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As teenagers grow up, there is increasingly notable controversy concerning whether they should get advices from older friends or friends of your own age. Arguing for consulting senior friends are those people who hold the opinion that theyare more mature and have richer life experience. As far as I am concerned,people can acquire more beneficial points than weak ones if they ask their peersfor advices, when considering the suitability of advices and convenience.

To begin with, it is undeniable that people are capable to benefit from inquiringolder friends strikingly on an obvious aspect that they are more likely to haveplentiful life experience and therefore can bring forward more reasonable advices. In retrospect to our process of growth, those who teach us a lot abouthow to behave correctly are our parents. It is our teachers that instruct us how to acquire and accumulate both theoretical and practical knowledge. And the most important thing is both of instruction and cultivation are based on their experience.

Nevertheless,advices or comments from older friends can be distorted or just old-fashioned. After all, seldom can a statement definite correct in any period of time. Take my friend Jack's experience for example, he attended Cornell University last year and then were so unsatisfied with its poor location and waning reputation.It was his father who still lived in the glorious days of Cornell that persuaded him to choose Cornell and reject offers from the Ivy League. He felt so regretful not hearing opinion of his classmates, who currently know more informationabout American universities. Therefore, as situation always changes along with time passing away, elders’recommendations can be invalid and misguiding.

Moreover, it will be more convenient and comfortable for us to ask our peers such as classmates, roommates or just friends our age about certain questions. To be specific, just suppose there is only one teacher and several outstanding classmates in one class. If we want to know solutions to a certain mathematical problem, it is more like for us to get a quick and accurate answer from those classmates who are good at mathematics. However, if we try to find opportunity to consult the teacher, we have to wait until others finish, What’ more, as for some private issues such as spring vocation, preference of musics or movies, it is more comfortable for us to discuss with our peers who are more likely to have the same hobbies.

To sum up, considerable though benefits that consulting senior friends provides are, they cannot compete with asking peers for advices, when both effectiveness and efficiency are taken in account. From my point of views, these are two most crucial criteria for people who want suggestions to consider, and asking our friends of our age for suggestions is the best and fastest way.

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As teenagers grow up, there is increasingly notable controversy concerning whether they should get advices from older friends or friends of your-their own ages. Arguing for consulting senior friends are those people who hold the opinion that theyare more mature and have richer life experience. As far as I am concerned,people can acquire more beneficial points than weak ones if they ask their peersfor advices, when considering the suitability of advices and convenience.

To begin with, it is undeniable that people are capable to benefit from inquiringolder friends strikingly on an obvious aspect that they are more likely to haveplentiful life experience and therefore can bring forward more reasonable advices. In retrospect to our process of growth, those who teach us a lot abouthow to behave correctly are our parents. It is our teachers that instruct us how to acquire and accumulate both theoretical and practical knowledge. And the most important thing is both of instruction and cultivation are based on their experience.
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Nevertheless,advices or comments from older friends can be distorted or just old-fashioned. After all, seldom can a statement definite correct in any period of time--精辟. Take my friend Jack's experience for example, he attended Cornell University last year and then were-was so unsatisfied with its poor location and waning reputation.It was his father who still lived in the glorious days of Cornell that persuaded him to choose Cornell and reject offers from the Ivy League. He felt so regretful not hearing opinion of his classmates, who currently know more informationabout American universities. Therefore, as situation always changes along with time passing away, elders’recommendations can be invalid and misguiding.

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Moreover, it will be more convenient and comfortable for us to ask our peers such as classmates, roommates or just friends our age about certain questions可以去掉. To be specific, just suppose there is only one teacher and several outstanding classmates in one class. If we want to know solutions to a certain mathematical problem, it is more like for us to get a quick and accurate answer from those classmates who are good at mathematics. However, if we try to find opportunity to consult the teacher, we have to wait until others finish, What’ more, as for some private issues such as spring vocation, preference of musics or movies, it is more comfortable for us to discuss with our peers who are more likely to have the same hobbies.--LZ的例子个人似乎有点牵强,可以从同龄人所面临问题比较相似,因为建议更具有实用性等方面加强.
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To sum up, considerable though benefits that consulting senior friends provides are, they cannot compete with asking peers for advices, when both effectiveness and efficiency are taken in account. From my point of views, these are two most crucial criteria for people who want suggestions to consider, and asking our friends of our age for suggestions is the best and fastest way."Y e

总体感觉很不错,论证也比较充分,错误很少,像LZ学习啊~dY