of knowledge and creativity to our attainments, I strongly believe that not just knowledge but creativity account for our every accomplishment in society and there are equally important.

词汇和句型运用的很好，但是从文章结构上看，感觉混乱。其实可以一段写知识的重要性，一段写创造力的重要性。进步很快啊！讲讲经验吧。。。
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Nowadays, there are so many people in our society hold the opinion that the person who obtains high education could be more creative than that (who)doesn't, (.But)but we should understand that knowledge and creativity are two distinct conceptions. However, in this case, most people will want(would like) to know whether knowledge acquired from study is more significant than ability of creativity when considering their determination to people's succession in society? As far as I am concerned, we can not absolutely assert either knowledge or creativity plays an exclusive role in people's success.U{?_k~U

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To start up, by investigating the elites in our society, we can divide them into two groups, including (one is )people who accumulated a great amount of knowledge through studying and (another) individuals who were creative but achieved less knowledge. The reason why the people in first group can obtain huge achievements is that they could use their knowledge well and set up a reasonable (realizable)aim in their life. Through hard-working, they finally harvest their happy life and make their dreams come true. The fulfillments of people in the second group are due to their outstanding creativity or innovation. Innovation is one of the most important factors that propel our social development faster and faster. Therefore, if one person is really creative, they can contribute more to our society. And as compensation, they will get more money or be granted various honors, and all these stand for their success. So knowledge and creativity have different influence on our brilliant lives.

In the second, both knowledge and creativity are indispensable to our success. In most cases, people's successes are attributed to their extensive knowledge and powerful abilities of creativity. Knowledge is of great significance when people are lack of basic information about one career area or developmental (development) direction. Because only through amassing a lot of knowledge, people can mine a profound perspective about our society and drive our ships of enterprises toward bright and animated oceanic coast. And then, when getting accustomed to the fundamental status of certain career domain, it is essential for us to exploit and enlighten our creativities in work. By exerting our knowledge effectively and activating creativities thoroughly, we could add more weight to our enormous success in society.

To sum up, after researching successful people in our society and weighing the importance of knowledge and creativity to our attainments, I strongly believe that not just knowledge but creativity account for our every accomplishment in society and there are equally important.
组长进步神速啊.恭喜恭喜.一定要挑毛病的话我觉得是整篇文章论述得很抽象,缺少具体的例子.也许会对说服力有一定影响.