COMEON小组--------作业 9.3 Chineselady

chineseladyUID: 2403976

9月3agree/disagree：university students should be required to take basic science classes even they are not part of the field of the study. 2007年7月7日教育类

我在这里理解的SCIENCE是普通科学或是学科,不是理科.感觉举例好象不够强大,好象没有紧扣题,希望看帖子的T友可以留下你的感受,我们一起进步吧! 加油!

I agree that the students in universities should take basic science classes even if they do not in those majors, because many subjects and knowledge share the similar principles, or the same origin. Without the basic culture from other science, it is hard for those students to master what is the field of the study.

In the first place, the basic of other science knowledge can make students understand their majors better, for the reason of that is no subject can be totally independent. Architectonics as an example, students who are in this major should learn history, art, esthetics, and religion besides the classes concerning architect. Otherwise, the buildings will lose their meanings. The modern world is not like the one in ancient times, and the apartments should not be as a box simply for residents to live. They may have specific shapes and purposes. Such as, the Bird’s Net and the Water Cube in Beijing Olympic Game, they are not only the stadiums, but also became the significant signs in China. That is the essence of architectures, because both buildings are come together with esthetics, art, architectonics and the theme of the Olympics, one world one dream. Bird’s Net is like home, and both audiences and athletes are living in one net to express the pigeons that stand for peace.

In the second place, some of the meaningful ancient architectures are still attractive. The Paris Mary Church with a strong Christian religion has accepted people having weddings there. That is one of its architect’s achievements, even if he was not a believer, but the architect must know the knowledge about Christianity and painting. Without those, the Mary Church would be lost.

In conclusion, other basic knowledge will make the students fulfill what they study better, as other subjects can offer the concerning information and culture in their works, which cannot be replaced by just single major.

yuanhu124UID: 2444317

我觉得你对science的把握出了很大的问题，即使理解成理科也比你现在理解成学科来得好得多。写作上也还需要多多努力啊，共同加油吧。

I agree that the students in universities should take basic science classes even if they do not in those majors, because many subjects and knowledge share the similar principles, or the same origin. Without the basic culture from other science, it is hard for those students to master what is the field of the study.（这话没看懂~~culture怎么解释呢？“培养”？这个意思较之“文化”太生僻了一些。后面的what is the field of the study也make me confused）

In the first place, the basic of other science knowledge can make students understand their majors better, for the reason of that is no subject can be totally independent. Architectonics as an example, students who are in this major should learn history, art, esthetics, and religion(这些都不是science，而是art。美国的大学学科从传统上讲分成science和art，science不仅仅是咱们说的理科，就是指“科学”，是那种需要通过假设-试验-验证得出结论的学科；而art也不是咱们所说的“艺术”那么狭隘，主要是指人文学科) besides the classes concerning architect. Otherwise, the buildings will lose their meanings. The modern world is not like the one in ancient times, and the apartments should not be as a box simply for residents to live. They may have specific shapes and purposes. Such as, the Bird’s Net（Nest） and the Water Cube in Beijing Olympic Game, they are not only the stadiums, but also became the significant signs in China.（这层递进关系似乎和想要说明的主题没关系） That is the essence of architectures, because both buildings are come together with esthetics, art, architectonics and the theme of the Olympics, one world one dream. Bird’s Net is like home, and both audiences and athletes are living in one net to express the pigeons that stand for peace.

In the second place, some of the meaningful ancient architectures are still attractive.（和主题无关，这一段严重跑题了。即使没跑题，也应该是上一段的延伸，而没能真正构成新的一个论点） The Paris Mary Church with a strong Christian religion has accepted people having weddings there. That is one of its architect’s achievements, even if he was not a believer, but the architect must know the knowledge about Christianity and painting. Without those, the Mary Church would be lost.


In conclusion, other basic knowledge will make the students fulfill what they study better, as other subjects can offer the concerning information and culture in their works, which cannot be replaced by just single major.

chineseladyUID: 2403976

这话没看懂~~culture怎么解释呢？“培养”？这个意思较之“文化”太生僻了一些。 我也是没有选好这个词，knowlledge 比较不错

后面的what is the field of the study也make me confused 同学们所学的领域

history, art, esthetics, and religion(这些都不是science，而是art。历史也是艺术?