COMEON作文小组——jiwasun 2008 10月30日作业

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Agree or disagree: advertisements are a waste of a company's money and time because consumers have known what they want to buy.

With the rapid development of economy, companies have put a large number of money and time on advertising to survive in the fiercely competed market. However, a essay written by a local reviewer hold the opinion that since the general consumers have been aware of what they want to buy, advertisements are becoming a waste of money and time. I quite do not agree with him, and reasons supporting my side are listed as below.

First, although people have known what they want to buy, they really have not known which one produced by particular company when they are right standing at the shelves in the supermarket. Economy's fantastic prosperous state has made it possible for numerous companies to be set up hunting for the profit by manufacturing products of all kinds in all aspects of our daily life. No matter how trivial the stuff is, it is impossible for merely one company producing it. Any individual will get confused at which one to buy. Advertisement exercise its influence on the consumers will come to effect at the very time. Take purchase of a tooth paste as example, the choice is among Crest, Colgate,Cnice and so on so forth. The customers will simply make a decision to the one who has done the best advertisement.

Second, the great number of money and time which is spent on the advertisements is never a waste, since it is definitely worthy of. Widely accepted, profit to company is as significant as food and water to our lives. Therefore, companies had to achieve the most profit to the best of their ability. Advertisements are certainly one of the excellent venues for benefit. A survey by Newsweek last  month which interviewed more than a hundred expert specialized in economic estimated that nearly eighty percent chose advertisement as one of the most indispensable methods in the inprovement of company selling; moreover, through the history of five hundred fortune, it has emphasized the advertisement as one of the most effective way in improving the profit of the corporation. At the same time, nearly ninety-three percent acknowledged that a company without any advertisement is an unfortunate victim of the market which is fairly fill of competence.

Finally, the tremendously sum of money and time which is put on the advertisements is well worthy. In addition, advertisements will still play an significant role in our economic and our daily life.

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小弟水平有限，有很多没有见过的搭配，不敢乱改。
改了前面一部分，如果有错误，lz不要建议～

With the rapid development of economy, companies have put a large number(sum) of money and time on advertising to survive in the fiercely competed(competitive) market. However, a(an) essay written by a local reviewer hold the opinion that since the general consumers have been aware of what they want to buy, advertisements are becoming a waste of money and time. But,I quite do not agree with him, and reasons supporting my side are listed as below.
First, although people have known what they want to buy, they really have not known which one produced by particular company when they are right standing at the shelves in the supermarket.(这个句子比较冗长，从句可以适当简化一点，eg.which one standing at the shelves is worth to buy) Economy's fantastic prosperous state has made it possible for numerous companies to be set up hunting for the profit by manufacturing products of all kinds in all aspects of our daily life. No matter how trivial（请楼主解释一下trivial这个词在这里是什么意思，用法出自哪里） the stuff is, it is impossible for merely one company producing it. Any individual will get confused at which one to buy. Advertisement exercise its influence on the consumers will come to effect at the very time. (对这些搭配和活用不了解)Take purchase of a tooth paste as example, the choice is among Crest, Colgate,Cnice and so on so forth. The customers will simply make a decision to the one who has done the best advertisement.

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trivial: not serious, important, or valuable
我要表达琐碎的意思
用法出处不清楚