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kathyfei2007UID: 2436983

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题目:In today's society, to speak well is better than to write well. Agree or disagree.
In today's society, the most instant comunication way is speaking. People usally exchange their ideas by speaking more than writing. So, in my point of view, it is better to speak well than write well for normal people. We have to improve our ability of speaking in daily life to help us have sucessful studies,careers and lives.

To begin with, it is more important to have a strong ability of speaking in doing business. People who are businessmen often talk to persuade others to buy their products. People have to introduce their products to others face to face instead of just giving their customs a piece of  paper of introduction. For, people cannot be attracted by the printed advertisements. Instead, people are more interested on active speaking advertisements. In this way, the businessmen have to improve their ability of speaking in order to sell their products sucessfully.

Another point, people doing more researches, get more useful information by talking to others rather than writing. Nowadays, more and more professors go around their countries or even the world to public their latest research. If the professor are lack the ability in making a speech, there may be fewer people who understand his ideas and interest his research. In this way, the professor can not communicate with other experts about his research very well. And also speaking ability is very useful for students to study well. For example, some of the chinese students cannot be active in class when they go to study in a foreign country, because they cannot speaking the foreign language very fluently. So they may lose more chances to improve themselves in their study. They cannot exchange their ideas well with other students or teachers.

In conclusion, in order to study well, do business successfully, or get more information, people should improve their ability of speaking rather than writing.

tarayzUID: 2465688

首先 感觉字数有点少(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……
In today's society, the most ordinary communicational (如果你是想说最普遍的交流方式是讲话) instant comunication way is speaking. People usally usually exchange their ideas by speaking more than but not writing. So, in frome my point of view, it is better to speak well than write writing well for normal people. In order to have successful studies and lives, We we have to improve our ability of speaking in daily life to help us have sucessful studies,careers and lives.

To begin with, it is more important to have a strong ability of speaking in doing business fields. People who are businessmen Businessmen often talk to persuade others to buy their products by their speeches. People have to prefer to introduce their products to others face to face instead of just giving their customs customers a piece of  paper of introduction. For, people People cannot be attracted by the printed advertisements. Instead, people are but more interested on in active speaking advertisements. In this way, the businessmen have to improve their ability of speaking in order to sell their products sucessfully.successfully. bbs.gter.netF.]-d t7t[1]}L举得这个例子感觉很好， 比我想的好，但是感觉应该在充分说明下，补充下人们为什么不喜欢纸质广告对比 感觉更好点
Another pointIn  In , In addition, people doing more researches, and getgetting more useful information through by talking to others rather than writing. Nowadays, more and more professors go around their countries or even the world to public their latest research. If the professor are lacks the ability in making a speech, there may be fewer people who understand his ideas and interest in his research. In this way, the professor can not communicate with other experts about his research very well. And also speaking ability is very useful for students to study well. For example, some of the chinese Because of lacking the ability of speaking fluently, Chinese students cannot be active one in class when they go to study in a foreign country,. because they cannot speaking the foreign language very fluently. So they They may lose more chances to improve themselves in their study.their studies. They cannot exchange their ideas well with other students or teachers.(加个这段的总结吧，感觉比较完整)


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O(∩_∩)o…  本人水平有限 只能提这些问题了。
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