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第一次限时写,写着写着就想换观点了，不过还是硬着头皮写下来了。自己也不满意，请使劲批。

agree or disagree that: University should let students learn at least one course of culture of a country rather than their own(2007.10.17)

For students, to learn another culture rather than their own is a good way to understand the world around them. However, it is not necessary to generalize such a education. Also, learning another culture will waste their time for some students: part of them are not be interested in other culture, inducing that they would pay attention in the cultural class; another part of them will not need and apply such information in their future that the time they spend on studying the information is useless for them.

To begin with, due to the disinterest, students may not take advantage of the class time to study efficiently. In other words, students might spend the time during the cultural class on doing other things, such as sleeping, playing game, reading fiction, and talking with other students. As a result of such actions, these students waste the time that they might spend on an interesting course to learn more efficiently.

On the other hand, not all people must know other cultures. On some occupations, people need to contact forein people. The conversational skill is pretty important for them. To understand forein customs is a good way to avoid being awkward. Also, on some other occupations, people work in their own country and have no any contact with forein people. Education about other cultures is also a waste because it teach useless knowledge to them. For instance, my uncle is a vet. He just works in a small town and deal with locals. His lack of knowledge of forein cultures did not inhibit his career. Now he is the best vet in the town.

In addtion, university students should have the ability of self-study. If they like foreign cultures or foreign cultures are meaningful for them, they also can study by themselves. There is no need for an university to set such a requirement.

All in all, the generalization for foreign cultures is unnecessary. But universities can set courses about foreign cultures optional for those students who want to learn.

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明天一定给你改，今天有点忙了

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o(h0LFor students, to learn another culture rather than their own is a good way to understand the world around them. However, it is not necessary to generalize such a(an) education. Also, learning another culture will waste their time (be a waste of time)for some students: part of them are not be(去掉be，你Be动词连用了) interested in other culture, inducing that they would pay attention in the cultural class(这句话没看懂什么意思，还有两套主谓); another part of them will not need and apply such information in their future that（你这个that是指带什么还是想起到连词的作用，没看出你这句是什么从句） the time they spend on studying the information is useless for them.

To begin with, due to the disinterest(有这个词么？), students may not take advantage of the class time to study efficiently. In other words, students might spend the time during the cultural class on doing other things, such as sleeping, playing game, reading fiction, and talking with other students. As a result of such actions, these students waste the time that they might spend on an interesting course to learn more efficiently.|

On the other hand(没有on the one hand，怎么会有这句话), not all people must know other cultures（not…must感觉怪怪的，能换个用法么？）. On some occupations, people need to contact forein（foreign, 后面的都错了） people. The conversational（communication） skill is pretty important for them. To understand forein customs is a good way to avoid being awkward. Also, on some other occupations, people work in their own country and have no any(去掉any) contact with forein people. Education about other cultures is also a waste because it teach （改成the knowledge）is useless knowledge to
(for) them. For instance, my uncle is a vet. He just works in a small town and deal with locals. His lack of knowledge of forein cultures did not inhibit his career. Now he is the best vet in the town.In addtion, university students should have the ability of self-study. If they like foreign cultures or foreign cultures are meaningful for them（有语病）, they also can study by themselves. There is no need for an(a) university to set such a requirement(courses).

All in all, the generalization for foreign cultures is unnecessary. But universities can set courses about foreign cultures optional (放到前面，optional course) for those students who want to learn.

是不是一限时就乱了阵脚，我这次也是第一篇限时，都快绝望了。
感觉lz仔细看一遍自己也能找出很多问题，我就是呀。

[ 本帖最后由 candicehe 于 2008-9-18 11:19 编辑 ]

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inducing that they would pay attention in the cultural class是分词独立结构，不过我少打了一个not在would后面，粗心了。

another part of them will not need and apply such information in their future that（你这个that是指带什么还是想起到连词的作用，没看出你这句是什么从句） the time they spend on studying the information is useless for them.这个that是such...that...结构，不知道用得对不对，感觉一般文章都不怎么用such...that...的。

on the other hand并不是一定要与on the one hand连用的。

dis‧in‧terest [uncountable]
1 a lack of interest
disinterest in
The exception to Balfour's disinterest in social issues was education.
2 when you are able to judge a situation fairly because you are not involved in it

这篇确实写得太差了，shame on myself.